Reading this section under Deino really makes me laugh. Idk what the heck is going on, Ranger arguing with himself or smth, Moon being some computer boffin… lol idk. It’s hilarious….
(P.S) I have a fanfic in Amargasaurus, if u wanna check it out
Ares has been royalty all his life. He was the First Prince of the Lightning Wyvern kingdom. Getting top notch food, the best education, and training from the top-tier…
Frankly, Moon, I don’t have any questions because The Obelisk is extremely well written. You make everything clear, you explain the story well. No questions from me.…
Ares slowly flew around in the eerily dark night, scanning the skies and ground for his friend. He was sure he heard a few groans and sloshes, as if the monster had stepped out…
It wasn’t just because Malston was leading her far away from Ares. It also wasn’t because she was getting dizzy. It was because they were in The Lifeless…
So while I was taming a hawk, I ran into a allo killing a diplodocus. I took the allo's kill and the hawk went to feed on it. But I forgot if they take damage, they restart their taming process. I…
I don’t mind if my story takes place after the Obelisk. I even planned a place where Ares goes after the events in the prologue, like how you explained the Fire Wyvern’s canyon. And my original…
Hey guys. I started a fanfic in amargasaurus. It’s just the prologue, but let me know if y’all like it and I can keep going. It’s about a Lightning Wyverns journey to be the King of all…
The characters of your story remind me of the main characters of an anime: Kokoro Connect. I liked the anime, so maybe that’s why I like your story so much. Anyways, Forest reminds of Taichi, the…