Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Ballad of the Marginatas
Chp 1
Blueberry climbed onto Stormy as she scratched at the ground impatiently, she squawked at the sudden tug on her reins and she lifted off into the redwoods, Blueberry thought “She’s practically the queen of this place being a high level and all, she’s the best bird anybody could ask for” suddenly a Thycleo came diving out of a tree and Stormy made a loud screech scratching it’s underbelly as she and Blueberry went tumbling down. “NO” Blueberry screamed since he had finally gotten enough resources to build another tree base and had an achatina nearby, then he heard a loud hiss and a pained roar, he had dirt and grass in his eyes so he could hardly see but his eyes widened as a second Thycleo came bounding over “Oh (word replaced by Dodo)”
Extinctions overseer: season one episode one. It was a fine morning the sun was shining and birds where chirping George awoke in his small thatch hut. The day started like any normal day he got up out of bed got dressed and made breakfast from a few dodo eggs. After he had finished eating he went out and fed speedy his raptor and his para the George said to himself I need to get a better base so he started chopping down some trees for wood and the made some wood foundations but soon later he had heard some rumbling in the distance...... btw the second episode will be in the allo section tomorrow
The Red Pike- Rockwell’s Story Chap 2 By swamp
Rockwell waited until night to make his move. Moving silently, he snatched a Tapejara, one of the many tames organized across the impressive base.
“Hey, what-“ Guards came storming at him with rifles. Rockwell ran and hid behind a trough. He had to get out.
“We know who you are, Rockwell.” The guard yelled. “We just want to talk.”
Rockwell aimed his bow. His gun had been taken when he was arrested, but no one had noticed the compound bow he hid in his bag.
Thwok. One guard down.
“Stop it, Rockwell.” The other said. He held his hands up and walked toward Thomas.
“What do you want with me?” He asked.
“Our leader wants to speak with you.”
“Your leader?”
“Nerva.”
Goliaths story
Chapter 4
Goliath looked at the chaos he caused, and decided to use the corpses for something good, food. He began to feed on the corpses, ripping them in half and devouring them. He had a strange feeling that he would need the energy from the bodies. Once he had finished, he started taking pieces of wood and fashioning battle armour. Goliath then left and ripped a tree out of the ground, stripped it of its branches and formed a club. He walked over to the giga corpse and ripped it open, blood poured out onto the ground and Goliath scooped out the gigas intestines. Using a mix of organs, intestines and blood, he covered himself in war paint. Goliath looked to the horizon and smelt human, he knew he would need the armour, as this was no ordinary human, it was Nerva.
Ben, I read the newest chapters of TAOH. They were awesome, I loved them!! I KNEW it!!!!! Sam and Warren are falling back in looooooooove!!!!! (Gosh, I don’t know why I’m so excited about this but I’m so happy!!!) I’m so glad!! And Warren and Sam’s background story is kind of…interesting. Walt kind of reminded me of Michael. Ehh I didn’t like him. …although I don’t understand why Warren killed him. That was probably the first person that Warren killed in his life. I think. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
-SunnyFox57
Ok few things for people writing after chapter 42,
1, when Willow fazed through the ground she went all the way down to the white obelisks terminal.
2, I left out some of the fights and made the King Titan fight shorter so there’s could write them, just make sure you make the bloodmoon happen at the right time if you are writing before that.
3, Apex is not dead, he will be unconscious for a bit though, and he didn’t actually get much smaller Drain was just growing rapidly. Drain is now bigger than a wyvern, a bit bigger than a dragon maybe, but his wingspan is huge.
4, the dagger of balance is not an evil artifact inherently, Andrew will have to use it if he wants to become herald, but it would stay mostly black until they defeat Drain and reclaim balance.
5, the voice will tempt Andrew to do what Drain did, but him refusing will make him herald.
6, is the voice the omega Titan? Idk do you want it to be 🙃
7, when Samuel attacked the kids Jay teleported Star to them and she ended up attacking him to protect the kids, that’s why he’s being a baby at the bottom of the stairs.
8, the voice didn’t come from the dagger, it was just telling Drain to use it, who the voice is is a plot hole for future us to fill.
