(TIKO: 10 year old Raptor

(CANDY CANE: 12 year old Raptor

(FOSTER: 18 year old Raptor

Prodoleuge: Dilos can be a bit venomous, but even worse, Raptors, once these guys sneak up on you, your dead. Be carful you guys, because, this story..BEGINS!

Chapter 1

New life

Tiko ran across the forest, running away from a barryonix. “Foster! Hurry up the trap has to be ready!” Foster got ready to trap the little barryonix “Ready!” Foster yelled. Tiko ran across the trap and the barryonix got trapped. “Got em!” Candy Cane ran as fast as she could. “Don’t worry little one, we won’t hurt you.” She said comfortably “Yeah we’re gonna find your mother.” they comforted the poor little baby barryonix. “Um” the barryonix started to talk, “I’m flin.” the barryonix said. “Hi flin, im Tiko and this is Foster and Candy Cane.” Tiko replied. “hi Tiko, and also what do you mean find my mom?” He questioned. “You lost your mom rig-right?” She said scaredly. “No,” he continued, “you lured me in this trap, saying you had food, and now my mom’s coming for me, so you better run! Hehe.” They thought they were being fooled. “No way we’re falling for that!” They said in complete falseness. “Yeah right,” said the barryonix. “Here she is!” They heard a big roar, and standed there frozen. The mom barryonix ran after them. Will they die? Or will they survive? They ran as fast as they could, holding their breath for short. “This was a bad idea Tiko!” Foster yelled at Tiko running for his life, they have tooken a great risk. “At least YOUR the big and smart one here FOSTER!” He yelled back “Foster, what are we going to do?” Candy Cane asked. “I don’t know! I don’t know everything you know!” He yelled at her. At last the barryonix got tired and went back. “Sigh) finally, we can stop running and yelling.” Tiko said “well? It was your fault that this happened!” Foster yelled. “SORRY? DID YOU HEAR ANYTHING I SAID?!” He yelled back again. “Basically no, because you said nothing about it.” They argued and argued for hours, what will happen next on their adventures?

The man ran through the dark woods. With nothing but a now tattered cloak, a dirty shirt, and a pair of soggy boots and pants, he stumbled through the bushes and low branches. He climbed up on a tall rock and grabbed the hastily-built hatched he made only hours ago, and hoisted it into a combat position. He saw the beast’s glowing yellow eyes pierce through the thicket and prepared himself. He then realized something: the thing chasing him before had orange eyes. He looked to the sides and saw 3 more pairs of glowing eyes in the forest as well as the first one. His face twisted from a look of forced steeliness to utter terror. He glanced behind him and observed the riverbed just a few hundred yards away. If he could make it there, he might live. He reared up his axe, ready to battle, and at the last second bolted behind him towards the river. The creatures gave pursuit. He made it halfway there before one creature caught up to him. A fearsome, man-sized dinosaur with plumage of feathers and a screeching mouth of scissor-like teeth. The man swung his hatched as hard as he could and ran away, and the sound of cracking bone and a horrid yelp of pain told the man it did the trick. His axe now gone, he sprinted even quicker towards the river when he saw the lead raptor leap from the treetops and plant its foot on his chest. It roared victoriously as the others bowed in respect, and then the raptor began his meal, the others following after, the sound of screaming echoing through the woods and the man’s blood tainting the river

The heroic raptor

Based on a true story

Once i was lvl 21 on a server and finally learnt tranq arrows, i was so exicted to tame “good” tames. I ran into the forest outside of the hidden lake (my base) and searched for useful tames. After 10 minutes of looking it was midnight, i then saw just about a raptor, with about 200 tranq arrows of hard grinding, i didnt want to be a midnight snack for an extinct beast. I jumped on a rock and it aggro on me, i fired arrow after arrow, finally, the raptor dropped uncounsious. I saw it was a lvl 300 female! She has blue on her body and grey-brown on her belly, i put lots of meat and narcotics in her, soon i tamed her! I named her blue. She came on all the hunts with me, but once, we went to the south shore and saw a spino. I ran away but blue attacked the spino! I coudnt do anything to help her, i returned to the spot where the spino was the next day, really upset, but then i found her on the beach!! She killed the spino! (Which was lvl 25) I was so happy, but nothing lasts forever…

