Moon here.

SpecialRaptor, I haven’t read all of your stories, but by the ones I have read, I can tell that you are an amazing Fanfictionist! I respect all writers on Dododex who really use their imagination, whether or not the writing is proper. Jointed Mysteries is really good so far! I’m glad you enjoy my stories; I work really hard on them.

While yes, writing can be hard, I have a few tips on making yur story even more loved just by the type of writing style.

1: Paragraphs. This is a major need for stories so nothing gets confused.

Like this!

You just add a few spaces at the beginning of a new subject and/or scene or quote.

2: “Speech.” I’ve noticed you don’t quite do them perfectly, but that is fine!

“This is one example. And—“ if I’m interrupted, make sure the quotation mark is there to show it. “Ta-da!”

3: Detail. When bad things happen,

You

Can

Do

This

If it’s really emotional, to make the readers fell worse. Also Capitals help for the names of creatures, even if it’s just Dodo or Tyrannosaurus rex.

Second example:

But

That

Did not

HAPPEN.

Yeah, anyways, that’s all I wanted to say!

I love yur stories characters btw!