Sup Ranger, lol I also need coffee rn. Advice for a writer? Well, honestly you are already great. But if yur planning on making another story? Take a lot of time to think about it. That’s my best advice. The Obelisk was not something I thought enough about, so now I’m kind of stuck with a story that’s first half is pretty cringe and resulted in a few plot holes. My future stories, however, (Can’t wait to write Pandora, Clans and See rahh) I had time to think about.

Listen to music, take inspiration from other books and movies, and add some creativity. Once yur imagining scenes in yur head, grab some character personality ideas and fill in the gaps! If it fella empty, add things. If it feels too full, slow down a bit of the plot and remove some unneeded things.

Romance, death, twists and turns are great to keep readers in! Hope this helps at all lmao, just some of the firsthand bits my teenage self uses. Bye!

—Moonflight