HELLO.

I have come. Here is a few Allo Tooth Necklace story tips:

Make chapters longer. If you have the glitch where it shortens it, make the story tip a funny tip and put it back to stories

Give characters personalities. Have a plan for the character personalities, like maybe Tom will be smart, brave, but not good at fighting (this is just an example) and the other character that I forgot the name for good be brave, good at fighting, but not smart (again, just an example).

Once you have the personalities, give the characters time to grow them and show them off. Meaning; give a long story so that the characters can grow the personalities they have and their skills.

And finally,

Be descriptive. Use words that describe the surroundings and what they look like or feel like. However,

if you want likes on your stories (I know this from experience *sniff*) then you shouldn't be too descriptive and the story for likes should be packed with action.

go on for my experiences: My stories now get 3 likes max,

if even two, because I have such long chapters that nobody wants to read them and such a slow rising action that nobody wants to read them. But I do it anyways, because I want it to be as close as an actual story as possible.

-Seasnake