To Moon-

The characters of your story remind me of the main characters of an anime: Kokoro Connect. I liked the anime, so maybe that’s why I like your story so much. Anyways, Forest reminds of Taichi, the protagonist. He’s not too playful, nice, and very helpful. Also, a smart person. Taichi was my favorite.

Crimson reminds me of Inaba. Inaba was serious and one could even call her mean. But she actually cared for her friends. I feel that Crimson is the same.

Rust kinda resemble Aoki. Aoki was pretty playful, but was nice an would do anything for his friends. A very nice character personality, imo.

Spark is the closest to Yui. Yui was intelligent, kindhearted, but could also be serious when it was needed. She was very supportive of the last character, Iori.

Iori and Nyx are very similar. Both are not the most mature of characters, but I feel books and shows need that character to add a bit of wholesomeness to them. Iori was sweet, loved by everyone, kinda naive, but was pretty observant. (Later we find out it’s all a facade, but that doesn't matter.)

Anyways, just wanted to share.

-Aston