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What are some stories about the deinonychus? Memorable deinonychus stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Ranger, if you don’t want it to be stolen or used by anyone else. You may consider using Wattpad since you can have under license.
If you decide to post it here, that’s awesome!!! If you decide that works better, that’s awesome too!!! I don’t want you posting it uncomfortably or with worry about it being stolen.
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Good work on your book, Moon, over I think 60 chapters? That’s longer than one of the Harry Potter books. Impressive. I try to support some fanfictioners, though this may sound rude, the bad thing about some Fanfics is the fact that the title isn’t in capitals( example: the blood forest should be The Blood Forest). Anyway, I don’t mean to be rude by any of this.
Keep on writing!
-Ranger
Sup Ranger, lol I also need coffee rn. Advice for a writer? Well, honestly you are already great. But if yur planning on making another story? Take a lot of time to think about it. That’s my best advice. The Obelisk was not something I thought enough about, so now I’m kind of stuck with a story that’s first half is pretty cringe and resulted in a few plot holes. My future stories, however, (Can’t wait to write Pandora, Clans and See rahh) I had time to think about.
Listen to music, take inspiration from other books and movies, and add some creativity. Once yur imagining scenes in yur head, grab some character personality ideas and fill in the gaps! If it fella empty, add things. If it feels too full, slow down a bit of the plot and remove some unneeded things.
Romance, death, twists and turns are great to keep readers in! Hope this helps at all lmao, just some of the firsthand bits my teenage self uses. Bye!
—Moonflight
Wow Ranger, the prologue and first Chapter were so good! Very suspenseful.
Im glad that you would tell us your backstory. I almost died when I was born too. One of the doctors was an idiot and almost cut my head open during the C-section. I find it awesome, though, knowing that I’m a survivor and I was a tough one to get out of there.
I have a brother, and BOY can he be annoying as heck. Ah, whatever, I love him anyways. He probably finds me evil a lot of the time.
It’s cool to know you base your character off of yourself, I’ve done that sometimes too with my characters in the Obelisk. I usually just stick a little bit of me in them and then build up the rest.
Your story has so much potential! I can’t wait for more!
P.S. Queen Scarlet is one of my favorite villains. I like to tell people that it’s OK to love and hate her at the same time. Cause I sure do, man. I sure do.
Oh, and did you read my most recent chapters, 59 and 60, of The Obelisk? I’d love to know what you think about the characters I mentioned!
—Moon 😋
Ingenious, Moon, absolutely ingenious. And the reason I’m both is the fact that I hated being TheRaptorMan, I was a tad of a jerk. I felt I needed to drop that side of me. So, really, I’m neither. Thanks for calling me out from that, Moon, it really helped. I’m sorry I lied to y’all but really, I’m neither, yet both. I know Imma probably get a million downvotes, but that’s OK. I could just be a terrible writer and be hated. And that’s probably what’ll happen, but I guess I’ll lay low for a while. Bye guys.
-Ranger
The Tribe Of Shadows Prophecy (of course there’s a prophecy).
Across the Sea where Shadows lie
The shifting Darkness rolls
Across the Sea, The Sun will rise
To save the lands of old
Across the Sea, the brightest Night
The Light will rise at dawn
Across the Sea, the end of Light
Until the Shadows fall
Across the Sea with Power Great
We all will join the cry
Across the Sea, the Light will wake
The Dark Lord will Die
Across the Sea with joy we’ll sing
Until the End of Time
A peace for all of Life.
-Ranger
I had deinonychus who’s name was delta. He could destroy anything one time an alpha Rex attacked my base he killed it with ease (I am playing a modded version) he could kill anything scale anything and run extremely fast. One day a solar flare happened and he was incinerated right before he reached shelter. Rip delta
Here’s the last of Urthaa’s many, many creatures (that I’ve catalogued):
Surri’ko; (Translated; Gut-Butcher) Parasitic relatives of the Zerr’ain that, when they smell blood, crawl up from the ground, tear the wound wider, and burrow into the wounded animal/human, devouring their organs and staying inside the body for up to a week to drink its blood. Their venom is paralytic. They commonly have brown, reddish, or greenish scales. Roughly 1 foot long. The Sahr believe them to be the Spawn of Torrin.
