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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Rathalos (S2 Ep: prologue)
“I’ve completed the research sir. With this data, we can transform dinos! You can now experience the simplicity of taming a dodo and the thrill of riding a giga!” A voice exclaimed from behind a computer. “Magnificent, Riley. But... what if... instead of transforming the dinos... we just made... new ones?”
Hey Break-It, long time no see!!!! It’s great to see you back!!!! And I gotta agree, filler stinks when trying to add it into a story. Kinda going through the same thing with my story.
Rockdrake Lover, glad you didn’t see it as rude. I’m constantly afraid that I sound rude when I don’t mean to be.
Also everyone, if you haven’t already, please go to SurviveTheArks.com, go to the Creature Submission Forum, filter by Most Votes, go to the Second Page and find Tarchia and Paleopanthera and vote for them(this is a reason why I haven’t been active as of recently). Me, Wyvernian and some of the others like Moon and Ben here worked really hard on these designs and we are doing so good with this creature vote and we hope to keep on doing better this time. You will need an account on the website, but it’s really easy and noninvasive.
Well back into the abyss I go!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
To: Break-it, RelatingHen8906
From: Ben
Break-it, Chapter 28 (i think it should be 27) was really fun, I enjoyed the vibe of Tohigh and it was a nice break from the action. It was cool to see how the towns and civilizations of the ARK seemed to have created a currency system and engage in such purchasing and selling with it. Im interested to see how people exactly earn money in this world. Im also interested to see how they obtain the rest of the artifacts, but something tells me it wont be easy. Anyway, I liked the chapter, I’ll be around for 28!
RelatingHen, the rest of the ARKtic Memories / Scorched Earth arc being finished was great, so that concludes the fact Jerboa is somewhere on The Island. The Feathered Giga attack was also cool, im assuming thats part of a mod? I also liked the detail that non-native creatures cannot transfer over to other ARKs, which serves as a good continuity detail for why the C Tribe doesnt have such creatures on the Island. I also liked the Manticore boss fight and it was much better done than the Island boss fights, the shorter yet more memorable fights are a step in the right direction. Also now we do know Rod has bad intentions so Im assuming him and perhaps that Dread he mentioned a while back will be antags for Aberration (though that Rock Death Tribe or whatever it was called may also be an issue). The reappearance of Gitez was also pretty sweet, just to wrap everyones stories up in a nice bow. I also thought Sodden getting incinerated in the surface was pretty funny, and them being separated opens new possibilities for more characters and side plots.
As for the others teasing Sodden and Serenity’s “romantic chemistry”, I thought that was pretty silly / funny. Although I dont see it (if anything, ironically, Dorack and Nal seem to have more of a connection) happening, it could be possible in the future? I just havent seen much between either nor any sort of “feelings”. Serenity seems to care about Sodden because he’s helping her be free from C Tribe, whilst Sodden seems to care about Serenity because of his sense of justice and heroic nature. I think there needs to be more build up between the two before they could ever become a thing. Such light teasing about love is something I find humorous, and it doesnt have to lead into anything. I’ve grown out of my taste for romance, but I find it fun from time to time. Ik you said something about how there wont be much romance stuff, but just put this here anyway.
Ello mates! One who reads here, I need names for the three main characters of my story, a female juvi yutyrannus ( smart and
Calm ) a male juvi andrewsarchus, ( strong and angry )a male juvi basilisk ( smart and the prophecy loving one ) and a juvi sinomacrops ( agile )
-the one who reads
The Red Pike
Walkers story part nine.
By Jedi
Walker sat on the deck of Siyu's house, and was teaching Bandito tricks. He had gotten really good at stealing, but too good. One he went on a hunting trip just to. Come home and realize that Bandito had stolen all his meet. Siyu was practicing with his sword, hacking a straw dummy to pieces. Harvey was gathering herbs. He then looked up. " What the heck is that." He looked forward, to see a huge cloud of dust, racing towards the forest and towards them. He looked with a eyeglass and saw it was a army of tames. " Nerva." Siyu said. " No. They don't hear the flag of the Red Leigon." In the front, a woman sat atop a Galli and ran towards them at full speed. " think they'll go around us?" Walker said. " No, they won't." Siyu said. They had about five minutes before they reached them, and during this time they chopped down trees to use as cover. He grabbed a Automatic Rifle and offered it to Siyu. " I still you still don't like guns?" Walker said. Siyu just knocked an arrow and drew his bow. The Galli had now drawn to the back. Whoever was riding wanted the tames to do her dirty work. Christopher let out a spray of bullets. Siyu launched a volley of arrows. While Christopher's bullets mostly hit trees and the ground, Siyu's arrows each landed in a enemies flesh. Pretty soon, a good chunk of the army was gone. The Galli was now headed straight for them. Siyu shot it in the chest with a arrow, and Walker slashed across its ankle. It fell to the ground and skidded by them, injured, not dead. The woman fell to the ground. Ok pointed his bow at her, but she just whistled. A roar echoed through the forest. Coming at them, was a Giga. Walker whistled for his own giga, and the two fought, while Siyu and Walker took on the mystery assailant. In the end, both of the Gigas wore each other out, and they both collapsed from exhaustion. Siyu pointed his bow at her, once again. " Who are you?" He asked. " What's it to you?" She replied. " Speak." He said and drew his bow back farther. " Ok, ok." She said. " Tyrana." " Good, now give me one good reason I should let you live?" "Simple. I know Nerva's weakness."
The Red Pike
Goliaths story
Chapter 7
Goliath staggered to his feet, he was aching all over and the pain from his wounds was unbearable. He travelled back to the Redwoods, knowing it was finally time. He located the Red Peak in the redwoods and climbed to the top of it. Once he was at the top, he limped into a huge cave, ready to face what lay within...
