Ima start a new story to work on till i get feed back for my first one

Mufasa is the leader

Strawberry is the co-leader

Blueberry is the main character

Grape is a cub

The Pride: chapter one

"Wake up, WAKE UP YOU LAZY DEN CAT!" "Alright alright im up!" "Really, this early"I think. I open my eyes and see strawberry waking up grape. "Why are you waking up the pride so early strawberry?" I ask "oh, your up already, wel-" BANG "what the heck was that?" "Well long story short a spino is attacking!" Strawberry screamed. We all rush outside to defend the den, it wasnt just one spino, there was 2! We split up into a group of 2, grape was with mufasa, and sadly, i was with bossy strawberry. I jumped onto its back so it couldnt hit me, and of course strawberry had somthing to say about that "No, your doing it all wrong!" She said. Strawberry jumped on its tail, and the spino just slamed her into a wall. I take the finishing blow on the spino and go help mufasa and grape. Once that spino is down, we go check on strawberry, who, of course, trys to take all the credit "I took the finishing blow on that spino, not HER!"strawberry complained "no you didnt" mufasa said calmly "guys! Lets just go back to the den."

Chapter 2 coming soon!

-shadow