Heroes of pandora

-Prologue, rewrite-

A dark brown mesopithicus was walking through the forest when he noticed something, it was a small chest, inside he found a tattered page it read;

“This is the amazing tale of tribe Olympus. our great leader king drake the strong, led us through the horrors of the island we called, pandora, we slayed the largest of beasts, tamed the great carnivores of the plains and jungles, built our great fortress; Fort Olympia! We had the entire island in our grasp! But then… our researchers found something deep in a cavern, it was some sort of high-tech relic, over time we found others, then the researchers discovered the relics acted differently the closer they were to the obelisks, so after years of research we finally figured out how to activate the obelisk and what lied beyond the portal was terrible, a ginormous arachnid with acid spit and glaives for legs, we called it the broodmother. our king, with his mighty spear in hand made from one of the relics, slayed the great beast with ease, then we came to the blue obelisk, and conquered its gaurdian as well. we now as I’m writing this tale embark to the final obelisk to claim glory! i for one am certain we shall prevail AND OUR KING THE GRE- “what a load of rubbish” said Caesar. he threw the parchment away and walked into the forest “‘glory’ he says.” he said walking away “hah, good riddance.”

The Pandora chronicles are almost a year old! (As of march) so I thought remaking the first 3-4 chapters was a good idea as they totally sucked.. -wyvernian