Dododex

ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion

I’m definitely loving how Jointed Mysteries is turning out! Plus can’t wait for the next chapter of Life Hazards. You’ve pretty much downed paragraphs, except for one thing which you don’t have to do but is used for most common novels.

When someone is talking, you need to make a new paragraph.

“For instance, if I started talking now, it would be a paragraph.” And then I’d keep talking, and you wouldn’t have to make another. But if someone else decided to talk?

“It would be another paragraph. Just to tell the readers a different person is talking.”

“And then another if someone else talks or if the first person replies.”

That’s literally it, hope it helps for when there’s a conversation with lots of characters in yur books.

Also, hope you read my fanfic if you ever get the chance! It’s pretty good and you miiiiiight like it.

—Moon