@Apex great story. Little graphic, but that's your style. (So much blood, it's like SAW but with dinosaurs lol.) I've got two questions for you:

1. I've never heard of the majority of these creatures. Did you make them up?

2. Wait I forgot two.... shoot what was it?! Oh yeah. How are you submiting like COMPLETE stories everyday?! You're a wizard, aren't you?

Anyways that's pretty much it. You're doing a great job. Keep writing!

~CL1