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From Ben
Important Announcement: Chapters 31+ are currently under the planning stage, I’m going to figure out what I’m going to do for the REST OF THE STORY so this may take a little while… perhaps a week at the maximum? But after planning is done I should be able to confirm the total amount of chapters before the end of the story… how much left can I predict? Still quite a bit: i wont spoil much but there are 10 artifacts in the original game…
Anyways, Paul has a message for all of you!
Heya dudes and dudettes! My name is Paul, and I’m Ben’s buddy! Long before Ben made this story of his, he created an Ark story called “Arks: Beyond Time”. It features me as the main character!!! Isn’t that amazing? Well, Ben is saying right now that I’m NOT, but I think he’s a liar. Why else would my name show up 247 times throughout that story? That must mean that I was the one destined for greatness! Nyah hah hah, Ben says it’s a flawed work that needs revision… but I disagree! Anything with ME in it automatically makes it a masterpiece! Well, I know you all may be bored waiting for the next chapter… and you know what maybe the others here won’t be able to deliver just yet. So I, the magnificent Paul, shall show you tidbits of the story as you all wait for the next chapter of The Arks: Over Heaven to finish! I promise you’ll love it, nyah hah hah! In fact, I’ve posted a tidbit right now in Archaeopteryx! I believe it will be in Aerial alphabetical… But if you want you can take a quick read! I promise you it’s much shorter than The Arks Over Heaven in length! - Sincerely, PAUL
BOB! I HAVE A SUGGESTION! I know you make Lego Ark Builds! There’s this app (if your on phone idk if it’s on computer) called Brickit App! You can post photos of Lego builds, you can keep track of ur Lego sets! And you can follow people! There are thousands more people on Brickit! I have it too! My name on it is @mrghostgamer! I hope you have a good rest of your week!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
The Red Pike
Walkers story part nine.
By Jedi
Walker sat on the deck of Siyu's house, and was teaching Bandito tricks. He had gotten really good at stealing, but too good. One he went on a hunting trip just to. Come home and realize that Bandito had stolen all his meet. Siyu was practicing with his sword, hacking a straw dummy to pieces. Harvey was gathering herbs. He then looked up. " What the heck is that." He looked forward, to see a huge cloud of dust, racing towards the forest and towards them. He looked with a eyeglass and saw it was a army of tames. " Nerva." Siyu said. " No. They don't hear the flag of the Red Leigon." In the front, a woman sat atop a Galli and ran towards them at full speed. " think they'll go around us?" Walker said. " No, they won't." Siyu said. They had about five minutes before they reached them, and during this time they chopped down trees to use as cover. He grabbed a Automatic Rifle and offered it to Siyu. " I still you still don't like guns?" Walker said. Siyu just knocked an arrow and drew his bow. The Galli had now drawn to the back. Whoever was riding wanted the tames to do her dirty work. Christopher let out a spray of bullets. Siyu launched a volley of arrows. While Christopher's bullets mostly hit trees and the ground, Siyu's arrows each landed in a enemies flesh. Pretty soon, a good chunk of the army was gone. The Galli was now headed straight for them. Siyu shot it in the chest with a arrow, and Walker slashed across its ankle. It fell to the ground and skidded by them, injured, not dead. The woman fell to the ground. Ok pointed his bow at her, but she just whistled. A roar echoed through the forest. Coming at them, was a Giga. Walker whistled for his own giga, and the two fought, while Siyu and Walker took on the mystery assailant. In the end, both of the Gigas wore each other out, and they both collapsed from exhaustion. Siyu pointed his bow at her, once again. " Who are you?" He asked. " What's it to you?" She replied. " Speak." He said and drew his bow back farther. " Ok, ok." She said. " Tyrana." " Good, now give me one good reason I should let you live?" "Simple. I know Nerva's weakness."
