Rathalos (S1 Ep8)

Riker was about to go insane.

Was it to much to ask for a map? She had been in this dumb dungeon for DAYS. She had started seeing things. Rainbow dodos... something that looked like a small procoptodon... she was hearing things... loud footsteps... something that sounded like a frog... she couldn’t take it. She saw a large room and decided to rest for awhile. And then... we’re those... kapros? And Sarcos? Come out of the ground. Instinctively she fired her bow, quickly clearing the room. And yet another wave came from the floor, she cleared those as well. Twice more. Finally the room stopped producing eerie life forms and she left as fast as she could. At the end of the hall was a chest... with a key in it! She ran back to the door, and came across another large room... this time a frog emerged. She tried to run back out, but the door had sealed itself. Firing rapidly, she brought the frog down, it’s tongue brushing her. She staggered to the wall and blacked out.

So, Bob, and everyone else, Ive found a trick for you fanfictioners..

Im 100% sure you get the glitch too, where in stories if you make it too long the next word you type, once you press spacebar or punctuation it erases it, correct? Well I have found a trick

All you have to do once you get to that point is scroll up, make it like a funny tip or encountering ect., and change it back to a story tip! Always works for me!

Hello everyone! It’s me bob from a song of compys and gigas. Chap 6 just posted on the spider thingy. I’m sorry if the story is a bit slow. The amount of chapters will be a lot to say the least cause I have a lot to say. Also if you peeps wana meet me in ark itself I live on the unofficial sever tapajaria in ark mobile. Chap 7 comes out tomorrow!

I found one of these guys it hissed at me so I ran away screaming 😂

Once upon a Time I saw one in the red wood trees

I just tamed one fed it chitin (I’m on mobile) I dident know how to glide so I just jumped and… off the cliff I went oh yes I flew of a cliff and in to a pit off sarcoma titanoboas and kaps lol rip jhonnny

Had one trapped at the green ob in a breeding/taming chamber on mobile solo… got everything ready, took me all day to get everything together and when I finally got back to the pure white perfect level 1 unicorn, I had creed blasting in my ears and a grin on my face then… the bloody thing had despawned >:( I’m now playing tool and killing everything that moves on a giga for vengeance

Fun fact: it can escape if you catch it with flying tame like argentavis, even tho how many times you catch it they keep fell and escape from you

Once you tame it you'll always go back to get more. I mean can beat it have a Smithy on it

Toxic Tales: Chapter 7

Glimmer

Achelois landed next to the allos with Elpis right behind her, "We lost the wyverns after I shot one out of the air," said Elpis.

"Good," responded Moirae, "Asclepius, can you make sure we have everyone, after everyone's here we leave. Chiron, help this allo however you can."

Chiron ran over, he had pale gray scales and black armor plating. He inspected the wound before saying, "There's nothing we can do, he's already gone."

"Is there anyone who can look after his hatchling?" Moirae asked.

"No, he has no living relatives, I'll see if someone will raise her alongside their clutch."

"Thank you, tell her what's happening too, but be gentle about it."

"I will, don't worry."

Asclepius walked over and Achelois noticed a glimmer on his armor plate on his right arm. "It looks like that stone," she thought, "it bonded itself to my scales, is it possible that the same thing happened to him, and if so, how did it happen?"

"We have everyone, are we leaving soon?" He said.

"No, first we'll set him in the clearing so that he may find peace in the sky," said Moirae grimly.

"Alright, I'll be ready," Asclepius said.

Moirae called out three allos to take him to the clearing while Asclepius walked over to her and Elpis.

"You didn't understand a word of that did you?" He asked them.

"No," they responded.

"Okay, so when one of us allos die we take them the clearing, and afterward they go to a paradise amongst the sky, there, if they have something to tell us they give us a message, usually in dreams, that says what will happen, sometimes they tell you the message in the form of a cryptic speech we call a prophecy," Asclepius explained.

"Does it only happen to allos or every creature?" Asked Elpis.

"As far as we know it happens to everyone, we've gotten messages from spinos, therizinosaurs, rock drakes, and all sorts of creatures, usually it's only allos though," he said.

