While I’m not sure about the whole, “give me 50 likes and I’ll write a story,” thing, you do you, Ranger.

This sounds like a great fanfic. Can’t wait to see what map it’ll be on.

As for suggestions on the story, I suppose to make it a bit real for the readers, if there is ever other characters, someone with health problems and/or differences are always something to try at. It helps the reader relate to the character and know that everyone has their strengths and weaknesses. I’m planning on adding a few characters myself like this. (Blind, autistic, scarred, I’m still thinking about which one.)

Also, a girl for him is always gonna get the readers interested! Especially if you really know how to write out the effects of love. It’s different for everyone, so remember to keep the same genre for him and her if you decide you want any romance in yur story at all.

That’s pretty much it, can’t wait to read it when it comes out.

—Moon