Oh I’m sorry SpecialRaptor, I don’t know why someone would down it! Yur really good at writing, better than I was when I first started!

Oh, and sorry I didn’t mean for these *** to be paragraphs, I was just showing you different examples for spacing. *** means the scene is completely changing to a different perspective or time. Paragraphs are just simple spaces at the beginning of a new sentence, or specifically, quote. It’s so what people are saying don’t get jumbled up and you know who’s saying what.

Anyways, just wanted to tell you I upped yur story, sorry someone downed it. You really are great!

—Moon