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The Red Pike
Walkers story part nine.
By Jedi
Walker sat on the deck of Siyu's house, and was teaching Bandito tricks. He had gotten really good at stealing, but too good. One he went on a hunting trip just to. Come home and realize that Bandito had stolen all his meet. Siyu was practicing with his sword, hacking a straw dummy to pieces. Harvey was gathering herbs. He then looked up. " What the heck is that." He looked forward, to see a huge cloud of dust, racing towards the forest and towards them. He looked with a eyeglass and saw it was a army of tames. " Nerva." Siyu said. " No. They don't hear the flag of the Red Leigon." In the front, a woman sat atop a Galli and ran towards them at full speed. " think they'll go around us?" Walker said. " No, they won't." Siyu said. They had about five minutes before they reached them, and during this time they chopped down trees to use as cover. He grabbed a Automatic Rifle and offered it to Siyu. " I still you still don't like guns?" Walker said. Siyu just knocked an arrow and drew his bow. The Galli had now drawn to the back. Whoever was riding wanted the tames to do her dirty work. Christopher let out a spray of bullets. Siyu launched a volley of arrows. While Christopher's bullets mostly hit trees and the ground, Siyu's arrows each landed in a enemies flesh. Pretty soon, a good chunk of the army was gone. The Galli was now headed straight for them. Siyu shot it in the chest with a arrow, and Walker slashed across its ankle. It fell to the ground and skidded by them, injured, not dead. The woman fell to the ground. Ok pointed his bow at her, but she just whistled. A roar echoed through the forest. Coming at them, was a Giga. Walker whistled for his own giga, and the two fought, while Siyu and Walker took on the mystery assailant. In the end, both of the Gigas wore each other out, and they both collapsed from exhaustion. Siyu pointed his bow at her, once again. " Who are you?" He asked. " What's it to you?" She replied. " Speak." He said and drew his bow back farther. " Ok, ok." She said. " Tyrana." " Good, now give me one good reason I should let you live?" "Simple. I know Nerva's weakness."
The Red Pike
Goliaths story
Chapter 7
Goliath staggered to his feet, he was aching all over and the pain from his wounds was unbearable. He travelled back to the Redwoods, knowing it was finally time. He located the Red Peak in the redwoods and climbed to the top of it. Once he was at the top, he limped into a huge cave, ready to face what lay within...
After travelling through the cave for a while, Goliath began to wonder which part of the island he was underneath, eventually, he found a massive chamber. In the centre was a huge, flat rock with a map of the island carved into it. Next to it was what looked like a giant torch, he lifted it up and illuminated the room with its flames. In front of him was a massive suit of shining, silver armour and a giant axe. Goliath lifted up the axe, he then decided to test the axes strength by striking the armour with it, the axe bounced right off, proving the armours strength. He put on the armour and lifted the axe. Now all he needed was a way out. He saw a giant door next to him, Goliath couldn’t help wondering what this place was as he walked to the door, and then he opened the door and walked out, he was near Far’s Peak, the pain was gone, and he was ready for revenge...
The Red Pike
Red’s story, part 9
They had traveled to the other cave, after countless hours of swimming.
“I think we’ve made it.” Red said. The mosasaurs and sharks had been quiet, and only replied when told to do something.
“We might need to fight our way here, I think I remember seeing something of the sea emperors here.” Bruce said. Once everyone entered the cave, sharks swam away from them, going to alert the others. Luckily the wounds they got from the last battle had healed, and now they were ready to fight. Two mosasaurs came to the front, but the sharks had swarmed them both, quickly killing them. They progressed further, killing everything in their path, until they got to the very end where only one squid remained.
“We suffered heavy casualties last battle, you might not have realized it, but now it’s the end of the sea emperors.” The squid said.
“Join us or die here.” Red said. The squid thought about for a second, then replied accepting to join them.
“My name is tentacles.” The squid said.
“We need to find the artifact here.” Red said.
“I have it.” Tentacles said. Tentacles handed the artifact to one of red’s tentacles, where she kept it hidden on one of her tentacles. Now they just needed to defeat The Red Legion, but not let them get the artifacts they had retrieved, to stop them from getting any artifacts.
The Red Pike
Red’s story, part 8
The group were at their old base, kelp cave. They decided to explore it a bit more, and this time they had found a hidden room with a strange, orange glow.
“What could it be?” Red asked curiously.
“I’ve seen a few survivors in the ocean with these, they call them ‘Artifacts’ and I overheard a conversation with two of them, saying they could fight huge creatures with their rexes and theris.” Bruce said.
