Dododex
ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion
Oh, you don’t read my fanfic? That actually explains a lot.
Also, Aston won’t be answering you, he disappeared several months ago and hasn’t come back since. It was sad, his story hadn’t been finished and he was one of the only friends I had who’s writing style was similar to mine :(
Jointed Mysteries is doing well! but I’m particularly excited for the new one you've been talking about.
Aaand to make it more eye catching to readers, pls try paragraphs. It makes the writing take a bit longer, but becomes instinct after some time.
I would have told you to just do it like I do in my story, but you haven’t read it lol. (Which is totally fine, the first half of the story sucked.)
It’s like, before starting a quote or sentence, you make a few spaces before starting. like I’ve been doing through this whole message.
(Stupid me giving examples when you actually write really well already)
“You can’t catch me!” He yelled, jumping over the log.
She rolled her eyes before going after him.
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“Wait, wait, wait, are— are you sure?” Kat asked.
“One hundred percent sure.” She answered with a small smile.
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It was incredibly annoying. “You know I don’t understand a word you say, right?” Gabbro asked him.
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Ok, so there was me begging you to make paragraphs in yur story. I swear it would help ppl love yur story more and not get confused during certain scenes. Pls.
With all of my respects,
—Moon
