Wow Ranger, the prologue and first Chapter were so good! Very suspenseful.

Im glad that you would tell us your backstory. I almost died when I was born too. One of the doctors was an idiot and almost cut my head open during the C-section. I find it awesome, though, knowing that I’m a survivor and I was a tough one to get out of there.

I have a brother, and BOY can he be annoying as heck. Ah, whatever, I love him anyways. He probably finds me evil a lot of the time.

It’s cool to know you base your character off of yourself, I’ve done that sometimes too with my characters in the Obelisk. I usually just stick a little bit of me in them and then build up the rest.

Your story has so much potential! I can’t wait for more!

P.S. Queen Scarlet is one of my favorite villains. I like to tell people that it’s OK to love and hate her at the same time. Cause I sure do, man. I sure do.

Oh, and did you read my most recent chapters, 59 and 60, of The Obelisk? I’d love to know what you think about the characters I mentioned!

—Moon 😋