The Red Pike
Goliaths story
Chapter 7
Goliath staggered to his feet, he was aching all over and the pain from his wounds was unbearable. He travelled back to the Redwoods, knowing it was finally time. He located the Red Peak in the redwoods and climbed to the top of it. Once he was at the top, he limped into a huge cave, ready to face what lay within...
After travelling through the cave for a while, Goliath began to wonder which part of the island he was underneath, eventually, he found a massive chamber. In the centre was a huge, flat rock with a map of the island carved into it. Next to it was what looked like a giant torch, he lifted it up and illuminated the room with its flames. In front of him was a massive suit of shining, silver armour and a giant axe. Goliath lifted up the axe, he then decided to test the axes strength by striking the armour with it, the axe bounced right off, proving the armours strength. He put on the armour and lifted the axe. Now all he needed was a way out. He saw a giant door next to him, Goliath couldn’t help wondering what this place was as he walked to the door, and then he opened the door and walked out, he was near Far’s Peak, the pain was gone, and he was ready for revenge...
The Red Pike
Red’s story, part 9
They had traveled to the other cave, after countless hours of swimming.
“I think we’ve made it.” Red said. The mosasaurs and sharks had been quiet, and only replied when told to do something.
“We might need to fight our way here, I think I remember seeing something of the sea emperors here.” Bruce said. Once everyone entered the cave, sharks swam away from them, going to alert the others. Luckily the wounds they got from the last battle had healed, and now they were ready to fight. Two mosasaurs came to the front, but the sharks had swarmed them both, quickly killing them. They progressed further, killing everything in their path, until they got to the very end where only one squid remained.
“We suffered heavy casualties last battle, you might not have realized it, but now it’s the end of the sea emperors.” The squid said.
“Join us or die here.” Red said. The squid thought about for a second, then replied accepting to join them.
“My name is tentacles.” The squid said.
“We need to find the artifact here.” Red said.
“I have it.” Tentacles said. Tentacles handed the artifact to one of red’s tentacles, where she kept it hidden on one of her tentacles. Now they just needed to defeat The Red Legion, but not let them get the artifacts they had retrieved, to stop them from getting any artifacts.
The Red Pike
Red’s story, part 8
The group were at their old base, kelp cave. They decided to explore it a bit more, and this time they had found a hidden room with a strange, orange glow.
“What could it be?” Red asked curiously.
“I’ve seen a few survivors in the ocean with these, they call them ‘Artifacts’ and I overheard a conversation with two of them, saying they could fight huge creatures with their rexes and theris.” Bruce said.
“We should take it before the humans can!” Red exclaimed as she grabbed it.
“Very well then, I heard there was another one in another cave.” Bruce said.
“We need to investigate there too, see if we can also get the artifact.” Red said.
The Red Pike
Nerva’s story part ten
By Red Dragon
They scoured the redwoods for two days, when at last one soldier reported finding Goliath. Argentavis were circling him, and he was on the ground, dying. He had wounds on his chest and face. Nerva’s soldiers shot the Argentavis out of the air with ease. Nerva walked up to Goliath’s head. If something is more powerful than Goliath than, well, why would he need Goliath? He ordered many of his troops to remain here and search for the other creature. He had some other things to do. He got an Itchthyosornis letter from a soldier named Sarah Smith. She was the only survivor of when Tyrana escaped.
The Red Pike
Goliaths Story
Chapter 6 (I think)
Goliath turned to face his enemy, a gigantic dinosaur resembling a giga, but with antlers, glowing red eyes and long arms like a therezinos. The dinos name was Ghidorasaurus (a reference to the name of Godzilla’s worst enemy, King Ghidorah). Goliath roared and pounded the ground with his club as Ghidorasaurus approached him slowly. The two faced each over for a whole minute, examining every feature on the others body, trying to find a weak spot. Eventually Goliath identified one, but Ghidorasaurus had as well. Goliath charged at Ghidorasaurus (Ghidora from now on) and swung his club at the dinosaurs head, but it grabbed the club in its jaws and wrenched it out of his hands. Goliath knew this wasn’t going well, then, Ghidora went for his neck, biting onto it with his jagged teeth and drawing blood. Goliath groaned in pain and blood began to bubble out of his mouth. The ferocious creature clawed at Goliaths chest, staining it with blood, then it tugged with its jaws, tearing open Goliaths throat. Blood gushed out of the wound and Goliath collapsed to the ground. Ghidora walked away victoriously as Goliath lay, bleeding on the ground, slowly dying...
