Ben and the crossover counsel, ya I though the scream for…
Ben and the crossover counsel, ya I though the scream for Samuel was a bit off but tbf you said it was chapter 26 Samuel so heโs still a bit fresh to ark stuff and the island doesnโt have any of the creatures he saw, and Samuel didnโt as much scream as like little girl scream more like shocked scream, I donโt care how desensitized to danger I was Iโd be scared of those four. But ya hopefully I can write better for him later I knew it felt a bit off. also they hid after Darkhide literally suggested eating them, they heard. also nobody write anything about Drain waking up out of his trance, I have a plan for it itโll be in my chapter uhh, 10? Just have the other characters question why they have a giant bat who snapped ๐ and ya super freakin mad about forgetting the chapter title ๐ก๐
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-Wyvernain