“We should take it before the humans can!” Red exclaimed as she grabbed it.
“Very well then, I heard there was another one in another cave.” Bruce said.
“We need to investigate there too, see if we can also get the artifact.” Red said.
The Red Pike
Nerva’s story part ten
By Red Dragon
They scoured the redwoods for two days, when at last one soldier reported finding Goliath. Argentavis were circling him, and he was on the ground, dying. He had wounds on his chest and face. Nerva’s soldiers shot the Argentavis out of the air with ease. Nerva walked up to Goliath’s head. If something is more powerful than Goliath than, well, why would he need Goliath? He ordered many of his troops to remain here and search for the other creature. He had some other things to do. He got an Itchthyosornis letter from a soldier named Sarah Smith. She was the only survivor of when Tyrana escaped.
The Red Pike
Goliaths Story
Chapter 6 (I think)
Goliath turned to face his enemy, a gigantic dinosaur resembling a giga, but with antlers, glowing red eyes and long arms like a therezinos. The dinos name was Ghidorasaurus (a reference to the name of Godzilla’s worst enemy, King Ghidorah). Goliath roared and pounded the ground with his club as Ghidorasaurus approached him slowly. The two faced each over for a whole minute, examining every feature on the others body, trying to find a weak spot. Eventually Goliath identified one, but Ghidorasaurus had as well. Goliath charged at Ghidorasaurus (Ghidora from now on) and swung his club at the dinosaurs head, but it grabbed the club in its jaws and wrenched it out of his hands. Goliath knew this wasn’t going well, then, Ghidora went for his neck, biting onto it with his jagged teeth and drawing blood. Goliath groaned in pain and blood began to bubble out of his mouth. The ferocious creature clawed at Goliaths chest, staining it with blood, then it tugged with its jaws, tearing open Goliaths throat. Blood gushed out of the wound and Goliath collapsed to the ground. Ghidora walked away victoriously as Goliath lay, bleeding on the ground, slowly dying...
The next day...
Goliath lay on the ground, his fur matted and covered in blood, with a huge gash in his throat. Goliath was hardly breathing, and argentavis were starting to circle his dying body. Goliath was nearly dead...
The Red Pike
Walkers story part Eight
By Jedi
Walker stood in the forest. The trees were wreathed in flames. Fire climbed the vines. Siyu and Nerva we're in a clearing, fighting. Siyu was losing, so Walker ran to help. But the ground became sticky, and pulled at his feet so he couldn't move. He called Siyu's name, but his voice made no sound. He drew his bow, but it crumbled to ashes in his hand. Nerva's like shot through his gut, and Li fell to the floor. Then the ground began to crack, and then fell away completely. He fell to another layer and looked up. Nerva was there, his like raised for the death blow. But then he dissipated like sand in the wind. Then Helena, his siter, stood above him. " You must stop this from happening." She said. He woke up in Siyu's house. No fires, no nothing. The cook sat next to him, making some know of medicine.He was covered head to toe in bandages. Siyu stood in the corner, watching the cook work. Christopher sat up with a groan. " Good, your alive" Li said. " We have business to discuss." The cook ran to him. " he just had a nearly fatal encounter! He needs his rest!" But Li shoved him aside. " out of the way, Harvey. We need to prep for war."
DUN DUN DUH.
Rockdrake Lover, alright, sorry if my message seemed rude. I just had my last straw with Megaraptorids getting called raptors. Also have you got to play ASS yet?
SpecialRaptor, glad to see you!! We definitely missed having ya!!!!
Aston, I am currently working on reading KOTW!!! I’ll probably catch up later today and let you know what my thoughts are!!!!
Sylveevee, I need to read your chapter here next too!!! Sorry, meant to earlier!!!!
Alright, fading away for a time!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
To: WolfOfTheIsland
From: Ben
Hello WolfOfTheIsland! Welcome to Achatina! Pleased to meet you. Yes, you can write here and show us your work, though I don't recommend posting it in the Achatina section itself; it's already quite packed in here. It's difficult to see tips from other fellow writers immediately, so I'd suggest using the Dododex Stories website to view new tips / stories and the app to post tips / stories. Just make sure to filter to New and refresh to get everything up to date. If you want to read stories, drop down the genres you like, and what POV you enjoy reading most (eg: Human or Creature) and we'll find some good suggestions. Also cool, you use other sites too! What did you post on before? Anyway, that's all, seeya!
Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen of Achatina, this is your Ark Community News.
