Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
It’s been a good minute since I’ve been on here to post anything other than my story…..
I’ve got some stuff to say.
For one, Moon, I actually enjoy the villainous characters in some stories and movies, games, books, etc. I like seeing how their mind works, their evil plots and stuff. Some may call me crazy, but that’s just what I like. Just like in Ancient China, there was an evil man named Sima Shi. He was called a tyrant, but he was actually being cautious to make sure no one rebelled against him. And he may have executed some innocent people. I don’t agree with execution of innocent civilians, but the reason he did it was solid. I guess what I’m trying to say is: I like Quake and Jethazzar.
And two: The one who reads, I’ll come up with some names soon. Could you maybe provide some details on their appearance?
But yeah that’s it! I’m not excited right now cuz I’m getting to a good part in my fanfic, which introduces all the main characters, good guys and villains alike. Let me know if anyone is reading it or not, so yeah. Cya!
-Aston
The red pike
Tyrana’s story
Chapter 2
She went back to the village in redwoods. She had lately tamed 20 dire bears each 1000 health and 500 damage. They killed everyone in the village and everything. The only thing left there after that fight was Tyrana. For some reason she was laughing at the pain she caused on the village. Now she went out to tame many more creatures. (20 dire bears 10 terror birds 1 Galli with saddle and 9 carnos ) she felt as if she could take on anything. Little did she know Goliath and nerva weren’t the only ones in her way. She left tons of hints to make nerva know where she is in follow her. Of course nerva was a part of her plan. The sacrifice. Her main mission was to summon. The end of the chapter (haha you’ll get the answer in the NEXT chapter)
The red pike
Tirana’s story
Chapter 1
She woke up in a cage. She though about why she was in there. Then she realized... nerva.there were lots of guard protecting her cage. She was in solitary but... the only way the guards were safe was that she was unconscious. She found a rock and found a weak point in the cage. She broke the door open and killed 24 out of 25 guards. One ran to tell nerva but she threw a spear that she got from a dead guard. She walked out of the village and looked around. She quickly tamed many animals with... fear. She has a reputation that nobody would ever guess. And she knew nerva’s weakness. The only problem was nerva knew her weakness to, but it’s unlikely he would/could. The end of chapter 1
The Red Pike
Red’s Story, part 7
Red and the other creatures had fled, due to them being wounded and not ready to fight again.
“Maybe we should head towards the arctic waters?” Suggested one of the sharks.
“No, it is too cold there, and we might even freeze to death there.” Bruce said. He had used kelp as a bandage, and it worked decently well, so everyone else had used kelp for the same purpose.
“Our only objective here is to survive, then kill the humans. Isn’t that the entire reason we formed an army?” Red said.
“That would be the reason, but we have another enemy who wants us dead. The humans may have scuba gear to allow them to breath longer and survive down in the ocean for a bit. If we see that, we should kill them.” Bruce said.
“Then we should heal, destroy our enemies in the ocean, then kill those evil humans!” Red suggested.
“It seems like a good plan” a mosasaurus said. Eventually, everyone came to agree to the plan.
“So now, we traverse the ocean until ready for battle, and then we will strike, but first we must find where they lurk.” Red said. And then, they started to traverse the huge ocean.
The Red Pike
Nerva’s story part nine
By Red Dragon
Nerva looked down at his Argentavis. “I had it under control.” He said, jokingly. “Thank you for helping me. That pegomastax would have been little more than a nuisance if I had not let myself get slashed across the chest.” He noticed Tyra wasn’t flying correctly. He saw a slash across her wing. Walker must have got her as they were flying away. “No, stop, I can call in a Quetzalcoatlus.” When they arrived back at the base, Nerva’s lieutenant approached. “S-sir, are you alright?” “Do I look alright? I was slashed across the chest and eye!” When Nerva was mostly healed up, he went into the planning room with his generals. “How do we beat them? They have been amassing an army of beasts.” One of his generals said. “Well, you know how we all speak different languages, but the Ark translates them to something we can understand? Goliath has shown intelligence, so maybe the Ark can translate to something he can understand and we can reason with him.” “Sir, with all due respect, that’s a bit of a long shot.” “I know, but desperate times call for desperate measures.”
Walker's Story Part Seven
The Red Pike
By Jedi
Christopher sat carving a bow, leaning on the side of the house. He had a crossbow,but he was bored and he figured this was the best way to pass the time. Siyu walked by, his own bow in his hands and a quiver filled with tranque arrows slung over his shoulder. " Where are you going?" Asked Christopher. " I promised Dijiao(sorry for misspelling.) I wouldn't make her fight again. But I still need creatures to fight with. I will tame some." " I'll come with you. It's not like I have anything better to do." They went to find some creatures then. They tamed a pack of raptors, some doedircus, a few allosaurs, two Argys, and even a rex when it came. A huge beast came crashing upon them. " The Demon King!" Siyu yelled. " What?"
" The Demon King! It's a beast that roams the forest, with glowing yellow eyes!" Christopher knew that what he thought was a Demon King was just a Giga, but he decided that now wasn't the best time too discuss it. Christopher simply loaded his crossbow, and began to shoot. After on hour, it lay uncoincuss at their feet. They have it some meat, and it tamed. " I want you to understand," Siyu said " We will only use this monster in emergencies. If it gets mad, it will destroy all in its path." They went back to the house and made fences for all their me dinos. This was their first adventure. The first, or many to come.
Ok, I spent minor if it's just me, but the box seems bigger. And longer. I haven't even seen a hint of the word bar. What's going on? Is this an update? Idk. Weird. I hope I did a good job of portraying your character CL1.
-Jedi
Walker's Story
Chapter Six
By Jedi
Christopher ignored the pain that shot through his body. He found another document talking about someone named Li. A few more documents and he learned that it was the same Lei from th page of Helena's journal. Some more research and he found out that she had a son on the island, and she has disappeared with Helena. He decided to look for him. A few days later he found the site of a battle. A few dead carnos pay there, along with a few soldiers. He moved on. A few more days and he found a house. When he entered he found a man that looked like a beggar almost and a monkey, which was darting and grinning around the house, getting food items for the man. It looked at him and began to shreik. He collapsed on the deck, watching as the beggar ran towards him, and his vision faded. When he woke up, the man was sitting in front of a cooking pot making some kind off stew. "Is this the house of Siyu Li?" " Yes, it is. He's not home, but your welcome to stay."
Happy Groundhogs Day everyone!!!! Also, sorry for being quiet. I’ve been busy. I got do one of my new broadcasts for a review of everything I missed broadcasting.😬 sorry.
I hope everyone is enjoying the new year so far though!!!!
Also fact: we are closer to 2050 than 1990…
Until Next Time!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
What’s up guys! SunnyFox told me about all you guys talking about stories and stuff over here so I figured I would come check it out. Super cool to see you guys all helping each other out. I don’t write a lot anymore, (although I have considered picking up my story again), but I would love to read your guys’ stories and give any advice if you want.
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