Hey, Dino nerd! I have some ideas for your story to get better! You can do paragraphs like this, (do not do the *** it’s only for example. unless,..)

***

Sally mumbled a bit, “So-uh what was I su-supposed to d-do?” Rax was about to reply but there was a big roar interrupting them.

***

“Sunny! Get back here!” Wally shouted. “No way! You have to catch me first!” Sunny said in annoyance. “Fine!” He shouted again.

***

Ivy hesitated. “W-WHAT? HOW-?” glutch swang from tree to tree. ‘Oh yeah..he’s a Mesopithicus..’

***

Ok and that was me giving you examples of paragraphs. You can also do this;

What

Is

Happening?

Or,

How

Did

He

Do

That?

And those were my examples of new things for ur story. I hope u like my examples.

-SpecialRaptor who is begging u to do paragraphs