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Sunnyfox, I read chapter 18!!! I really enjoyed it!! It was very sweet to see all the characters together at your birthday!!! A very bitter sweet surprise!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Wyvernian, more on the news today from Jeremy Stieglitz!!! Gigantoraptor is being removed as a mod and becoming an official creature for all maps once Ragnarok. So I guess Rag will get the runner up of the creature vote or it won’t get an exclusive creature to the map. I’m really hoping for the former on this!!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Sylveevee, I have the exact same opinions on the animated series, the Helena backflashes are all pointless.. and not just the ones about her wife.. it just seems like a weird way to explain her character, her mom was a protester she has a wife for some reason and she’s got major anxiety. Done that’s it.. she could’ve just talked to other characters to explain that and then we could’ve gotten more backstory on them too.. and they made Rockwell way to insane he certainly had narcissistic tendencies and was ok with indirectly killing people in the pursuit of science but Helena wasn’t supposed to know that.. how will he get to aberration if he doesn’t go with Helena.. or are they giving him a redemption arc? Because that would also cause problems for aberration.. I’m very confused… but all in all the show is pretty good as far as adaptations go, not the best not the worst, I slso dislike how they made the insects small, the megalodon being bigger is ok because that’s more realistic but arthropluras where ginormous irl, why would they shrink them to handheld size?! at least some oreaneos are big…
Apex, yea it says “twice the size of the island” idk how big it was before but if it was already larger then there’s no expansion at all, and I’m also confused on the Shasta being back… like it makes sense, they swapped it and the gigantoraptor in the first place because they couldn’t finish the Shasta in time but now with the map being delayed they can add it again, but what does that mean for the gigantoraptor? They can’t really just take away the temporary mod as it would despawn everyone’s gigantoraptors but if it’s back on rag then are we gonna have to wait a half a year+ for it to have a real home? I don’t think it’s still coming to the center because they would’ve said “coming with the shastasaurus and the gigantoraptor” you’d think.. super confused. I’d be great if the gigantoraptor came to the center with the Shasta and we got the rag vote runner up but I think that was the dreadnoughtus right? Or was it Meavia? I know Meavia was top 3 and dread got in so…. PLEASE GIVE ME DA SPIDA!
They probably wont though 😢
-Wyvernain
I just watched the first episode of ark the animated series and i just have to say WHY KILL BOB AT THE START ROCKWELL IS SOPPOSED TO BE PSICO OBSESSED WITH ELEMENTS NOT A LIGIT PSICO AND MANICIAC KOWN TO ENVADE OTHERS AND KILL… anywayssss thats my opinions xD also in ark the game it doesn’t tell us if helenas gay or if rockwell was a manicack turned good then evil anyways that wraps up my sentence
A very annoyed sylveevee
Also Ben, I think it’s pretty cool how you’re doing a QandA. Unfortunately I can’t do that bc….there’s a lot of questions that I shouldn’t answer or I’ll spoil my story. I might do one once I finish the series. I know there’s a lot of things unclear. I’m currently working on more questions for u to feast on.
-SunnyFox57
Apex, that’s what I thought, i was just clarifying because I don’t remember. I definitely wasn’t trying to imply you did it without asking Moon first or anything, I’m very excited to see what you do.
Moon, ok I have been appeased 😆 all jokes aside the epilogue was good, although one thing, aren’t all the five except Nyx and forest abandoned hated and or orphans? What happens to them they can’t go home…
Ben, wait… yo- you feed on our questions?! Did you eat that one! QUESTION VAMPIRE!!🤣
Everyone, ughhhhhh I wish I could find the time to write more often, I hate only writing two chapters a week usually! Its so annoying I just want to tell the story ☹️ Sorry guys…
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Okay so moving on THE OBELISK’S EPILOGUE. The Epilogue was really heartwarming, Moon you definitely did a good job on it! Even though the group hug was cheesy, it was definitely well deserved of everyone. And Forest coming back home and reuniting with his siblings was also a bit of a tearjerker 🥲, but, hey, it’s over. No more fear in Fjordur, everyone can live peacefully. But maybe not, there’s always going to be something bad happening, right? Hopefully not, the Five must stay at peace after all they’ve been through. And finally thanks for reading my story, pretty cool how a legend within the community has read my story!
