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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion
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What are some stories about the raptor? Memorable raptor stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Oh, you don’t read my fanfic? That actually explains a lot.
Also, Aston won’t be answering you, he disappeared several months ago and hasn’t come back since. It was sad, his story hadn’t been finished and he was one of the only friends I had who’s writing style was similar to mine :(
Jointed Mysteries is doing well! but I’m particularly excited for the new one you've been talking about.
Aaand to make it more eye catching to readers, pls try paragraphs. It makes the writing take a bit longer, but becomes instinct after some time.
I would have told you to just do it like I do in my story, but you haven’t read it lol. (Which is totally fine, the first half of the story sucked.)
It’s like, before starting a quote or sentence, you make a few spaces before starting. like I’ve been doing through this whole message.
(Stupid me giving examples when you actually write really well already)
“You can’t catch me!” He yelled, jumping over the log.
She rolled her eyes before going after him.
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“Wait, wait, wait, are— are you sure?” Kat asked.
“One hundred percent sure.” She answered with a small smile.
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It was incredibly annoying. “You know I don’t understand a word you say, right?” Gabbro asked him.
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Ok, so there was me begging you to make paragraphs in yur story. I swear it would help ppl love yur story more and not get confused during certain scenes. Pls.
With all of my respects,
—Moon
On my mobile world, I had a raptor named blue I was too early in game to tame a dire wolf so blue helped me grind hide. I was very attached to her. How she died: I was grinding hide with her in the grass lands across from my base the only dangerous things that could spawn were Theris, carnos and other raptors so I finished grinding I’m heading back to base she’s encumbered so I’m throwing stuff off suddenly I’m attacked by a theri by a ledge not very high up I dismount and try pushing her off so she lives it’s to late tho the theri killed her devestates after I died out of anger I grabbed my cross bow and murdered the theri I then made a grave for her and tamed another raptor his name is razor. RIP Blue you will be remembered. I was inspired to write this after I read the story about the legendary bubbles the spinosaur RIP Bubbles
So we were in jungle 3 on ragnarok. Me and the boys (4 others, 5 in total) were gathering materials for our base. It was gonna be a 4x4, but we made it 5x5, 2 high. Anyways, we went our separate ways, not too far though. But conveniently, each one of us ran into a raptor, it took a couple tries but we all ended up taming one, I had the tek one so I was the leader of the pack.
(TIKO: 10 year old raptor)
(CANDY CANE: 12 year old raptor)
(FOSTER: 18 year old raptor
Chapter 3
Basic survivors
It was a cold day. Blood swept as they fought. Claws rattling on scales. “Foster!” Tiko said as Foster was being shooken on Trux’s head. “No! I’m not letting go of the head of this stupid Rex!” That insulted Trux. Trux threw Foster off his head and stomped on Foster. Blood splattered as Foster’s body was being squished. “NO! FOSTER!” Foster was dead now. “You monster! You killed our brother!” Candy Cane shouted as Trux’s stomp shook the earth. “I don’t CARE if your brothers dead! I want you all to DIE!” He shouted rudely. The last of the raptors ran across the field of snow and entered into the Great Plains. Blood swept across their tails. “What are we going to do now?” Candy Cane questioned Tiko. “I don’t know. Without Foster, no one is safe.” Candy Cane almost cried while, running to a safe spot. “There!” Tiko yelled and ran towards the abandoned wooden house. They hid their soaked scales from the Rex. “Come out come out where ever you are!” Trux taunted. They ran from the back of the wooden house. “Shh, he’s still here.” Tiko whispered in Candy Cane’s ear. They ran back into the woods. “Few, we’re saf-“ before she could finish her sentence, something shook the earth again. “Shh Candy Cane! He’s still here!” He yelled. It alerted the Rex and Trux stomps still shook the earth running after em. “See? You yell to loud!” Candy Cane said insultingly. They ran for their life and hid again behind a trike. The trike didn’t speak but, it was a good hiding spot. “This is a safe spot,” he whispered continuely. “Follow me.” Tiko said knowing what to do. They ran towards a different Raptor den. “Hello?” Tiko said nicely. “Yes?” A random Raptor spoke back. “TIKO? CANDY CANE?” It was their mom. ‘I guess our mom did survive the earthquake.’ Tiko thought. “Mom? Is that you?” Candy Cane asked their abandoned mom. “Yes it’s me and, shh, I heard the Rex that was chasing you, I told you that he was evil!” She whispered. “Here, come inside and eat some meat. You must be hungry.” She said nicely. They walked inside the den and had a seat.
