I was wondering if Blizzard was going to return in the Obelisk or was going to get her own story!!! I am excited to hear more about this upcoming story!!!!

-Apex

Just read chapter 82, it was amazing!!!! It all I was hoping for this chapter to be!!!!!!! I have no words to describe it!!!! I can’t wait for Chapter 83 now Moon!!!!! Until Next Time!!!

-Apex

Moon, chapter eighty is so good. I love the cliffhanger. It’s a great story. I’ve been reading it since the day you started it. Because I was looking for good stories.

The reader

“Empire’s fall”Chap2

The 56th night is over. Blood wakes up after a restless sleep. He throws on a tattered hide armor and ventures out in the middle of the fort. With the sleeping quarters blown up by an airborne raid, the 100 or so troops that have endured live in shabby tents in the central courtyard. Considering the limited amount of tents, the garrison is split between the night patrollers and the day patrollers that when a new day begins, the day shift emerges and the night shift goes to rest. And vice versa with the sunset. Blood watches as the battred night patrol goes to their tents. “What is the body count today?” Blood asks a captain nearby. “Two dead last night. Explosion on the west wall. We stand 84 now...” He says grimly. “Call over the all the captains including yourself. Go to the cellar... I need to have a discussion with you all” Blood orders. “Very well sir.” The captain yells as Blood enters the cellar...

“Empire’s fall” Chap1

The siege has cost everyone... General BloodBorne watches as his fort once again is under relentless bombings from positions surrounding the fort. The darkness of the night is only broken by the flares and explosions. If not for that. The night would be completely dark. Not even the stars came out to watch. “Empires fall... Keeping up ok?” Blood whispers as he puts his head against a cracking stone wall. Tears comes to his eyes... For two months his garrison has survived onslaught after onslaught by the enemy. But now it is almost over... This night. Something will break inside of blood.

The realization that he has to surrender....

I’m officially cancelling the Surface. This is because I have no real idea of what I want to do with it. I only started it because I don’t have many IRL friends and wanted to be part of a community. I have found that community elsewhere. I may still be active here, but I’ll probably revert to lurking and reading. If you’re wondering, I’ve officially joined the SCP Foundation wikidot and am writing an article there. Here’s the draft, if you want to read it. http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/tarrwastakens-sandbox-of-oddities -TarrWasTaken, whose username wasn’t actually taken.

So uh, just wanted to let you all know, though I'll put this on the wiki as well. I'm going to be taking a break for a little bit, as I joined around three art contests and need to work hard on the submissions, as it's against some other really good artists. I'll still be writing FATF and TFTOA, but I need a bit of a break as I'm also a little low on motivation.

-SangToareGirl

Break-It, I loved the new chapter!!!! Honestly can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

Ben, hope you enjoy it!!! Also forgot to mention that yeah, I released chapter 23 of Ultimus in Electrophorus!!

Spirit Dragon and Cheesecake, Greetings and Salutations!!! Welcome to Achatina!!!! I hope you enjoy your time!!

PastelGothPower, hope you liked them!! And if you got an idea for other creatures. Don’t mind taking suggestions!! Also if you want, check out the fandom page if you want to give further feedback or suggestions!! I think you already know about it, but I don’t know if you do.

Has anyone read chapter 2 of TPL in andrew…

-a confused and maybe sad sylveevee

Yeah, it has been rather unnaturally quiet around here.

PrimalApex, I read chapter fourteen of Ultimus……NO NO NO! This can’t be happening!!! Pls don’t die, Reuben, pls don’t die. 🥺. He’s just a puppy..I can’t—

I know Reuben is going to die eventually but still!! 😡. Mean old raptors. I wonder why that raptors eyes were glowing magneta tho.

Hmm, interesting….

Cya later!

-Detective SunnyFox57 is on the case

MrGhostGamer, being slightly lethargic in my case. Also writing the next chapter of Ultimus and working a bit on Chapter 30 of TOT ahead of time.

Ben, I read chapter 66a!! It was great!! It’s sad that Skyler lost all her trust with her companions except for Rick. At least Gary now believes that she’s telling the truth, if only partially. I’m excited to see what happens with the group in this mini game to gain the artifact!!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next part of the chapter!!!

-PrimalApex:)

Welcome back moon!, I got ark mobile and got on the server but my phone sucks so bad I can’t even ride a flyer without getting kicked so I won’t be able to really play but if I’m not flying it’s.. fine-ish.. also you should catch up on PoP I’ve wrote 1-3 since you were gone

—Wyvernain

Oh sorry specialraptor I will definitely work on that. It will be very helpful.

The reader

Hey the reader-

I like ur story but, one thing:

Idk who is talking in the story. Try using quotes for ppl to recognize who is talking in the story. Like this;

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“What are you doing today, Astro?” Raz asked.

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That’s one example. Here’s another;

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“Why are you following me? And why are you here?” She asked. But further away was a dog. “The cat must be scared..” she said again. The cat didn’t leave her side either way.

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Lol sorry, that was a paragraph. Anyways, I hope you get this. This will make your story a WHOLE lot better, and it will make it where you have more likes. Your welcome!

-SpecialRaptor (I hope no one thinks I’m gone from Dododex—I haven’t been writing very often)

Write a short tip quote it and put it on your favourite Dino page.

Add on to my note:

YOUR notes have made my day!

Tina 🤣🤣🤣

Break-It, yeah of course!!! And I’ll stay as active as I can here too!!! And if you have any ideas, just post them!! We’ll see if we can use them!!!

Until Next Time!!!

-PrimalApex:)

Duke, yes it is!!!

First, you’re gonna need this thing’s favorite food: MONEY!!💵. As the Fantastic Tame DLC costs $5.99 individually, but if you have the Lost Colony DLC preorder package, it’ll be included with the Elderclaw.

Next thing is the actual taming process, where you’ll need a torch to attract it, and it’ll land on your shoulder. Then you’ll go through some mini games of gathering XP, killing creatures, and of course feeding this Drakeling. Rinse and repeat until fully tamed. There’s a few things that I might’ve missed, and I’d suggest that you watch a video first before taming them.

Anyway, Until Next Time!!!

-PrimalApex:)

To: Wyvernian, MrGhostGamer

From: Ben, & KM

Wyvernian, Chapter 16 of TOP OOS was good stuff! Yeah I already Fandom so I’ll leave it at that.

MGG, long time no see, glad you’re back in the writing game! Just hope that you’ll finish Hope’s Call and Life Before. Ark: Object of Extinction is really good so far and there’s a major improvement in writing between this and Hopes Cry. I’m curious to see why the URE is tatooing “Contestant” on their citizens for this ARK. Very fishy. Ethan seems fun so far. Anyway, I’ll see you around.

To: Break-it, DiploLover

From: Ben, & KM

Break-it, I returned back to TOT, so yeah, just putting that out there to clear up confusion.

DiploLover, Chapter 31 of CON was awesome! I presume now that KJ will team up with Adira, making her forces even stronger than before if she’s ordered the Yutys to go after the five wolves and now the humans with their aerial superiority. It’s going to be tough for the five wolves to defeat Adira with such powerful allies.