Last night Wildcard released their latest update on the roadmap for ASA. Revealing that they are delaying the UE5.5 update for another month or so to fix some of the major bugs they have been dealing with while working with it. They have given a very rough and somewhat wide estimate to expect it on. With the dates they announced giving us at the earliest being April 15th with the latest being May 15th.
Wildcard had also sadly announced that they will be delaying the Ragnarok release date until June 2nd, the tenth anniversary of Ark. The explanation for this was due to what they were using to make Ragnarok. The UE5.5, making this map be the first to be worked on in UE5.5 with Lost Colony and Valguero being the next upcoming maps to do so as well.
The UE 5.5 update stated by Wildcard will allow you to select and download specific maps you want, improving performance and allowing weaker devices to run ASA or to run ASA better. Specifically GeForce 1080-level cards, on systems that have 16 GB of RAM. Lastly the new update will add new features for Ark Modders to better use the Dev Kit.
Welcome back Moon!!!! Glad to hear you did another Chapter!!!!!(BTW It’s Awesome!!!! Also Why did I see Rust doing that!?!). I am doing good, Read both Wyvernians’ and Readers’ stories until I was caught up on them. Been writing a lot into the rough draft of my story, also contemplating on doing a side story of Journey that would be a what if story that would not be apart of Journey but instead just be a fun and interesting short stories with the characters. Other than that, nothing happened. Anyway Loved the new Chapter Moon!!! Can’t wait to read the next one Moon!!! Until Next Time!!!
-Apex
The Red Pike
Nerva’s Story
Part five
Nerva and his men approached the creature. The village was smoldering, and Nerva’s soldiers were worried. They approached the creature. The best way to describe it was a giant koala, but it looked savage. It also had armor and a weapon, but they were crude. Nerva commanded his men to shoot at it with their rifles, but it brushed aside the bullets, and smashed soldiers with its club. In the end, all of Nerva’s soldiers, were dead, except for Nerva himself. He looked straight into the creature’s eyes, and took out his pike. The creature roared at him, but Nerva stood his ground, bloody, bruised, and battered. He stabbed the creature right in its right eye, and partially blinded it. It roared in pain. Both of them limped away into the forest in opposite directions, knowing this wouldn’t be the last they saw of each other. Nerva was stranded in the same forest as Goliath, and his comm was broken...
Part Four, Five, or Three of Walkers.
The Red Pike
By Jedi
It had stopped raining. That was good. On the other hand, Christopher was being approached by two bloodthirsty guards that wanted his head on their wall. He took a few steps back and unseathed his claws. Pained flashed through his broken bones and he fell to the ground. One of the guards chuckled and continued forward. Christopher grabbed a huge branch and hit them both, then stabbed them. He dug through a few documents and pulled out one. And then he learned who he was going for. Not Gauis Nerva, but his grandson.
The lost colony. I’ve seen the name but not the trailer. VAMPIRES?! That sounds sick! I mean I can’t get it because I don’t have ASA *Sobs* but I’ll be happy to see what it looks like over the Wiki. Oh and sorry for not responding for the last few days. I’ve been busy. But let’s see if I’ll stay here for a while!
Break-it The Final Witness
PS: I feel that I spend too much time describing my world in SoR. Do any of you feel the same?
To: TarrWasTaken, Tacrow17, Jerrald
From: Ben
Before we start, to the newcomers who may not know, you can use the Dododex Stories website, filter to New, and refresh the page to see story tips / messages quicker.
TarrWasTaken, I cannot wait to see your Aberration POV story! There’s not many on this website, besides the one Tacrow just wrote. I’ll read it when it comes out.
Tacrow, I’m loving Ark: Redemption so far! I’m interested to learn more about what the story will be about. Haven’t seen the POV of a Rock Drake in a while (that’s what the MC is right?) Anyway I’ll be around for Chapter 2 when it comes out.
Jerrald, Chapter 5 and 6 of The Island was great! I’m loving the way Marcel is progressing so far. So far the story has taken a much more different pace and tone compared to the other survivor-style stories present on the DDEX. I think it’s a singleplayer ARK, since we haven’t encountered any other humans yet, and Marcel hasn’t really been attacked by any savage cavement, and since you said earlier it’s based off your experiences in ARK (most people don’t like playing PVP multiplayer). You could develop some interesting plots based off that, since most people crave human interaction so much. I’m assuming Marcel has some sort of past too, though we haven’t seen what yet. I also love the way Marcel questions the resemblance of the Obelisk with the Implants, and that probably foreshadows how he’ll eventually investigate the Obelisk (which won’t be very fun since that means going away from the beach). I’m curious to see what happened on Day 9, and I too hope you will finish this story one day!
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