Sunnyfox, *too, we’ll just blame the error on the coffee! ;) Lol!! TLW chapter 18 was Great and chapter 4 of TLS was Great too!!!! I’m really wondering what these two voices are!!!! Argh!! Obviously one’s more literal while the other is more like mental!! Rowan and Cedric having a moment not arguing was pretty cool!! And how is Bella alive?!? That’s crazy!!! Tom with his nightmares is definitely interesting. Also reference, I see a reference!!! I really enjoyed both chapters!!! I can’t wait for the next ones!!!

Moon, chapter 10 of Pandora was awesome!!!! I think there’s a lot of hidden stuff in this one!!! Especially with the sparrow… and premonitions about another stampede of pterosaurs, yeah and Nightfall dies in Journey. Likely story Pandora, I’m on to her and her ways. I wonder what Toxin’s gonna do? But more importantly Bria is having visions!!! Hmm… I really enjoyed it Moon!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

-PrimalApex:)