6 real months later

I was lvl 86 then, i tamed delta charlie and echo, all female around lvl 200, all looking similar to their colours in the film, blue was still alive then, i was taking all 4 of them on kind of a walk, near the arctic, i saw a lvl 100 trex from a spyglass, it walked up to me and aggro on me, i had no choice but to attack. (Because i had REALLY good stuff with me) i ran away when the raptors did the work, i was terrified, the rex got to half health and echo died. I was devastated, then charlie died shortly after, delta and blue was fighting strong, and quarter health unfortunatly delta died, i knew was was going to happen next, they were both on very low health, trex got to 100 health then blue got to 12. I knew i had to say goodbye know, i closed my eyes and heard a deep scream, i almost regreted to see what i saw…

If you saw this bit this is the same text,

BLUE KILLED THE REX!!!!!

I was so happy i actully cried with joy, i rode blue back to base safely, and she is probably still alive when you are reading this.

Thank you so much for reading, do you agree that blue is an incredible being.

Thank you

Hello, most likely fanfic reader! Wanna read on for my story?

Well if you are, let’s hear the story of our main character, Talon…

Claw, Talon, Tooth

Chapter 1

From the author, Slither

Talon watched as her taller brother played in the crass with a mouse, trying to catch it. Her mind hovered around, searching for anything to do. Oh, a Meganeura! Her tail wagged, ready to pounce with young and oblivious eyes. She ran fast like the wind, as hasty as a cheetah. Her small feet grazed across the floor as if she was floating. She darted through the forest , darting in between the huge oaks, engelmenn and all others. As she finally cornered the glowing, sapphire coloured meganeura, she heard huge stomps coming from behind her…

Finding home

S1 E2

It was painfully everything red then Black everything was black. A endless pool of black nothingness. No feeling, no sight, no smell or taste I couldn't hear anything. Just that black pool of nothingness I start to fade I'm leaving clasping to my life but I can't reach it........

2 months later

I wake up. Where am I? I've never been here at least not that I remember...... W-what do I remember. I answer myself nothing I remember nothing before this point I remember nothing. "Why" I whisper my voices cracked "WHY" I scream my voice rising why am here, who am I, why don't I remember anything? WHY? Calm down calm down deep breaths it ok just need to stay alive se what happing. I let feeling and sound and well everything sink into me. It's totally quite except for waves lapping at the beach. I look around I'm on a small island. Very small. Wait what? My brain catches up with what is happening and island a very small island?!?! Ugh could this day get any worse? I calm myself down and check out the island there's some rocks trees and bushes I hope down from the rock I was on. the grainy slightly wet sand trickling between my toes. There seems to be a burrow underneath the rock. Maybe there is something else here? I crawl into it it's empty "oh" I breath a disappointed sigh. If only there where someone here they might be able to help me tell me what's going on. Breath in breath out you are ok, you don't feel sick,you are fine, you can do anything you need to do, I tell myself your ok.

I've explored the Island some more and found that there was no land nearby and then found this kite or maybe dimand shaped thing on my wrist.it itches like crazy and glowed orange witch was not normal but hey as long as it doesn't effect me.... Hey just saying now I'm actually in the hole underneath the rock. And the sky is pouring outside. Sigh I burrow into the sand . My shoulder hits something that was... Not well sand. I sit up and pull it out "it's a note" I say excitedly this means someone was before me I open it up and read

-kanara (😆 hahaha left you at a cliffhanger) hope you like it

Do not mess with Alpha raptor inless you know what you are doing, took 2 of my raptors and a sarco…

R.I.P Rap, Rapper and Al le Gator

Up if feel sad for tames

Oh, you don’t read my fanfic? That actually explains a lot.

Also, Aston won’t be answering you, he disappeared several months ago and hasn’t come back since. It was sad, his story hadn’t been finished and he was one of the only friends I had who’s writing style was similar to mine :(

Jointed Mysteries is doing well! but I’m particularly excited for the new one you've been talking about.

Aaand to make it more eye catching to readers, pls try paragraphs. It makes the writing take a bit longer, but becomes instinct after some time.