-SpecialRaptor
I owned a raptor once. Her name was Lillian, I took her to the hunter cave to get the artifact. Lillian destroyed everything. On the way back, I went to the top of the little hill near the south cave to get crystal. I got ambushed by an alpha. Lillian managed to kill the alpha but she was on very low health. Next thing I know a therizino attacks us. I accidentally dismount and can only watch as she gets ripped apart. I run to the top and wait there. I manage to get her saddle back from her body. I can’t just run home because I lived by the hidden lake. So with the few resources I can scrounge, I make myself tranq arrows, and tranq out a 140 raptor that was terrorizing me. I also knock out the their and punch it to death. Lillian was a amazing raptor and she will never be forgotten by me. I won’t ask for likes, because Lillian died doing what she loved.
GIANT SKY RAPTOR
chapter 3: curry's story
-My pack was being attacked, so i was still a little egg. My dad was a fabled raptor named futuristicus. He went to the nest and at that moment i hatched. He touched his nose to mine but he was in a hurry and needed to protect the pack. We luckly won. Other day, the majority of my pack raptors was by a advanced player with high leveled tamewkilled and Few raptors are remaining for now. If you could help me find my dad back, i hope it is at the island, so...- said curry
-oh... Yeah, humans can be very dangerous...- said greystar
-okkkk so can we help on it?- said rosa
- if you want, but yesss!! Please!!- said curry.
The three gallies They told each other whether to help or not. Then rainwater decided yes!
At futuristicus's cave...
Futuristicus was taking care of its eggs and pack on a small cave in the snow. And futuristicus was so nervous.
-hey, can i eat some meat?- said freezy.
But futuristicus was not paying attention bc it was seeing other packs attack. -futuristicus?- said freezy
-shut up, i see attacking packs near here. Flora, hide the eggs, take care of the eggs. Said futuristicus.
Flora, the mother of the raptors hid the eggs.
Freezy went outside to eat some meat.
(Why is freezy eating so much like this?) Though futuristicus.
Next chapter today
So I was with my lvl 23 para and I see this raptor with a turtle dude I’m like : that raptor is dead; but I watch it and the raptor kills the turtle I just stare i go over there cus I thot it was with other raptors and my lvl 23 para can kill em so I was not scared and I find the raptor and it attacks us and I see the name I’m like : oh god it’s a alpha raptor I’m gonna die; I left the game cus I was scared I join back and I get killed by the alpha raptor I look for my para and I find the body there with the alpha raptor and it kills me again 😔 NEVER GO BY A RAPTOR THAT CAN KILL THE TURTLE THINGS! Please like for my para 🪦 RIP 😭😢☹️😔
The Shift
A fanfiction by SilverWings
Chapter 7
Tealfeather turned away from the gruesome sight. Her mind was whirring. *Who was Star?* *How did Father know him?* *Why... *she swallowed thee lump in her throat.* Why did he kill him?* Bloodfeather nudged the corpse into the bushes and started walking in the direction of the ribcage. *I'm not going to make it back before him.* she realised.
Teal ran toward the ribcage, leaving a wide gap between her and her father at all times. In her haste, she failed to notice the raptor still lurking in the trees. Didn't notice the tears streaming down his face. Certainly didn't see the cold, determined anger on his face.
Teal slowed when she reached a small grove of trees, close enough to the ribcage to faintly hear the voices of her fellow raptors. She dared to look back at Bloodfeather, and to her got to, he was peering intently at the trees she was concealed in. Tealfeather kept as still as she could, silently praying that her father hadn't noticed her. Bloodfeather's gaze bore into the trees for what felt like hours. The sun was beginning to set, and with it, the temperatures dropped. Teal suppressed a shiver. Finally, Bloodfeather looked away and kept walking. Tealfeather let out a heaving sigh of relief. She ran around the back of the camp, where she knew there was a small space that she could squeeze through. Teal peeked through the small gap and saw Bronzefeather sleeping soundly near it. Now that the sun had fully set, almost all the raptors were asleep. Tealfeather silently crept up to her brother and curled her tail around his. Teal fell asleep quickly, but her dreams were filled with screaming raptors and Star's weak voice.