Okay so also in Chapters 15-16 of TDP SO MUCH WAS REVEALED. First of all is Cyrus afraid of his vegetables? Why else wouldn’t he eat them? HA HA that was a little funny to me Sunny but I bet there’s a bigger reason behind it. At first I was thinking it has to do with his powers, but ehhh that doesn’t make sense because otherwise Nora and William wouldn’t serve him vegetables. Also there must be a really bad wolf problem outside. Is Cyrus a werewolf? Eh, doubt it. I just randomly got that thought. Anyway, NOW THAT MAKES SENSE. So descendants of the Phoenixes can bring back memories… that certainly makes so much sense considering the climax of House of Madness. Also the Achatina reference was really cool I enjoyed that easter egg heh heh. ALSO PAUL IS ALIVE. Unless he isn’t, and Paul’s death took place after this book. NO. NO PAUL IS ALIVE. BECAUSE HE IS THE COOLEST AROUND AND THATS THAT. SO HE IS NOT DEAD. And of course he is a commander, fitting for someone as cool as him. And now looking at it, what nation does Tortuga even belong to? Is it independent or a city of another Phoenix nation? Now I’m really wondering considering it didn’t seem to follow the laws of another nation. Not only that but if Tortuga had been bombed by the British then the nation it resides in would be pretty damn mad! Well we’ll figure out soon.
Okay. Well, I’m going to go. Remember to bring me your questions so I can feed!!!
Bens QandA
Sunny asks, “Who is Tiffany and will they find her?” - A: Tiffany is one of the Originals, and a large fan of certain stories revolving a dinosaur game. And will they find her? Uh, maybe? Heh heh heh.
Sunny asks, “Why does D.T guy continuously put his son back in the games?” - A: Remember that the President (DT Guy)’s intentions of putting all the scholars on the ARK was to finish his story. So DT Guy put his son in this game because he wants to finish his story. You can assume this was done to finish the previous season, as in this alternate timeline DT Guy finished Dodo Tales Season 4, but never managed to finish Season 5.
PrimalApex asks, “How many more writers/readers do you plan on adding cameos or characters for in your story?” - A: Okay, so, I think everyone’s been introduced by now. If not, that most likely means they are already in the story, it’s just either 1. They’re not revealed who they represent or 2. You haven’t discovered who they represent. Oh, yeah, there’s ONE more writer. But he’s so obscure that you probably don’t even know him or his story. I guess I might as well spill the beans; this unnamed individual made a story known as ‘John’s Adventure’. Why did I choose this story? Because this person was the ONLY person who finished their story (or at least one season), of their story in 2022. So even though his story isn’t as long as mine or as skillfully written as mine, I respect the creator a lot for managing to finish the story. And also for giving back to the community by talking back to his singular fan (which I also respect a lot, something I see most creators fail to realize). Well enough yapping from me, next question!
PrimalApex asks “How many more parts will you be doing of TAOH?” - A: The parts of TAOH are only there for visual purposes. You will not see them on the Dex labeled as “TAOH - Part 2/Season 2”. There will be 1 more ‘part’ of TAOH, 50 more chapters, and then it’s over. At least I hope 50 more chapters. May 51 (ugh, ugly number).