Qurr’mij; (Translated; Sea Reaper) Descendants of Mosasaurus that live in the Great Murkai and Erewi oceans and viciously attack anything in their territory. They are known to snatch Boggr’u or regular birds from the sky to supplement their diet. Their scales are bluish white or greenish, depending on the subspecies. 50-72 feet long, 12 feet wide, 9 feet tall. The Yuur consider them demons. The Ere’kaa see them as gods, the Brood of Ferunner; to be feared and respected.
Tirii; (Translation: Common Fin) A common type of filter-feeding fish eaten by every Clan with water access, along with many predators, particularly the Qurr’mij. They have six fins, and are typically greenish in coloration. 3-5 feet long, 1 foot tall.
Boggu’makor; (Translation; World-Borer) Gargantuan relatives of the Boggu’ari that descended into the deep for safety and territory. They were what dug out the Weio’nuuli, with clawed wings and white-hot fire-venom. 10 feet tall, 300 feet long.
-Ranger
Secondary lore-dump!
BEASTS OF URTHAA
There are many beasts on Urthaa. Listed here are only a fraction of them.
Ter’vaan; (Translated; Sacred Claw) Large, quadrupedal creatures, with a thin layer of black or brown feathers over their scales. Descendants of Inostrancevia, they have serrated fangs, ridged claws, and barbed tail-blades that are able to retract into keratin ‘sheaths’. Roughly 12 feet long, 6.6 feet tall.
Boggr’u; (Translated; Soaring Death) Massive wyverns with rust-colored scales and maws, full of serrated fangs, that drip green fire-venom. Under their throats are sacs that pulse with the aforementioned fire-venom. They have a thin layer of brown or black feathers, though the Ero’tul breed has thicker whitish feathers. 30 feet long, 5.9 feet tall.
Boggu’ari; (Translated; Earth-scorcher) The flightless cousins of the Boggr’u, they use their heavy wings as clawed hammers while in combat, and as front legs when walking. Ridden by Ere’kaa and Tyrvun berserkers, belching crimson fire-venom that clings as it scorches. Capable of gliding for short distances, but not powered flight. 7 feet tall, 22 feet long.
Ter’fyn Wolves; (Translated; Shadow Wolves) Large wolves that stalk the northern plateaus and mountains, their pelts gray, black, and white, to blend into the snow and rocks. 5 feet tall, 9 feet long.
Rakrii Deer; (Translated; Forest-wraith Deer) Ter’fyn Wolves’ preferred prey. Their pelts are dappled brown and black, to mimic tree bark. Fully grown bucks are capable of trampling and goring predators with their antlers. 7 feet tall, 9 feet long.
Okrii goats; (Translated; Vampire Goats) Horrifyingly carnivorous mountain goats that blend into the darkened snow of night and tear out the throats of prey. 4 feet tall, 5 feet long.
Tol’bbeg; (Translated; Blaze Demon) Black- or red-scaled, flightless, plateau-stalking relatives of the Boggr’u that spit bluish fire-venom. Their arms are long, heavily muscled with short, powerful claws that are used for knuckle-walking, burrowing, and attacking. The Tol’bbeg are ridden by a Sahr terrorist group known as the Snar-Kekk. ‘God-Eaters’. 8 feet tall, 40 feet long. They are believed to be the embodiments of the Uio’taii-Kaa.
Wre’nneg‘us: (Translated: Village-feed Beast) Pig-like creatures, with short, curled tusks and thick brown hides. Used as livestock by the Ere’kaa, Tyrvun, who breed them for thinner fur and thicker hide, and Ero’tul, who breed them to have thicker fur for survival in the harsh cold. Their hides are often used for cloaks by non-warriors.
Tyrui; (Translated; War Tiger) Descendants of the Thylacoleo, brawnier and better at climbing, with thumb claws designed for grappling and slashing. Tyrui have reddish or brown pelts. They are ridden solely by the Violl. Native to the Smukr Forests of the West. 5 feet tall, 8 feet long.