The Shift
A fanfiction by SilverWings
Chapter 6
The ribcage was beginning to look more and more developed. The vegetation the clan had collected had been used to cover the bones, forming a blanket like canopy over half of the bones. One of the smaller ribs had been snapped in half, dragged around to form the back of the camp. Sand had been scraped away to leave a large space for prey. At the moment, the pile was pitifully small. Tealfeather dropped the body of the lystrosaurus in the pile and caught sight of her brother lying in a ball with his tail resting over his nose. At the sight of Teal, he brightened visibly and bounded over to help her disentangle the hardy shrub from her claws. A smaller pile of plants and the like was assembled next to the prey pile, and Tealfeather dropped the bush there. "Ghasp!" she sighed dramatically. "*Why* are you sitting around? Surely that's illegal!"
"Bloodfeather wants us to go with him and some other raptors to map our surroundings. The same Bloodfeather that's standing behind you, in fact." Bronzefeather said.
Tealfeather spun around. Sure enough, Bloodfeather was standing behind her, an angry look on his face.
"Hello Father." she said.
"We're leaving," he said shortly. Bloodfeather stalked away.
"*Why* do you keep doing that?" hissed Bronzefeather.
"He annoys me."
Bronzefeather looked as though that was not good enough reasoning, which was strange, after all, *he* was the one who charged off into the desert because he missed her!
"We should go," sighed Tealfeather.
Teal had been on patrols before, but this one was extremely boring and uneventful. *Nothing* interesting happened. Granted, Tealfeather didn't know what classified as 'interesting' in this new, barren landscape, but surely it was more exciting than *this*. At least it was coming to an end. Bloodfeather lead the patrol, with Yellowfeather closely behind. Tawnyfeather and Forestfeather - Greyfeather's parents - were in front of them, and Bronze and Teal took up the rear. There wasn't a peep from anyone as they silently surveyed the landscape, looking for threats and landmarks alike. They neared a group of trees. A rustling came from one of the bushes. An unfamiliar burst from the bushes, leaping at Bloodfeather. Instantly, the other raptors attacked, clawing at the threat to their leader. There was a high shriek of alarm as the raptor realised there were many more enemies than he had originally thought. "STOP!" rang the cry of Bloodfeather. "Leave me alone with him."
The other raptors exchanged puzzled looks, one by one, they left in the direction of the camp, barely visible in the rapidly falling night. Teal made in the direction of the ribcage, then looked around and crouched behind the bushes. She could faintly make out the shale of Bloodfeather, standing over the other raptor, who was on the ground and bleeding from several scratches and cuts. "What are you doing here, Star?" hissed Bloodfeather. Star? Did Bloodfeather *know* this raptor?
"You raptors promised never to set foot near me or my territory." he continued.
"W-we have a n-new leader, sir. H-he dosent abide b-by the treaty. said Star, blood seeping from his wounds.
"Tell me his name."
"I d-don't know what i-it is."
"LAIR!"
"P-please..."
Before Star could finish, Bloodfeather lunged toward him, biting down on his neck with lethal force.
The Shift
A fanfiction by SilverWings
Chapter 5
They made their way back to camp, not speaking, conserving their limited energy. The sun reflected off Bronzefeather's pale green scales, shining into Tealfeather's eyes. She nearly missed the other raptors when they came into her line of sight. The disheveled group were wandering toward the ribcage of some large creature. It had been dead a while, no stench of decomposition coming from the pristine bones. Teal spotted Scarletfeather, Indigofeather walking beside her and Silverfeather dangling from her jaws. As she watched, Indigo tripped over and let out a pitiful cry. Scarlet set Silverfeather down and picked up Indigo. Teal caught up to the rest of the group and nudged the closest raptor, who happened to be Greenfeather, and motioned for him to pick up her Terror Bird. Green was about Teal's age, and she'd had a ridiculous crush on him when she was younger. She'd gotten over it. Bronzefeather speculated that she would be partnered with him, after all, he was almost the only male raptor around her age. He nodded, saving his breath, and grabbed the terror bird. Teal ran over - or more accurately, power walked over - to Scarletfeather and grabbed Silver by the scruff of her neck. Scarletfeather didn't say anything, but she expressed her thanks with a friendly nudge.
They reached the ribcage and a few of the raptor collapsed - primarily the elder among the group. A hiss sounded from a large rock near the ribcage. Tealfeather turned to see Bloodfeather. "Okay! All prey, there. Let every raptor fo catch their own prey gather nest material. Those nursing baby raptors can stay." Bloodfeather growled, a note of authority clear in his voice. All around him, raptor set to work.