PrimalApex asks “Will TAOH include other maps like Scorched Earth or Aberration or will there be a sequel/sequels or prequels to TAOH?” - A: TAOH will not include other maps of the Ark chronicles. I know, I know, VERY SAD, but there’s important reasons for that. First of all I’ve only ever played The Island on Ark, so I know literally NOTHING about the other maps other than the lore and the bosses and creatures. Secondly, it’s important to note that this doesn’t follow the exact story of Ark, which means there’s only one ARK in existence in the TAOH universe. And to answer the second part to this question, there will not be a sequel to TAOH. I know, SAD AGAIN. But I have a feeling the ending of TAOH will conclude EVERYTHING. As for prequels? Well…Originally, NO, but then there was a change of plans. After very careful consideration, the story of TAOH actually takes place after a previous story of mine which is already finished!! It’s not ARK related, unfortunately (:cry:), even if there’s a few references, but, yeah, I mean I think that answers that question. If you guys are up to reading non-ARK related stories by me, let me know.
PrimalApex asks “Is there still only one Alpha on the Island?” - A: I’m assuming this means Alpha Creature. No, there are multiple. In Chapter 10 of TAOH, the President (DTG) orders the agents to release the rest of the alphas onto the ark. So they’ve already been released as evident in the Alpha Leedsichthys they encountered in Chapter 19. Does that mean the characters will see the other Alpha creatures? Absolutely! In fact you may have already seen one already! Hidden away within the words of the story…
PrimalApex asks “Are they all in a S-” - A: They are NOT in the letter S. Jokes aside, I think I know what you’re trying to ask… but I’m not going to answer, because I may be wrong.
PrimalApex asks “This may sound stupid, but if everyone has an implant. Does that mean they are still alive somewhere else or are they completely modified and no longer have that ability?” - It’s important to remember that not everyone has an implant: Samuel. The story doesn’t follow the exact timeline as ARK (the story takes place in 2027 if you read closely enough, and ELEMENT doesn’t seem to exist). So if you’re talking about the clone shenanigans that was revealed in Aberration, then no, there are no clones.
So that’s all questions. Man, it’s really fun answering questions. Come back with more questions later please! I love answering questions!
Ben
I’m very glad you all enjoyed Chapter 50 as much as I enjoyed making it! Ha ha ha!
Before I get to the Q&A, and before I go over any new stuff that released, I’d like to clarify some things about Chapter 50 that may have been unclear.
First of all, Maddox is not dead! Don’t worry guys. At the beginning of the chapter when Loki first confronts Mr. Ma, Mr. Ma is telling Maddox to stop resisting to make it easier for the both of them. Then Loki pulled Mr. Ma off, so Maddox is not dead. He’s just unconscious.
Second of all, Loki getting Mr. Ma’s implant attribute, may have something to do with his own unknown implant attribute 😉.
Alright to the Q & A
Okay so itll be in a diff message since the q and a hit the word limit 😭
Ben, okay. Here are a few of my questions…
1. How many more writers/readers do you plan on adding cameos or characters for in your story?
2. How many more parts will you be doing of TAOH?
3. Will TAOH include other maps like Scorched Earth or Aberration or will there be a sequel/sequels or prequels to TAOH?
4. Is there still only one Alpha on the Island?
5. Are they all in a S-… sorry, this is a theory for later…
6. This may sound stupid, but if everyone has an implant. Does that mean they are still alive somewhere else or are they completely modified and no longer have that ability?
I think that’s all the questions I have about TAOH right now that I can think of.
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Wow, a lot of chapters released today!!
Ben, Wow!!! I read chapter 50!! After all that pain and suffering he went through, Mr. Ma can finally be at peace. I definitely feel bad for him. Loki questioning himself about killing his mentor was also really good, it reminded me of Commander Taylor’s experience in Terra Nova. I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait to more of what happens next. (I do have a few questions but I ask them in a different post.)
Moon, I really enjoyed your epilogue to The Obelisk!!! It was heart warming and brought a perfect sense of closure to it!!! The Obelisk has been amazing Moon from beginning to finish!! I think it will definitely hold a place here one of the greatest stories on the dex!!!
Sunnyfox, I read chapter 15!! I wonder what’s going on with Cyrus (besides making a death threat to Jack)? I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
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