I would have told you to just do it like I do in my story, but you haven’t read it lol. (Which is totally fine, the first half of the story sucked.)

It’s like, before starting a quote or sentence, you make a few spaces before starting. like I’ve been doing through this whole message.

(Stupid me giving examples when you actually write really well already)

“You can’t catch me!” He yelled, jumping over the log.

She rolled her eyes before going after him.

***

“Wait, wait, wait, are— are you sure?” Kat asked.

“One hundred percent sure.” She answered with a small smile.

***

It was incredibly annoying. “You know I don’t understand a word you say, right?” Gabbro asked him.

***

Ok, so there was me begging you to make paragraphs in yur story. I swear it would help ppl love yur story more and not get confused during certain scenes. Pls.

With all of my respects,

—Moon

So I’m playing a regular ark world where I can only tame raptors. So I’m playing like normal and I tame my first raptor, and I think, “what if I tame another raptor.” It takes me one hole day in real time to tame ONE RAPTOR.

Really stupid moment

One time as a low level, i found a lonely raptor. i died 7 times. but i managed to knock it out, i spent like 50 minutes fending off dilos and even a carnosaur. but i finally tamed him, i named him “Forsaken” and i went back to my base, JUST SO THAT THE RAPTOR I SPENT AN HOUR DEFENDING TO ATTACK A DODO, RIGHT NEXT TO A BRONTO!!! (the raptor tamed with aggressive on) i didnt notice, and the bronto got hit by the raptor. of course. raptor, me , my other pet moschops, All died.

On my mobile world, I had a raptor named blue I was too early in game to tame a dire wolf so blue helped me grind hide. I was very attached to her. How she died: I was grinding hide with her in the grass lands across from my base the only dangerous things that could spawn were Theris, carnos and other raptors so I finished grinding I’m heading back to base she’s encumbered so I’m throwing stuff off suddenly I’m attacked by a theri by a ledge not very high up I dismount and try pushing her off so she lives it’s to late tho the theri killed her devestates after I died out of anger I grabbed my cross bow and murdered the theri I then made a grave for her and tamed another raptor his name is razor. RIP Blue you will be remembered. I was inspired to write this after I read the story about the legendary bubbles the spinosaur RIP Bubbles

So we were in jungle 3 on ragnarok. Me and the boys (4 others, 5 in total) were gathering materials for our base. It was gonna be a 4x4, but we made it 5x5, 2 high. Anyways, we went our separate ways, not too far though. But conveniently, each one of us ran into a raptor, it took a couple tries but we all ended up taming one, I had the tek one so I was the leader of the pack.

I take down a sarco but out of nowhere a raptor comes and makes my life harder

SpecialRaptor, I’ll be praying for your safety!!! If you make it out and are able to stick around, I hope we get to talk more again and I hope you continue Jointed Mysteries!!

Hope you can make it out!!!

-PrimalApex:)

(TIKO: 10 year old raptor)

(CANDY CANE: 12 year old raptor)

(FOSTER: 18 year old raptor

Chapter 3

Basic survivors

It was a cold day. Blood swept as they fought. Claws rattling on scales. “Foster!” Tiko said as Foster was being shooken on Trux’s head. “No! I’m not letting go of the head of this stupid Rex!” That insulted Trux. Trux threw Foster off his head and stomped on Foster. Blood splattered as Foster’s body was being squished. “NO! FOSTER!” Foster was dead now. “You monster! You killed our brother!” Candy Cane shouted as Trux’s stomp shook the earth. “I don’t CARE if your brothers dead! I want you all to DIE!” He shouted rudely. The last of the raptors ran across the field of snow and entered into the Great Plains. Blood swept across their tails. “What are we going to do now?” Candy Cane questioned Tiko. “I don’t know. Without Foster, no one is safe.” Candy Cane almost cried while, running to a safe spot. “There!” Tiko yelled and ran towards the abandoned wooden house. They hid their soaked scales from the Rex. “Come out come out where ever you are!” Trux taunted. They ran from the back of the wooden house. “Shh, he’s still here.” Tiko whispered in Candy Cane’s ear. They ran back into the woods. “Few, we’re saf-“ before she could finish her sentence, something shook the earth again. “Shh Candy Cane! He’s still here!” He yelled. It alerted the Rex and Trux stomps still shook the earth running after em. “See? You yell to loud!” Candy Cane said insultingly. They ran for their life and hid again behind a trike. The trike didn’t speak but, it was a good hiding spot. “This is a safe spot,” he whispered continuely. “Follow me.” Tiko said knowing what to do. They ran towards a different Raptor den. “Hello?” Tiko said nicely. “Yes?” A random Raptor spoke back. “TIKO? CANDY CANE?” It was their mom. ‘I guess our mom did survive the earthquake.’ Tiko thought. “Mom? Is that you?” Candy Cane asked their abandoned mom. “Yes it’s me and, shh, I heard the Rex that was chasing you, I told you that he was evil!” She whispered. “Here, come inside and eat some meat. You must be hungry.” She said nicely. They walked inside the den and had a seat.