Mur’don; (Translated; Brutal Huntsman) Descendants of Qianzhousaurus, with longer arms, six spikes on their snouts, and osteoderms lining their backs and limbs. Mur’don are capable of walking on all fours or its hind limbs. (Facultative bipeds) Most often have gray or greenish scales, though some have blood-red scales, and are thus considered sacred. They hunt in packs of up to six, and are ridden only by Ere’kaa shock-troops. They feed on human corpses, Tyrui, Okrii goats, Rakrii deers, and Ter’fyn wolves. Their packs, called Mar’toa (Translated; Nightmares), are led by a Ter-Vuuli, the largest male, which translates to ‘Blood Lord’. 6.7 feet tall, 36 feet long. The Ere’kaa believe them to be the Sons of Tirra, sent to sow chaos and punish unworthy warriors.
Axiir; (Translated; Great Tusk) Descendants of mammoths that became carnivorous due to scarce resources. Their tusks are serrated, to cut through flesh, and their trunks are tipped with 4 bone claws. 20 feet tall, 30 feet long. Believed to be Ice-gods given flesh.
Tur’naak; (Translated; Horrific Maw) Massive, spider-like monstrosities with six legs and two scorpion-like claws, barbed raptorial jaws, and opaque, blackish, or orangish shells. Only seen in deep caves and the Salt Barrens of the Southwest. 5 feet tall, 10 feet long. Considered demons sent by Ferunner; “Life is a mistake. The Tur’naak are the cure.”
Zerr’ain; (Translated; Swamp Ghost) Amphibious wyrm-snakes, distant descendants of the Titanaboa. Their scales are mottled bluish, greenish, or muddy brown. They haunt the Blackwater Swamp, near the Sahr’s territory. 3 feet tall, 25 feet long.
Kaar’vior; (Translated: Man-snatcher Wing) Large vampire bats with brown or black pelts that feed on livestock and children. On rare occasions, they snatch adult humans from the ground, particularly during the Black Silence (Winter). When slain, their wings are often used as cloaks or gliders. 6 foot wingspan, 3 feet long, 2 feet tall. The Suun’tai believe them to be demons sent by Terva to terrorize incompetent hunters or heretics.
And this isn’t all of them!
-Ranger
Lore-drop, people! (Kinda late, but this should be enough lore to make up for it):
THE GODS OF URTHAA
Tirra, Terva, and Ferunner are the three main gods.
Tirra is the god of war, night, and chaos. Depicted as a man with dark red skin and three snarling Mur’don heads, in bone-iron armor, holding an Ur’nott in one hand and a Mar’toa-Naka in the other.
Terva is the goddess of hunting, guarding (in any form), and silence. Depicted as a woman with the head of a Ter’fyn wolf and Suun’tai armor.
Ferunner is the god of fire, life, and death. Depicted as a golden Boggr’u with five heads.
To the Sahr, there is also Torrin. The Bones of the Ground. God of hunger, murder, and vengeance. Depicted as a goat-horned shadow of a man.
The Eldest Tale
Every child of every Clan learns how Urthaa was born, with some differences.
During the Age Before, the world was naught. Only Ferunner’s light pierced the shadows of Torrin, his accursed shadow-kin, banished to the Void Beneath.
After many, many millennia, Ferunner’s Fire grew dim with boredom. So, he chose to create. First, a spark of golden fire flickered from his claw. From it was born Tirra, baying like the hound he was forged to be, his crimson light flickering eerily. And so, Ferunner spoke, his voice everywhere and nowhere: “You, Spawn of Fire, shall be known as Tirra. You will be my Wolf, my soldier.” Ferunner turned, his eyes blazing brighter. From that blaze came the silver light, Terva, bow already in hand, cloak swaying in a breeze that did not exist. And so, Ferunner spoke, his voice everywhere and nowhere: “You, Spawn of Light, shall be known as Terva. You will be my Huntress, my killer.”
Thus, it was as Ferunner said. His claws traced the Void, tearing from it a rock. One of his tears fell upon this rock, and from it sprung water. Terva came to watch, slowly circling the odd rock. She breathed upon it, and from that breath came the ground. Tirra’s eyes burned. “Let me, sister.” He came closer, the light of his eyes spawning beasts from the sea, what we know as the beyond-ancient kin of the Mur’don and Boggr’u. Ferunner closed his fist around the rock, and when he opened it, there was true life upon it…
But Torrin’s darkness stained the rock, creating death, chaos, hunger.
Ferunner spoke once more, the final time he would speak, his voice coming from everywhere and nowhere: “Let this stone be known as Urthaa, for it bears life.”
-Ranger
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