Ok that’s it, bye!
-Wyvernian
From Ben
Wyvernian I loved Chapter 42 of TOT and all the fight scenes were executed really well! All of it was super awesome and enjoyable to read! Drain becoming the new herald was also good (and now that you think about it makes sense since hes technically the 1st villain to spawn on Omega Timeline) and was super crazy. DEW IT DRAIN. Now he’s super strong and the rankings must be adjusted again. Anyway that was a really fun chapter, cant wait to see what PrimalApex does for 43!
Moon, chapter thirty nine of TOT was great!!!! I love how they were abstracted, and it’s funny how Zeer just glanced around then was like nope, and flew away!! 🤣. And Tago and Jethezzar recognizing each other just makes me more curious for what will happen in See!! The only complaint I have is that you spelled Michael wrong, but that ok! Other than that the chapter was awesome!!! Bravo.
Ben, chapter forty was pretty freakin cool!! Lol, I love how Ben was running up the stairs and he was like “ugh I knew this was a bad idea” 😂😂. Stairs are like his mortal enemy or something…
The battles were epic, and i think you portrayed the characters perfectly. The Keymaster seems to be always there, always lurking. Lol, I can’t wait to see what happens to Michael now that Ben has found him…
I can’t wait for the next chapter of TOT!!
-SunnyFox57
Moon, Chapter whatever it was cant remember numbers lol, was great! I want to draw a layout of the mansion and the Shadowkeep, Zeer flying out of the Shadowkeep gave me an idea for the stairs leading down into the obelisk cave, it’s gotta be wide enough for Apex to walk down/up and wyverns to fly out.. XXXL
Sunny, Drain only became the Count right before he died, Ghost is the Count before Phasma, you’ll see him in the next chapter. Also you mean Jaxz not Nash but yes, he’s the kid out picking bloodfruit, he has to be oblivious to Salizar, so.. I had to make him somewhere else for plot reasons. “Stupid vegan” 😂
-Wyvernian, has been waiting about a month or two to write TOT 😢
Hey guys, it’s me Sand, I know I haven’t said anything for like a month or so, but this might be my last message in the dex. I know I haven’t posted anything in a while, cause I felt like there’s something wrong with writing my story. Something I can’t find out. I don’t know what, but I may stop posting here and archive my stories. I’m not gonna abandon them, but yeah. It’s just that I’ve always wanted to share my stories to the public, become an author or smth. So thank you all for who had read my story, The Overseer and All the Light we Cannot see, big thanks for Ben for giving me ideas for my story. Big thanks to SunnyFox for who had help me feel better and made me continue my story during the beginning of the year, and Moon who had encouraged me to even write the Overseer in the first place, and for sharing advices. Thank you all. So don’t feel sad and all. I’ll probably come back when I think it’s time, I’ll still post a few more stories if I think I want to, and the rest I’ll still continue writing it but it’s gonna be a prototype in google docs. So bye everyone. Have a blessed and happy day. ✌️
-SandmasterXD
Sylveevee, I read chapter 38!!! It was great!!! So Pat now can transform into creatures. That’s a bit scary!! Rockwell’s beginning to hunt for the formula and a bit distrusting of Dr. Bubba and Pat. Sylveevee and their group is finding out about the stories!!! And ten minutes until the others come!!! I really enjoyed it!! I can’t wait for the next chapter Moon!!!
Ben, I read chapter 78 and 79!!!! They were both awesome!!! I love Bobby and Simon’s adventure to get the Massive and I love the ability of the massive!!! Size manipulation!!! Simon’s rush towards the artifact made my mind go to all the worse possible scenarios!!! Gary’s attempting to sacrifice himself for the group to get the Pack was sad yet so good!!! Glad that Sunny and Paige intervened!!! I loved Sunny’s reaction to his “I had a good life” speech!!! And the Pack being able to clone the user is awesome!!! Looks like they’re onto the first guardian boss here soon too with the green obelisk acting funny!!!! And that only leaves, the Cunning and the Devourer right or are they not in this universe? I really enjoyed them both!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
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