-SpecialRaptor

I owned a raptor once. Her name was Lillian, I took her to the hunter cave to get the artifact. Lillian destroyed everything. On the way back, I went to the top of the little hill near the south cave to get crystal. I got ambushed by an alpha. Lillian managed to kill the alpha but she was on very low health. Next thing I know a therizino attacks us. I accidentally dismount and can only watch as she gets ripped apart. I run to the top and wait there. I manage to get her saddle back from her body. I can’t just run home because I lived by the hidden lake. So with the few resources I can scrounge, I make myself tranq arrows, and tranq out a 140 raptor that was terrorizing me. I also knock out the their and punch it to death. Lillian was a amazing raptor and she will never be forgotten by me. I won’t ask for likes, because Lillian died doing what she loved.

Me gets of my ptranodon to check where I am on the map

"Raptors" look this guy thought he was safe

YoUr LEvle 69 PTrAnoDoN HaS DieD

Well, I finally caught up to Jointed Mysteries and found where to type you at SpecialRaptor. I Love your Story!! Can’t wait for Chapter 27!!!! Also I hope your move goes smoothly!! Well, I just wanted to say that I found the rest of your chapters and I am all caught up!!! Until Next Time!!

-Apex

So I was with my lvl 23 para and I see this raptor with a turtle dude I’m like : that raptor is dead; but I watch it and the raptor kills the turtle I just stare i go over there cus I thot it was with other raptors and my lvl 23 para can kill em so I was not scared and I find the raptor and it attacks us and I see the name I’m like : oh god it’s a alpha raptor I’m gonna die; I left the game cus I was scared I join back and I get killed by the alpha raptor I look for my para and I find the body there with the alpha raptor and it kills me again 😔 NEVER GO BY A RAPTOR THAT CAN KILL THE TURTLE THINGS! Please like for my para 🪦 RIP 😭😢☹️😔

GIANT SKY RAPTOR

chapter 3: curry's story

-My pack was being attacked, so i was still a little egg. My dad was a fabled raptor named futuristicus. He went to the nest and at that moment i hatched. He touched his nose to mine but he was in a hurry and needed to protect the pack. We luckly won. Other day, the majority of my pack raptors was by a advanced player with high leveled tamewkilled and Few raptors are remaining for now. If you could help me find my dad back, i hope it is at the island, so...- said curry

-oh... Yeah, humans can be very dangerous...- said greystar

-okkkk so can we help on it?- said rosa

- if you want, but yesss!! Please!!- said curry.

The three gallies They told each other whether to help or not. Then rainwater decided yes!

At futuristicus's cave...

Futuristicus was taking care of its eggs and pack on a small cave in the snow. And futuristicus was so nervous.

-hey, can i eat some meat?- said freezy.

But futuristicus was not paying attention bc it was seeing other packs attack. -futuristicus?- said freezy

-shut up, i see attacking packs near here. Flora, hide the eggs, take care of the eggs. Said futuristicus.

Flora, the mother of the raptors hid the eggs.

Freezy went outside to eat some meat.

(Why is freezy eating so much like this?) Though futuristicus.

Next chapter today

Also-

R.I.P. DINO NERD

You haven’t been answering me in sooo long. I hope you r ok. Wherever you r..

-SpecialRaptor I miss ur thoughts about Tiko’s life!