In our wildest aberrations we dream of an equilibrium we have left behind and which we naively expect to find at the end of our errors. Childish presumption which justifies the fact that child-nations, inheriting our follies, are now directing our history.

-a reaper who learned it the hard way

A small light scurried over the ground, shining up a dark figure. The thing stood up on weak legs while blood hit the ground with a splash. The creature’s body was filled with green scars that had blood in the same color as the scars the fluid was coming from. The eyes on the creature were tired and had a weak luminescence. The hook claws on the tip of the creature’s fingers had been broken of. The creature spit blood on the ground. A head appeared up from the blood pile. “Watch it! Your blood is corrosive you know!” The creature that emerged from the ground said. “Sorry, I can’t control it. I was attacked by hunters.” The hurt creature said. The recently arrived creature jumped up from the newly formed hole in the ground. The creature was a nameless, creature’s weak to light just like the bigger creature that fell to the ground, hurt fatally. One red crystal was lighten up by another nameless, showing that the big creature was a reaper queen. “HOLY S… I didn’t mean to disrespect you, my queen!” The nameless said nervously. The reaper queen gave the nameless a look that simply said one thing. “It’s okey!” The reaper queen said, to the surprise of the nameless. “But I need a medic! My wounds will soon have a fatal effect!” The reaper queen continued. The nameless promised to find help and ran away, searching for help. A pack of ravagers walked out of the shadows, as a strange figure leapt out of the area, right where the shadow WAS! The pack walked towards the queen, who’s on the brink of death. Behind the ravagers was a flock of nameless’s that had gathered around to summon a… a towering shadow raised out of the ground, two eyes shined brightly in a crystal white color. With a single tail swipe the whole back we’re sent flying of, hitting the side of a tall clif. The damaged pack hurried away, the subterranean reaper king walked forward to the queen, who was inhaling her last breath. “Cliff Raven’s, hydrangeas’s and viper fang’s. They will find the nest!” The queen begone, “they’ll find the nest! Protect the hive!” The queen said. The reaper king cut open a scar on his left leg with his tale, letting the blood drop on the tail, before letting it drop in one of the scars on the queen’s body. The scar healed, soon after the other wounds did as well.

-Surviver

Also, I forgot to mention everyone’s writing a crossover in achatina, and it’s almost at season two. You can join it if you want, white dye is where everything is planned, like encounters, character ideas, what happens next, etc etc. everyone posts every week, whenever they want during that week, but there has to be atleast one chapter written in the week, with a few exceptions of having no ideas. Might be a bit hard to find all the chapters, and the first 3 chapters aren’t achatina, my first chapters of the crossover are in tusoteuthis.

-Lamprey

..get used to your name, you'll probably look for a better one, but just stick with the original one. I've been looking for a better name for weeks 😔.

Good story! I have a tip:

Use more dialogue, because it helps develop the characters a bit.

You may or may not know me, but I help found the fanfiction community in Dodødex, it was just me and Seasnake for a long time...

-DTG

Little graphic, but that's your style. (So much blood, it's like SAW but with dinosaurs lol.) I've got two questions for you:

1. I've never heard of the majority of these creatures. Did you make them up?

2. Wait I forgot two.... shoot what was it?! Oh yeah. How are you submiting like COMPLETE stories everyday?! You're a wizard, aren't you?

Anyways that's pretty much it. You're doing a great job. Keep writing!

~CL1

I’m changing the location of my next story, called Jaws of Rage, to Rex section, also, here’s a little sneak peek of it!

Aidan walked through the maw with his allosaurus, red tooth, and his fellow hunter, Sam. They walked up a steep hill to a ledge overlooking a small valley. Stomping through the valley was a huge ferocisaurus Rex, blood and saliva dripping from its mouth. Sam brought out his mega bow and loaded it up with five arrows, before taking aim at the ferocisaurus Rex, and Aidan pulled out his blood blade before jumping of the cliff. He activated his gliding suit, and flew down, landing in front of the giant creature. It roared angrily, and Aidan rushed towards it before leaping towards the creatures head, blood blade ready strike.

- hope you enjoyed, the story is coming soon.