"What's the clearing?" Achelois questioned.

"You see that floating pillar not far from here? It's directly below it and while not everyone who gives us a message was left there, it's been a tradition for generations and we do it out of respect."

"Asclepius, can I see your right talon real quick?" Achelois asked.

"Sure, why?" He responded.

"Because I saw something glimmer earlier," she saw it, the color, the pattern, it was the same stone, "I was right!" She yelled, "It's the same stone as mine!"

Sorry I haven't posted in a while, it might be slow for a bit but should go back to normal soon.

- Sol

Good tip for multiplayer servers if you are on a pvp server fill your archy up with potato’s and a little bit of chitin so greedy chitin stealers only get a handful of chitin and a ton of potato’s

Rathalos (S2 Ep7)

It was awkward from then on seeing Riley.

Both Riker and Rathalos avoided her as much as possible. They avoided everyone as much as possible. They had officially lost all trust in everyone from DTC. Who was the guy? And was anyone else involved?

And that’s when they heard the shouting.

“Ya can’t just make ur own creatures for ur own usage!” “It is not for my own purpose, Hazel. I intend to use them to protect our tribe. What do you not understand?” “I understand plenty, Ri! I understand tha’ ur nuts! Ya can’t just make creatures! No matter wha’ yer goin ta use em for! Our real creatures ar doin just fine!” “WELL WE CAN DO BETTER!!” The voices quieted just long enough for Riker and Rathalos to shoot each other a glance that said: is Hazel on our side? Either that or: do I smell steak? I’m betting #1. Anyway, the voices continued to argue, but more softly.

Once I was taming one of these guys, I had a pteranodon naked Spyro. Two raptors killed it and I had no way back.

To Penny, the writer of Redwood Spirit

Yur fanfic is really good!I love the plot and get super excited when July gets page time. She’s definitely a character I love—not very many people wrote with Raptors as nice characters!

Very straightforward tho. Kind of hard to focus with it all jumbled up. I like it a lot, but I feel like Xavier should have got a little more sorry (and suspicion) before he was b r u t a l y murdered.

It would be way more enticing if you wrote like this.

“WHAT DO YOU WHAT?” Xavier shouted, covering his son with his wings.

The Thylacoleo pounced onto the nearest branch, scowling at him. “Revenge,” he snarled.

The Thylacoleo roared and leapt towards him, his claws outstretched. Xavier spread his wings to lift off—

but it was too late.

the carnivore opened his jaws and snapped them shut around his waste.

Xavier let out a shuddering gasp.

Blood spurted acrossed the nest.

It would have been nice if we’d got to know the father a little bit more. I haven’t read all the chapters but—the father would have killed Aki? I don’t see why—a little backstory of the father or more time with the mother in the nest might have helped readers understand “OH, that’s why he said THAT OR ACTED LIKE THIS,”

also, paragraphs help a lot. Present tense is ok, but past tense is more helpful to the reader.

And last, the Mother totally didn’t have any grief really for her husband. And immediately just believed the Thylacoleo instead of denial or anger. I’ve experienced grief myself, so the five stages of grief are very quick to remember.

This sorry is very good—the writing is all I’m saying needs improvement 👍

The way sentences work:

“Of course not,” said Lily. “I totally understand.”

*

“How dare you!” Ajar cried.

*

Allen froze, struck by that thought. “Oh—that’s alright… I guess.”

*

“We,” Zoe whispered, grinning mischievously in the darkness, “are going adventuring.”

*

“Blah blah blah—Ack!” Ebony jumped back as a bucket of water was flung her way. “What was that for?”

“For my amusement,” Kixx said with a smile.

Love yur fanfic!

