Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Galaxia!!!!! Welcome Back!!!!!!! It’s so good to have you back!!!! If you need a Table of Context for where the stories are and who they’re written by, I can send one!! Also I changed my name from Apex to PrimalApex, so if you’re wondering who this is, it’s Apex and not someone else who has a similar name. Be excited to talk to more!!! Well, Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
Oh my gah
Chloe and Andre’s noooooo and that fight could have been easily avoided! Ben! Seriously great chapter, really enjoyed it. And yeah, working on all of my stories at the same time is honestly easier for me, and it’s finally paying off! Expect Clans third chapter soon and Pandora’s next chapter afterwards!
I dunno abt See don’t ask me about See yet.
As for my favorite and least favorite TAOH characters… I really liked Andres. Darn you. Though my favorite of them has to be either Ben orrrr Neddy. No! Ian. Ian and Paul are my favorite favorites. And I hate June. So there.
—Moon
If you break it you buy it Moon!! That door has been broke way too many times!!
Ben, the newest chapters of TAOH were great!!! Ahh Warren NOOOOOOOO!!! President Dan is going to pay for this!!!
Eww June is very very obsessed with Ben, she’s revolting. I think I hate her more than Michael. And she crushed Ben’s flower!!! Meanie. And Paul, Carlos and John are here to save the day!!! You’re going down June. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
-SunnyFox57
*Breaks down door*
I’m still here, I’m still here! Working on Clans, Pandora and See at the same time and it’s not very productive. It’s happening, though. I agree, Fandom is great but we gotta stay active on here as well! And I’ve been here the whole time trust me, I’m not hiding away… Loving all the new chapters of all your stories… Spectating quietly
And waiting for the next TOT chapter cough Apex how’s that going
—Moon
Baaaaad things are happening…
Hey guys, Moon here, very recently I’ve noticed all of my Chapters are very hard to find, (unless you Google them) so I checked my tips, and low and behold, everything has gone from multiple ups to zero. The same thing is happening to Wyvernian. I’ve been checking sections, and several random tips are no longer as upped as they were.
I’m very afraid that half of Dododex is getting wiped.
—Moon
War
A full-moon glowed on smooth boulders, turning them silver. The silence was broken only by the ripple of water from the swift black river and the whisper of trees in the forest beyond.
There was a stirring in the shadows, and from all around lithe dark shapes crept stealthily over the rocks. Earth-shattering roars echoed through the night. Wary eyes flashed like amber. And then, as if on a silent signal, the creatures leaped at each other, and suddenly the rocks were alive with barys and raptors.
At the centre of the frenzy, a massive dark raptor pinned a bracken colored bary to the ground. “Riverstalker!” the raptor growled. “How dare you hunt in our territory? The Sarcorocks belong to RaptorClan!”
“After tonight, Brainbasher, this will just be another BaryClan hunting ground!” The bracken colored bary spat back.
A warning roar came from the shore. “Look out! More BaryClan warriors are coming!” Brainbasher turned to see barys sliding out of the water below the rocks. The drenched BaryClan warriors bounded silently up the shore and hurled themselves into battle.
The dark raptor glared down at Riverstalker. “You may swim like kapros, but you and your warriors do not belong in this forest!” He drew back his lips and showed his teeth as the bary struggled beneath him.
The desperate scream of a RaptorClan raptor rose above the clamor. A wiry BaryClan bary had pinned the flat on her belly. Now he lunged towards her neck.
Brainbasher heard the cry and let go of Riverstalker. With a mighty leap, he knocked the enemy warrior away from the raptor. “Quick, Jerboafur, run!” he ordered, before turning on the BaryClan bary who had threatened her. Jerboafur scrambled to her feet, wincing from a deep gash on her shoulder, and raced away.
Behind her, Brainbasher spat with rage as the BaryClan bary attempted to break his neck but clawed his back. Blood blinded him for an instant, but he lunged forward regardless and sank his teeth into the leg of his enemy. The BaryClan bary roared and struggled free.
“Brainbasher!” The screech came from a warrior with a tail as red as blood. “This is useless! There are too many BaryClan warriors!”
“No, Bloodtail. RaptorClan will never be beaten!” Brainbasher screeched back, leaping to Bloodtail’s side. “This is our territory!” Blood was welling around his broad black back, and he shook his back impatiently, scattering scarlet drops onto the rocks.
RaptorClan will honor your courage, Brainbasher, but we cannot afford to lose anymore of our warriors,” Bloodtail urged.”Manastar would never expect her warriors to fight against these impossible odds. We will have another chance to avenge this defeat.” He met Brainbasher’s amber-eyed gaze steadily, then reared away and sprang on to a boulder at the edge of the trees.
“Retreat, RaptorClan! Retreat!” he screeched. At once his warriors squirmed and struggled away from their opponents. Spitting and snarling, they backed towards Bloodtail. For a heartbeat, the BaryClan barys looked confused. Was this battle so easily won? Then Riverstalker roared a jubilant cry. As soon as they heard him, the BaryClan warriors raised their voices and roared.
Bloodtail looked down at his warriors. With a flick of his tail, he gave the signal and the RaptorClan raptors dived down the far side of the Sarcorocks, then disappeared into the trees.
Brainbasher followed last. He hesitated at the edge of the forest and glanced back at the bloodstained battlefield. His face was grim, his eyes furious slits. Then he leaped after his clan into the silent forest.
As Bloodtail prepared to go to sleep he felt something grabbing his neck. He turned his head to look and said “Well played Riverstalker.” And then he felt a crack and it all went black.
-Fenrir
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