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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion
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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
I think the 5th carnivore will be a shadowmane! But still hoping for Thyla🤣🤣. Dododex won’t show my reply so sorry if you see 2 tips saying the same thing. I love these stories so much can’t wait to see what the 5th carnivore really is!! But the cliffhangers are killing me!!!!!!
-your biggest fan
The legend of Ellanora
(A prequel to Rathalos)
Ella woke up in a small cot, surrounded by strangers. “She’s awake!” She heard servers whisper. She then realized she was in a hospital, covered in bandages. (Ella, not the hospital) she sat up and winced. Why did she hurt so bad? “Are you ok?” One of the strangers asked. “I... who are you?” She said weakly. “Who am I?” The man chuckled. “You’re just as funny as ever.” “I wasn’t joking. Should I know you?” Ella said, confused. “Wow. You really forgot? At least tell me you remember what the heck happened to you because you’re pretty banged up.” “I don’t... remember...” realization dawned in Ella’s eyes. “Anything.” “Well that’s just great.” Another stranger said, mumbling something. “Nory, I honestly can’t believe you, of all people, has amnesia.” “Who... who’s Nory?” Ella was even more confused now. “Oh my gosh.” The other stranger said. “She forgot her frickin name.”
I am currently having technical issues trying to post the next chapter of Ultimus. I will hopefully be releasing it here this week on here when I find the issue. But if I can’t, I will release it on SurviveTheArk.com’s Creative Chat Forum this Friday and it is currently in the discussions part of the Fandom right now to read if you would like. I do apologize for not being able to release it yet. But I will post haste!!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
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Who are you people /lh/silly
So many new writers and writers returning! This is so awesome and makes me so happy, very excited to read the new stories! Taking my own little breaks currently, though I try to check in. I thiiiink once Spring and Summer come around things will get much better and open for me. Writing, reading, I might sound crazy but it feels so much easier to do in the warmer seasons
—Moon
Hey PrimalApex, good to meet you and thanks for the feedback! I’m relatively new to story writing so anything helps😂. I haven’t had the time to check out the wiki or to start the next chapters yet, but I will try to get to both soon, but chapter IV will be in ammonite. I think the next step is to try to flesh out Marcel as a character, but I do have plans for future chapters.
Anyway thanks for taking the time to read my story, I hope you all enjoy it!
-Jerrald
Greetings and Salutations Jerrald!!!! Welcome to Achatina!!! I’m PrimalApex, I’m the heavy Ark lore/alternate universe sequel writer here. I write Ultimus and Journey. But if you would like you can call me Apex or Primal!!! If you want to check out some of the other stories. Check out the fandom as RelatingHen said, you can most of the stories written by any of the other authors. But if you need some more information, I can help!!! Hope you enjoy being here in Achatina!!!
Also, looking at your writing to see what can be fixed. I would divide up your work into more paragraphs and when you add dialogue, it should immediately should be a new paragraph. I haven’t looked too deep into your story yet to see if there’s anything else. But it looks pretty good!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
PrimalApex, the newest chapter of TOT was great!! Michael is definitely going to get beat up, he acts like he knows everything and like he’s better but he’s SOO PATHETIC..
The training between Freya and Aurora was great. I can’t wait to learn more about Freya in Ultimus.
Ben, the two newest chapters were great!!! Wow June is very desperate for Ben’s love. She literally fell for that trick so hard. The fact that Carlos was fighting with a frying pan made me laugh so hard. 😂. And the raptor that attacked Samuel was very strange. If seemed to display all his fears and try to make him ashamed for being a…monster. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Wyvernian, I read the two new chapters of ToP. RIP Ben. And doctor Primlias is just mean!! Bro, you have to sedate them!!! And he performed experiments on humans too! Ack, I hope he dies. I like seeing Salizar and Caesar’s back stories too! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
-SunnyFox57
A lot of chapters came out!!!
Ben, I enjoyed chapter seventy two of TAOH. Loki’s power amplified is pretty cool!! So Sophia is Sylveevee? The fight was epic!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
Moon, I read chapter three of Pandora. Hmm….so Pandora is teased bc she’s “different”. Bria seems to be the only one who understands her. I can’t wait to see what happens next!!
Wyvernian, the prologue was pretty cool!! It explained a lot about Salizar’s backstory. I’m surprised that he actually trusted the humans. I’ll be looking forward to the next chaoter!!
Cya later!
-SunnyFox57
From Ben
PrimalApex that is exactly what Alan’s attribute is. So now y’all know why Alan was ranked higher than Jerry on the list. And yes, the two do have a past with each other but Alan doesn’t remember Jerry. Jerry does though. I’d also feel scared if I was Bob, Sunny, although luckily his attribute only activates if he’s starving. I can’t wait to see Jerry in action in TOT. I think it’d be cool if he worked with Samuel since I think he’d find Samuel very capable and sympathize with him since he has no implant. Although he wouldn’t work FOR him.
Okay thanks for correcting Wyvernian, Wyveria is the actual ARK itself and there seem to be different kingdoms, each one with each type of wyvern, and some wyverns are trying to unite them all together. That’s honestly really cool! And if Cinder has the hottest fire breath… hmm, that’s probably why she’s the leader of the wyverns on Hades. Anyway, I read the Epilogue and it was really interesting. So our predictions were correct, they’re landed on the Earth next and may even potentially be fighting the Titans. Well they’re probably gonna try going home to Pandora but they might still have to fight them anyway. Hmm, I wonder who Ryker and Ras found. There are two of them… hmm, there’s a small small small chance that it’s Caesar and Salizar and they somehow also got transported to Earth. But it could also just be two random creatures. Anyway I can’t wait to see the third installment of the Pandora Chronicles!
Lava, Prior Extinction is really good!!! Good Extinction stories are hard to come by so it’ll be interesting to see how this one is!! I really enjoyed it!!! And from the few Extinction stories I’ve read so far, it’s unique to me!! The first person PoV was great and the protagonist’s backstory was very good and sad!! I like that the Titans weren’t already corrupted and first came to be guardians to protect the city!!! And I really excited to see more of this story!!!
-PrimalApex:)