😄 -Moon

-The RedWoods Spirit-CHAPTER 7 <3

SORRY THIS ONE WAS SHORT I PROMISE CHAPTER 8 WILL BE LONGER

They walk further in with caution before they here a *THUD* “What was that?!” Thylacoleo asks “WHERE AM I?!” July yells “Oh, her..” Thylacoleo replies before it continued walking “We found this blue biome and decided to explore it!” Janet says before July gets up from her fall and replies “Woah! It’s really pretty!!” Before they kept walking until they saw a egg, “I- Where’s it’s mother..?” Freya asks before walking closer to it “I’m not sure, We should probably leave it, it’s mother should be back soon” Thylacoleo adds “But I wanna take it!!” July yells “NO! We don’t know if it’s stronger than us” Thylacoleo yells, Turning around fast and roaring at July and turning its head forward again and walking, “well that was unexpected!” JAnEt whispers in Julys ear “agreed..” July replies as they catch up with the others though, with a unexpected guest..

**5h LATER**

“Ugh are we back home yet?!” Aki yells while he rolls his eyes and gets bored, “Close..” Freya replies “OH YIPEE!!” Aki screams in excitement before Janet climbs the steep hill and Thylacoleo puts Aki and Freya on its back and climbs up “WHAT ABOUT ME?!” July yells before Thylacoleo reaches his paw down and July bites on it as the Thylacoleo pulls July up, Looking at its bitten paw Thylacoleo gets over it and keeps walking back to where there cave is. “Yay we’re home!!” Aki yells before getting off Thylacoleo and playing in the Cold, Green flowy grass “I’m gonna go out on a hunt Janet says before heading out “I guess I’ll come!!” Freya replies before hopping on Janet’s back “Ill watch Aki” Thylacoleo adds, sitting outside the cave before July suspiciously enters the cave “Hmm its probably nothing..” Thylacoleo mumbles to its self. “Ok now, How do I take care of you..?” July asks herself

-The Redwoods Spirit-CHAPTER 4

The Thylacoleo says before apologizing “What would’ve happened if you didn’t kill my husband..?” Freya asks nervously “He probably would have killed Aki..” The Thylacoleo replies before a loud booming caw was heard from above, without hesitation the Thylacoleo grabs Freya and puts her onto its back before grabbing Aki and running like the wind “WHY ARE WE RUNNING?!” Aki yells “ARGENTAVIS!!” The Thylacoleo replies “THE WHAT?” Freya asks before the Thylacoleo quickly ducks down before a pair of shiny sharp talons go over Freyas head “OH ARGENTAVIS” Freya realizes before they hear a voice “OVER HERE!!” July yells while the Thylacoleo rushes over to the cave, right after they enter the argentavis runs into the dens archway before landing on the ground trying to squeeze into the den, though the exit was to small and narrow for a argentavis to fit “Freya is that ur son? And is that the Thylacoleo who stole him?!” July asks “it’s a long story..” Freya and the Thylacoleo says at the same time

**After explaining**

“Ooh so that’s why I were so injured!!” July says “yea..” Freya said before the ground weirdly starts to shake rapidly “WHATS GOING ON?” Aki yells “I DONT KNOW BUT WE MEED TO HURRY GET ON MY BACK!!” The Thylacoleo yells “ILL FOLLOW!!” July adds, They struggle getting out of the cave, rocks tumbling the cave collapsing! They make it out and all the Dino’s are panicking! “WATCH OUT!!” July yells before a tree falls, luckily they ran out of the way in time “LOOK A TUNNEL!! WE SHOULD BE SAFE IN HERE!!” Freya yells pointing to the tunnel before the Thylacoleo rushes towards it, entering not knowing what lies beyond the tunnel

**Later**

“Where are we..?” July asks looking around at this massive cave like environment “I don’t know..” The Thylacoleo adds “Is that a mushroom tree?” Freya asks “Yuck!” Aki says before they start wandering more into the “cave”, “Why do the Dino’s look different? They have neon stripes-?” Freya asks “Let’s go ask, maybe they speak our language?” July asks “Ok.. just be polite we don’t know what might offend them” The Thylacoleo adds “Hello!! My names July, who are you?” July asks politely “Uh.. I’m Kato” ??? Says “May I ask why u have neon glowing stripes?” July asks “Ohh you don’t know where you are do you” Kato asks “Nope! Not at all” July replies “Well to answer ur first question I’m a X-Trike, And to answer ur second question ur in the environment called Aberration” Kato explains “Oh! Well thanks Kato!” July says before running back to the others “So what did they say?” Freya asks “Well they said were in a environment called.. Aberration..” July replies “I’ve never heard of that” The Thylacoleo says “Wait.. I think that’s redwoods right there!” Aki says before they walk over “Hmm it looks a little different..” Freya replies “I agree!” July adds

