Ben,.. can you try to not sound so full of yourself.. like cmon man, I know you probably aren’t trying to but how you talk makes it sound like you think everyone should treat you like a king because your the center of the universe.

Or you do think that.. in which case…. Uh.

Oh ps: in the future you may want to shorten your chapters that chapter was so long I didn’t even read the entire thing

No hard feelings or anything just trying to give a little constructive criticism

-Wyvernain