Apex predator person...get used to your name, you'll probably look for a better one, but just stick with the original one. I've been looking for a better name for weeks π.
Good story! I have a tip:
Use more dialogue, because it helps develop the characters a bit.
You may or may not know me, but I help found the fanfiction community in DodΓΈdex, it was just me and Seasnake for a long time...
-DTG
Open the Dododex app on iOS or Android, select a creature, and go to Tips > Submit Tip.
Here's a memorable and true story!:
Once, I made an army of Dodos, Dilos, and the giant Turtle guys. I was a noob and had a thatch hut on the beach. One day, I saw one of these coming towards my base, and thought…
Dodo tales (S1 Ep2)
Like for more, BTW Ep1 was in the snail thingy section. Anyway.....
The next few minutes went by in a flash. He walked up to find out what had made the noise, and saw a very dangerous looking…
Dodo tales (Ep8 S1)
Don't worry about the guy who's comment you keep disliking, I DON'T take what he says as an insult.
Jerry woke up and immediately felt pain in every part of his body. He moaned on the floor…
Update: I found Perry. I came back to get more metal, and he just came out of the water. Little did he know he had already been replaced π.
Dodo tales (Ep10 S1) we've reached episode 10! This is a big milestone for me. Also don't forget to check the Crystal Wyvern section, because a Yuty's quest person just started writing there.
Jerry turned around to…
One day in Aberration, I brought this guy on a trip to get metal. As I was looking for metal, Perry (my paraceratherium) disappeared, like for real. One moment I looked back and he wasn't there. I was really upset…
Dodo tales (s1 ep3) thank you for the support π BTW I am -NOT- the same person as the guy making journey to the Aberration trench.
The other creatures ran off one by one, and he heard a voice say "those…
Dodo tales (Ep9 S1) did anyone expect what happened in Ep8? It was pretty dark, but important for the story.
When Rick fell asleep (which took like 2 minutes) Jerry ran out of the house, And started walking, well it…
Dodo tales (s1 ep4) the last few episodes are In the snail thing, allosaurus, and ammonite sections.
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Eventually they came to a large house of mostly stone in the middle of the forest.
"Well, this is it"…
Dodo Tales (S1 Ep27) The Season Finale
Jerry fell to his knees and cried. He had watched that same sun go down last night with Eden. Rick held his wound and Ares patted Jerry on the back "listen" he said…
Dodo Tales (S1 Ep10.5) behind the scenes π€«
Rick wakes up. "Where's Bob- I mean, Jerry"
*CUT*
Rick wakes up. "WHERE'S JERRY!?!?!?! What do you mean that was too loud?"
*CUT*
*Jerry…
Dodo Tales (Ep25 S1)
Jerry looked back, and tried to get the bola off of Eden, but to no avail. The man came closer and Jerry asked "who are you?"
He lifted his pike to finish Eden, but Jerry pushed him…
Dodo Tales (S2 (Ep13)
"All I need to fight now is the brood mother and then the overseer" said sergeant.
"Then what?" Said Jerry
"Well I suppose that I'll go home, Or at least get my…
Dodo tales (S1 Ep5)
Thanks for being patient, I was waiting for name suggestions.
Final names:
Main Character:Jerry
Secondary main Character:Rick
Jerry (the main character) wanted to get off those pillars more…
Dodo Tales (Ep23 S1) crystal lands person, i love your series, (I haven't read wings of Fire, so I don't get the references) you inspired me, even though my stories are very different.
"I want to go home! I…