After travelling through the cave for a while, Goliath began to wonder which part of the island he was underneath, eventually, he found a massive chamber. In the centre was a huge, flat rock with a map of the island carved into it. Next to it was what looked like a giant torch, he lifted it up and illuminated the room with its flames. In front of him was a massive suit of shining, silver armour and a giant axe. Goliath lifted up the axe, he then decided to test the axes strength by striking the armour with it, the axe bounced right off, proving the armours strength. He put on the armour and lifted the axe. Now all he needed was a way out. He saw a giant door next to him, Goliath couldn’t help wondering what this place was as he walked to the door, and then he opened the door and walked out, he was near Far’s Peak, the pain was gone, and he was ready for revenge...
The Red Pike
Red’s story, part 9
They had traveled to the other cave, after countless hours of swimming.
“I think we’ve made it.” Red said. The mosasaurs and sharks had been quiet, and only replied when told to do something.
“We might need to fight our way here, I think I remember seeing something of the sea emperors here.” Bruce said. Once everyone entered the cave, sharks swam away from them, going to alert the others. Luckily the wounds they got from the last battle had healed, and now they were ready to fight. Two mosasaurs came to the front, but the sharks had swarmed them both, quickly killing them. They progressed further, killing everything in their path, until they got to the very end where only one squid remained.
“We suffered heavy casualties last battle, you might not have realized it, but now it’s the end of the sea emperors.” The squid said.
“Join us or die here.” Red said. The squid thought about for a second, then replied accepting to join them.
“My name is tentacles.” The squid said.
“We need to find the artifact here.” Red said.
“I have it.” Tentacles said. Tentacles handed the artifact to one of red’s tentacles, where she kept it hidden on one of her tentacles. Now they just needed to defeat The Red Legion, but not let them get the artifacts they had retrieved, to stop them from getting any artifacts.
The Red Pike
Red’s story, part 8
The group were at their old base, kelp cave. They decided to explore it a bit more, and this time they had found a hidden room with a strange, orange glow.
“What could it be?” Red asked curiously.
“I’ve seen a few survivors in the ocean with these, they call them ‘Artifacts’ and I overheard a conversation with two of them, saying they could fight huge creatures with their rexes and theris.” Bruce said.
“We should take it before the humans can!” Red exclaimed as she grabbed it.
“Very well then, I heard there was another one in another cave.” Bruce said.
“We need to investigate there too, see if we can also get the artifact.” Red said.
The Red Pike
Nerva’s story part ten
By Red Dragon
They scoured the redwoods for two days, when at last one soldier reported finding Goliath. Argentavis were circling him, and he was on the ground, dying. He had wounds on his chest and face. Nerva’s soldiers shot the Argentavis out of the air with ease. Nerva walked up to Goliath’s head. If something is more powerful than Goliath than, well, why would he need Goliath? He ordered many of his troops to remain here and search for the other creature. He had some other things to do. He got an Itchthyosornis letter from a soldier named Sarah Smith. She was the only survivor of when Tyrana escaped.
The Red Pike
Goliaths Story
Chapter 6 (I think)
Goliath turned to face his enemy, a gigantic dinosaur resembling a giga, but with antlers, glowing red eyes and long arms like a therezinos. The dinos name was Ghidorasaurus (a reference to the name of Godzilla’s worst enemy, King Ghidorah). Goliath roared and pounded the ground with his club as Ghidorasaurus approached him slowly. The two faced each over for a whole minute, examining every feature on the others body, trying to find a weak spot. Eventually Goliath identified one, but Ghidorasaurus had as well. Goliath charged at Ghidorasaurus (Ghidora from now on) and swung his club at the dinosaurs head, but it grabbed the club in its jaws and wrenched it out of his hands. Goliath knew this wasn’t going well, then, Ghidora went for his neck, biting onto it with his jagged teeth and drawing blood. Goliath groaned in pain and blood began to bubble out of his mouth. The ferocious creature clawed at Goliaths chest, staining it with blood, then it tugged with its jaws, tearing open Goliaths throat. Blood gushed out of the wound and Goliath collapsed to the ground. Ghidora walked away victoriously as Goliath lay, bleeding on the ground, slowly dying...
The next day...
Goliath lay on the ground, his fur matted and covered in blood, with a huge gash in his throat. Goliath was hardly breathing, and argentavis were starting to circle his dying body. Goliath was nearly dead...
The Red Pike
Walkers story part Eight
By Jedi
Walker stood in the forest. The trees were wreathed in flames. Fire climbed the vines. Siyu and Nerva we're in a clearing, fighting. Siyu was losing, so Walker ran to help. But the ground became sticky, and pulled at his feet so he couldn't move. He called Siyu's name, but his voice made no sound. He drew his bow, but it crumbled to ashes in his hand. Nerva's like shot through his gut, and Li fell to the floor. Then the ground began to crack, and then fell away completely. He fell to another layer and looked up. Nerva was there, his like raised for the death blow. But then he dissipated like sand in the wind. Then Helena, his siter, stood above him. " You must stop this from happening." She said. He woke up in Siyu's house. No fires, no nothing. The cook sat next to him, making some know of medicine.He was covered head to toe in bandages. Siyu stood in the corner, watching the cook work. Christopher sat up with a groan. " Good, your alive" Li said. " We have business to discuss." The cook ran to him. " he just had a nearly fatal encounter! He needs his rest!" But Li shoved him aside. " out of the way, Harvey. We need to prep for war."
DUN DUN DUH.
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