Teal growled angrily. She had barely gathered anything and she knew that Bloodfeather wasn't happy. It wasn't her fault! Ok, for one, those tall green plant things were *spiky*. Tealfeather's inner brooding was cut off by the sight of a small grove of trees. A Lystrosaurus was ambling toward the prospect of food. Instinct dropped Teal into a stalking crouch. There was no cover here, and the Lystro caught sight of her, letting out a squeal and sheltering behind a shrub. *Weird creatures*. Teal pounced on the lystrosaurus, not bothering to finish it off. It squealed pathetically while she ripped up the shrub it had unsuccessfully tried to hide behind before falling silent a short while after. She grabbed the corpse with her teeth and tangled her talons in the shrub. Teal set off toward camp.
Guns n’ Rexes
Chapter 5: A Hat And A Pistol
Jewels. Gems. Crystals. We rode back into the town, the first one, to sell our plunder. ‘Course, we didn’t tell ‘em it was plunder. Turned out that people don’t buy crystals ‘cause they’re pretty or like the sparkle, but ‘cause they’re rare and needed for lots of things. See, you have to travel up the mountains, where all the big and strong carnivores hang about, and harvest the crystals there. Turns out that lad and his bear were tougher than we thought. They then use those crystals to make windows, glasses, telescopes, fancy equipment, and then the really fancy stuff that caught my eye- the next shop we visited was the gun shop.
We were in luck- the blacksmith was in need of crystals. I was like a kid in a candy store, gapin’ and gawpin’ at all those guns, pistols, rifles, shotguns laid out on a tan cloth on a wooden table. Each gun was on its own cloth, with its own bullet type and how many per mag laid out on that same cloth beside it. I brushed my fingers over each gun as I walked past, from rifles to shotguns to revolvers as they sparkled in the light of the glowing irons the blacksmith was hammerin’. I found my way over to the perfect gun, as if it were calling to me… 6 Shots, classic revolver type but with two extra toggles. I flipped one and a knife whizzed out like a bayonette, leaving me as speachless as a toddler waking up on Christmas. I flipped the other switch and heard a clunk, but I could only speculate as to what it did. Left that shop with the pistol you see on my waist today.
“Wait… So you bought it black and red like it is now?”
“‘Course not!” I told Will. “That’s a story for another time. Now lemme finish this tale.”
I took it to the range to test my skills first, and after an hour the gun felt like an old friend that I could never forget. Turns out, I was just as great a shot as I am with a bow. Hit the drainin’ dummy’s eyes, chest and forehead 3 times each- then I remembered the second switch. I reloaded the mag, flipped the toggle and pulled the trigger. The barrel spun round quickly, firing all 6 bullets in a flury of bangs that landed dead in the targets head. I was dumstruck. But somethin’ didn’t feel quite right so we went back into the stores to buy one of those brown leather cowboy hats you see in movies. Walked outta that town like proper cowboys we did.
-Not really an eventful shopping trip, but now they have guns. Last was In Trike, next in Pteranodon.
-Nightfall
Me and Beta:A short friendship.
Exploring the forests I encountered a Raptor.It was dark green colored with red-ish orange feathers.I fell in love with it the moment we I saw it.’’Yes! This would be amazing for my hunting pack!’’ I shouted.(I had a pego and 3 dilos at that time) I trapped it with a bola and knocked it out with a club.I it was tamed I name her Beta.We hunted dilos and other raptors together,until that one faithful moment. A titanoboa lunged out of the bushes and killed my dilos and pegomastax.In tears i also had to watch my beloved Beta get Demolish by the giant beast.
Up=Rip for Beta
I had a raptor named hunter. Health : 960, damage per hit : 40, weigh : 217, stamina : 435.. he was the best raptor I ever had until one day I was hunting megapirranha then a bronto came near my base.. they were one of my worst enemy's cause they get damaged from spike walls then they attack.. there stupid and all but one of my raptors : hunter the alpha of my raptor pack was attacked.. he couldn't take on a lvl 45 bronto but the others joined in.. he still died ... the bronto was stomping away cause of its low health.. idk but not a lot of creatures do that they'll just fight till death.. but anyway the bronto was stomping away and hunter and the others were chasing it... brontos.. when they stomp away they can do damage if your right by the legs .. and hunter died that way just before the bronto died he die.. he was the best dino I had he was fun he had good health and did a good amount of damage like an alpha... you know what to do if you like my story
So 🤣 when I was new I always died to these sh- raptors.. I was like “Ooooo raptor egg better take it and run” so I took it and the WHOLE FREAKING PACK RAN AFTER ME. Recently I got the ARK: Animated Series morph for my raptor Shayla ❤️. She is my favorite. We took down a Spino and T-Rex together. I’m taking her revival chip incase she dies now, bye!