The next day...
Goliath lay on the ground, his fur matted and covered in blood, with a huge gash in his throat. Goliath was hardly breathing, and argentavis were starting to circle his dying body. Goliath was nearly dead...
The Red Pike
Walkers story part Eight
By Jedi
Walker stood in the forest. The trees were wreathed in flames. Fire climbed the vines. Siyu and Nerva we're in a clearing, fighting. Siyu was losing, so Walker ran to help. But the ground became sticky, and pulled at his feet so he couldn't move. He called Siyu's name, but his voice made no sound. He drew his bow, but it crumbled to ashes in his hand. Nerva's like shot through his gut, and Li fell to the floor. Then the ground began to crack, and then fell away completely. He fell to another layer and looked up. Nerva was there, his like raised for the death blow. But then he dissipated like sand in the wind. Then Helena, his siter, stood above him. " You must stop this from happening." She said. He woke up in Siyu's house. No fires, no nothing. The cook sat next to him, making some know of medicine.He was covered head to toe in bandages. Siyu stood in the corner, watching the cook work. Christopher sat up with a groan. " Good, your alive" Li said. " We have business to discuss." The cook ran to him. " he just had a nearly fatal encounter! He needs his rest!" But Li shoved him aside. " out of the way, Harvey. We need to prep for war."
DUN DUN DUH.
Rathalos (S2 EP1(read S1 for the definition of IT))
Riker had muttered IT a lot today.
Not only that, she had screamed IT, mouthed IT, every way you can think of to say something, she did all of those with IT. How else do you respond to a fire breathing giga?
Well, to be fair... giga s don’t have beaks. Or feathers. Or.. well... this was bigger than a giga. And it was chasing her. How perfect.
Rathalos (S2 Ep: prologue)
“I’ve completed the research sir. With this data, we can transform dinos! You can now experience the simplicity of taming a dodo and the thrill of riding a giga!” A voice exclaimed from behind a computer. “Magnificent, Riley. But... what if... instead of transforming the dinos... we just made... new ones?”
Hey PD!!! Awesome to see you!!! It’s alright, everyone has kinda been doing that lately. But I’m just glad to see you’re still around too!!!! If it’s alright me asking, how’s your game doing? I hope it’s doing awesome!!!
OH, I gotta say this. THERE IS AN INDIE GROUP REMAKING A 3D VERSION OF THE LAND BEFORE TIME!!!!!
Well, back into the void I go until the next conversation starts!!
Until next time!!
-PrimalApex
To: DiploLover
From: Ben, & KM
DiploLover, Chapter 29 of CON was awesome! Prince and Pax really cant contain their lust for Astra even though her lover died like a day ago smh 🙄. Im wondering how they’ll get Reign out of that sticky situation and what KJ’s true name is, since they abbreviated Ripley Jane to RJ.
From Ben
Hello everyone! Chapter 96 is out in Paraceratherium! There are now 4 chapters of TAOH left! Anyway, that was nice. It actually went better than I thought. This is a reminder that it might seem hard writing a chapter at first but once you get into the flow of it it becomes a thousand times easier.
Hello Moon Tales Girl! Welcome to Achatina section! Your story Moon Tales is very cool.
