Ben, I’m so happy you read my story! Thank you for your suggestions, I’ll do my best to make the characters more interesting and I’ll try to do paragraphs to make the story easier to read. I just posted chapter four of TTDOT, hope u enjoy. Also I just read chapter ten of your story and I can definitely see Ruby and Neddy’s love blooming. I can’t wait to see what happens next! Btw u may not be able to see chapter ten bc my story chapters take like two days to post. 😔. Anyway…cya!

-SunnyFox57.

-SunnyFox57.