PART 1, 2 AND 3 ARE OUT

from: Penny

-The Redwoods Spirit-CHAPTER2

The thylacoleo jumped branch to branch while Aki would scream in fear “ M-MA MA!!” Freya would hear the loud, echoing screams of her son and would quickly drop the chitin and followed the sound “MA MA!!” Aki would scream some more, Aki would then hear the thylacoleo mumble something about weather and revenge “LET GO OF MY SON!!” Freya would yell before quickly clinging onto the Thylacoleos back and biting/nipping it before getting bucked off by the thylacoleo shaking, falling off the tall redwoods branch, injured though alive “I- help m-me..” Freya would try to yell but the impact from the ground was so strong it severely injured one of her ribs making it hard to yell, she would then notice a passing by raptor *Freyas mind: this is the end for me..* “Oh dear heavens! What happened to you!” The raptor would yell rushing towards Freya “I- I-..” Freya would try to respond but couldn’t, she passed out..

*later..*

“Ugh.. w-where am I..” She would wake up in a dark, rocky cave before looking at 2 beaming yellow eyes standing right above her “Ur awake!! Oh my I actually saved someone!!” The raptor would say happily while bouncing up and down “yea yea, it’s not that exiting July” A raptor would reply while walking into the cave “SHUT UP JERALD! I NEED TO HELP THEM!!” July would yell while a loud echo would be heard from the cave while Freya covered her ears with her small, sharp clawed hands “hm? Oh dear! I’m so sorry, did that hurt ur ears??” July would ask while looking at the Archaeopteryx “No No, it’s fine..” Freya would reply “What did you save anyway?” Jerald would say shoving July to the side “Oh these things.. I hate them..” Jerald would mumble “A Archaeopteryx, there pretty rare, u can see why you would save it” Jerald would exclaim pretending like he didn’t mumble anything “See? Now shoo! I need to help her!” July would tell Jerald before he left

*Few days later*

**Snoring..** “Wake up!” The thylacoleo would yell “AHH!!” Aki would scream tumbling off a thin redwoods branch before getting caught by the thylacoleo, “Carful, it’s a thin branch, if you fall the impact will kill you” the thylacoleo would say before dropping a piece of meat infront of Aki “Gross!!” Aki would say before turning his head and spitting his tounge out

CHAPTER 1 IS OUT

from: Penny

Microraptors better and cuter brother

Dodo tales person, Seasnake, your stories inspired me to write some too, Its called: "Flame's Legacy" btw, i love your stories

-Flare the archaeopteryx /(new name) Albino Cormorant

Flame's Legacy (chapter 2:The first challange)

3 months later...

"Finnally, its morning." Flame started preening her feathers.

"Good morning, Flame!" Mint woke up. "It's time for your glide training! Get ready!"

"Okay mom!" Said Flame "Wheres Dad?"

"He went to hunt" Answered Mint

In that moment, Wildfire ran in the base:

"In the tree! Quick! A Dire Bear is coming this way! Ill distract it!"

"No. Ill distract it. You two get in the tree."Said Flame.She wanted to keep her parents safe.

"Flame! Its too dangerous! "

" I know, but i don't care.Oh no, dad, are you ok?" Flame realised Wildfire had a broken wing.

"The direbear broke my wing,i cant climb the tree.."

"Alr, ill help u get to safety" Flame picked up her dad and placed him on the nearest branch.

The bear came running into the base, and started shaking the tree.

"Flame, don't! Its too dangerous!" Mint started crying.

Flame ignored her and pounced on the bear, biting its ear. The bear tried to take her off with its paw, but Flame dodged it and started biting the bear again. The bear started running,scared.

"F-Flame, you... you defeated the bear! You saved us!" Mint was proud