Break-it, sometimes you need to reflect on the direction of your story and what you want to do with it. Understanding that mastery doesn’t come immediately is fine, because if you work hard enough toward your goal of mastery you’ll reach it. Mastery is a very interpretive matter but I think you’re close to reaching it. You still need to work on a few things such as a consistent writing schedule and overall some more important literature topics that don’t need to be covered right now but your dialogue and plot and ideas with the story are doing great so far, so don’t give up! Anyway seeya around i sent a message about your previous three chapters a bit ago (although not too sure if you saw it yet). Anyway I noticed you just finished QOA. I hope it was as fun to read as I had fun reading it. I suggest heading over to read Hope’s Cry next by MrGhostGamer. The story is in the All filter alphabetically, although you will need to skip boss creature sections. The story is 24 chapters long and not too long of a read.
Sylveevee, Chapter 2 of WOA was awesome sauce! I wonder what Drake’s vision was all about and what the stone Sylveevee picked up was. Still curious about why Sylveevee and Pat betrayed Moonhigh. I think it’ll come up later. I’m guessing the story Drake learned was about the Phantom Legends as teased. Well that was a fun chapter overall!
SunnyFox57, Chapter 4 of The Lost Soul was great! It was so nice seeing Bella again even though we didn’t see her much in TTOTSP. I’m guessing the voice Tom keeps hearing is the Krakos. And now the strange thing in the shadows makes sense, it’s Bella who noticed and smelled Tom’s scent and decided to follow him. I can’t wait to see how the rest of Lost Soul goes!
Chapter 18 of The Lost World was also really nice. Kinda sad Chapter 17 can’t get posted because of technical issues but oh well. I don’t like Cedric as much as the others. I think my favorite characters are in the order Rowan, Kannon, Elayne, Oliver, and then Cedric. Cedric’s prankster ways come off as more selfish and inconsiderate than the other characters and in my opinion I actually don’t like him as much as Samuel from TAOH. Anyway it’s nice seeing Rowan get out of her comfort zone and learn to be more vulnerable and expressive. Wonder what that thing at the end was… Eh, we’ll figure out soon. Unless you pull a cliffhanger and have it in like the chapter after.
Moon, Chapter 10 of Pandora was really great! I really enjoyed the symbolism of the deformed bird and its parallel to Pandora. The fact that Pandora was able to envision the Flier horde again with her visions was really trippy and honestly really cool. I’m still going to place my bets on the fact that the thing scaring the horde is the Dodorex, which was teased on Fandom. I can also sense the tension between Bria and Rainstone. I hope they become friends and we get another convo between them. Also can’t wait to see Toxin actually pull his own weight and talk to people on his own… Anyway that was a good chapter, I can’t wait for the next! And also for whatever you could be planning and scheming…
Wyvernian, Chapter 49 of TOT was awesome! The banter between Nova and Fjordur’s Dragon about the whole name thing was pretty funny. The teleportation of all the villains was also really well done and makes sense since the White Obelisk can do it with the heroes. Drain’s transformation into the wyvern-like creature was also really cool. Also Rockwell’s Innards… can’t wait for HC Rockwell to discover this region eventually. Anyway since I think we’re nearing the end of the arc we should all discus which groups go to which regions of the TOT map for the corruption apocalypse arc we were planning right we’re doing that next? Anyway can’t wait to see what PrimalApex does for Chapter 50… (WOAH WE’RE THAT FAR IN CRAZY).
Although, I would say that I did not really appreciate the stab at Samuel in this chapter. I didn’t mind him crying over Star betraying him, but describing him as “broken” felt a bit disrespectful and done only because he is not a likable character within TAOH. I could also go over the fact that Star was described to not have the capability or desire to go out or do anything due to her feelings of not being there for Samuel, and thus it would be illogical for her to act out against him (this was explicitly stated in the Fandom discussion chain), I will not go over it now. Some communication about some of my characters would be appreciated and I think the same for others. I literally do not care what you do with them as long as I am told about it. I try my best to make everyone’s characters accurate and true to themselves and I expect the same from you. Anyway, nothing personal!
See you all soon!