The thing I hate most about ark survival ascended is the fact that I play single player and nothing spawns except obnoxious raptors, and the problem with that is that they kill everything and lock on me from 200 meters away. It’s ridiculous!

The Legendary Raptor

Pickle844Luvr

Chapter 1

Prologue in Raptor

Next chapter in Kaprosuchus

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The three eggs hatched, and two males and a female came out. Their mother named the two males Dullclaw and Grassfeather, and the female Longfeather. It was going well: the raptors were growing well, and their mother fed them with meat. When they were young raptors, they went out to complete their first hunt. “ I wonder what we’ll find today.” Said Longfeather. “I don’t know, but I want to kill it!” Said Dullclaw. Little did they know, a ravager was stalking them. Longfeather stopped. “Guys, I hear something.” Said Longfeather in a worried tone. “Stop worrying, Longfeather.” Said Grassfeather. “ We’ll just kill it.” Then, the ravager came out of the undergrowth. “What are three raptors doing here?” He said. “Who are you?” Said Dullclaw, stepping forward. “Back down, little raptor.” Said the ravager. “ You are part of the raptor tribe.” Said the ravager. “Perhaps you know the story of the ancient tribe.” The ravager said. “ I don’t want to talk about it.” Said Grassfeather. “ You know what happens in the story, right?” Said the ravager. “ What?” Said Dullclaw. “We kill them!” Shouted the ravager, lunging at Dullclaw. “Dullclaw, no!” Shouted Longfeather. But it was too late. The ravager grabbed Dullclaw’s neck, and crushed it, killing him. His body slumped to the ground. “ Nooo.” Cried Grassfeather, tears forming in his eyes. “You’ll die for this!” Yelled Grassfeather, and clawed at the ravager’s side. “Fool!” Yelled the ravager, and in turn bit Grassfeather’s arm. He screeched in pain, and tried to bite back, but the ravager threw him to the ground. “ You will die now!” Said the ravager, and ripped his side open. After the ravager got up, Longfeather saw his body laying on the ground, lifeless. She ran away, tears in her eyes. The ravager yelled, “ When I find you, raptor, I will kill you too, then all of your tribe!” The ravager then walked away, leaving the bodies there.

RAPTOR RED, a tale of my first raptor tame. 2023, October. The trip wasn’t to get a raptor in the beginning. But a kapro. On my way to the swamp I was attacked by two raptors ( a teal and red one ) I killed the teal and realized “ I can bola this other one” I bola’d it and KO’d it. Fed it meat and..l named him…red (I know, I know.) we walked to the swamp still in search of a kapro. When night fell…I heard a hiss. Titanoboas rose from the murky depths of the water and sarcos jumped at me. They were relentless. We ran down the beach a good half a mile from the swamp. They were still chasing. Eventually the poison got to red and he fell asleep. But I refused to let him die. I shot those a**holes thousands of times until he woke up. We had both lost a good amount of health but managed to hightail it outta there with our lives. We got back home…and the very next night I made him a saddle. He now lives in his pen and comes with me on my travels along with his adoptive dilo brothers and adoptive sister pachycephalosaur.

I’m definitely loving how Jointed Mysteries is turning out! Plus can’t wait for the next chapter of Life Hazards. You’ve pretty much downed paragraphs, except for one thing which you don’t have to do but is used for most common novels.

When someone is talking, you need to make a new paragraph.

“For instance, if I started talking now, it would be a paragraph.” And then I’d keep talking, and you wouldn’t have to make another. But if someone else decided to talk?

“It would be another paragraph. Just to tell the readers a different person is talking.”

“And then another if someone else talks or if the first person replies.”

That’s literally it, hope it helps for when there’s a conversation with lots of characters in yur books.

Also, hope you read my fanfic if you ever get the chance! It’s pretty good and you miiiiiight like it.

—Moon

I was playing when a power outage happened I logged back on and my raptors cloned

One time me my parasaur (Travis) my raptor and my 3 dilo’s were out trying to find the legendary “herbivore island” by going on the shoreline. We were dominating anything that came our way, but then out of nowhere 6 small raptor things (forgot what they are called) knocked me off Trevor and knocked me out, I thought I was a goner but my raptor and dilos jumped in to save me! They killed every last one and minutes later I was back on my feet. Later unsuspectedly 3 high leveled raptors appeared (one of them tech) and they killed 2 of my dilos after knocking me off Trevor. We put up a good fight but I died and then they finished off Trevor and the rest of the gang. Rip for Trevor and the gang.

I had a Raptor named Speedway. As I found a cave a Rex came from behind me in shock I told my tribe mate to attack the Rex but then a different tribe picked up Speedway and dropped him to the ground killing him I was super sad and cried. Then I got a feel of anger and rage I grabbed our OP dodo and went to there base as the exited it there argy (the one who dropped speedway) was attacking me I dropped the dodo in one hit the dodo killed the argy and the tribe. After that I made a grave for respect for my raptor Speedyway. Every like = 1 new flower to Speedywas grave.

SpecialRaptor, hope you’re doing okay now. Hope you come back to do Jointed Mysteries. Just getting worried since we haven’t heard from you since the hurricane. Hope you doing okay!!!

Until Next Time!!!!

-PrimalApex:)

I used to have a pack of raptors. I lost them all to a spino. Rip blue, rip.

I had a raptor named Overlapping Energy (i know i know cringe name) and she was the best thing that ever happened to me. I was playing on an easy world on ASE and she had 900 health!!!!! Sadly, one day I tried to tame a diplo on the grasslands beside swamp on south while with her. That diplo. THAT DIPLO. It knocked us into the swamp with its headbutt…2-6 titanaboas knocked her out and killed her, along with me. I was level 86, and I quit the world 2 days later… if it wasn’t for that stupid diplo..

So I’am a bit of an idiot at Ark, but I would like to tell you about my experience with my first raptor. I was adventuring (as I usually do) when I came across a raptor I was scared but I managed (shaking) to use a bola and after that, I stopped for a moment, surprised by my success, then I realized that I needed to knock him out, so I used my bat and then killed some nearby dodos and fed him some meat, then I sat there for a while, and finally he woke up. I was so astonished by my own success, and together, we killed enough dinos to make him his own saddle. The end he’s now living at my base with his wife and son. Thanks for listening — me and Slarb the raptor. <3

True story: Me and my brother were riding through a rocky jungle place, and one of us said something nerdy like “perfect terrain for raptors” seconds after that a raptor, fell from the sky! Well it actually fell from a cliff chasing a dodo, but it was pretty hilarious.

These guys are AMAZING tho a bit of a pain when encountered unexpectedly. Tamed one lvl 113 and named it Delta. My boi Delta is quite the DPS killed 6 Sarcos while exploring and protected me from wild Raptors. I’m planning to have at least 20 more of these guys. Wish me luck!

(Aberration) I had a raptor lvl 57 and we went on adventures with my brother but once when we were on a adventure I was with a ravenger instead, and since I didn't give my raptor meat when we were going home some text popped up saying: 💀 Minty lvl 57 died! ;( I was so sad bruh. R.I.P minty TvT

Three parasaurs dead cuz of raptors yeah and now in the fourth one

Special!! Oh no, I heard about the hurricanes. Be safe, I’ll pray for you!

—Moon

From Ben

Also hope ur doing okay, I heard the hurricanes really bad. I wish you luck. See you around SpecialRaptor.

Literally, you can just punch it unconscious and if you have a bola, it’s even easier buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut it’s even possible to punch these guys unconscious without a bola if you have the health for it if you have the bravery for it if you’re even stupid enough for it, I punched out A level 145 yeah, right I was so low health after that and I have like 1K Health after I punched the 145 unconscious, I tamed it cooooool right???

Guess what? I EVEN PUNCHED A FREAKING LEVEL 150 RAPTOR AWSOME and it tamed at LEVEL 225? PERFECT TAAAAAAME super rare!

Moon here.

SpecialRaptor, I haven’t read all of your stories, but by the ones I have read, I can tell that you are an amazing Fanfictionist! I respect all writers on Dododex who really use their imagination, whether or not the writing is proper. Jointed Mysteries is really good so far! I’m glad you enjoy my stories; I work really hard on them.

While yes, writing can be hard, I have a few tips on making yur story even more loved just by the type of writing style.

1: Paragraphs. This is a major need for stories so nothing gets confused.

Like this!

You just add a few spaces at the beginning of a new subject and/or scene or quote.

2: “Speech.” I’ve noticed you don’t quite do them perfectly, but that is fine!

“This is one example. And—“ if I’m interrupted, make sure the quotation mark is there to show it. “Ta-da!”

3: Detail. When bad things happen,

You

Can

Do

This

If it’s really emotional, to make the readers fell worse. Also Capitals help for the names of creatures, even if it’s just Dodo or Tyrannosaurus rex.

Second example:

But

That

Did not

HAPPEN.

Yeah, anyways, that’s all I wanted to say!

I love yur stories characters btw!

There’s a level 100 and a level 140 in a pack right around the corner from my house 😅