Story time!!

So, I have a raptor named Aaron, he is a champion to me, not only was he the first raptor I had tamed (I also take a raptor to be him in every game), but I was collecting berries, I was murudred by a Alpha raptor, I started freaking out thinking of God, Arron's dead, bur when I got there, I saw a very bloody Aaron with a alpha Raptors dead body beside him (Why he didn't eat any of these is because he aint a canniable I guess lol) and the Alpha's team of doctors behind him, and I was just, jaw dropped, like- W o a h-

Tribute to Aaron the champ

If I get high up on the list Ill do some more stories, I might do them anyways

I had a raptor named Swift and I was a busy person in single player so me and Swift went out to hunt and then out of nowhere a pack of 3 raptors attacked and Swift breathed his last breathe and I got knocked off of Swift and I died with him R.I.P Swift ~Comment Created on: 2020 Wednesday October 21 7:04 am

So when before I tamed a raptor I hated raptors. I have before had many incidents with raptors. One time I was trying to tame a parasaurus, so I went with my lower level parasaur. And her name was Dede. So I saw a higher level parasaur and I went to tame it. And I left Dede behind but I did not go that far. And I look back and there is a raptor fighting Dede. I tried to help but it was too late. The raptor died but, so did Dede. May we please have a moment of silence for Dede. You will never be forgotten Dede. I even set a gravestone where she died. She was one of the first dinosaurs that I tamed.

I’m definitely loving how Jointed Mysteries is turning out! Plus can’t wait for the next chapter of Life Hazards. You’ve pretty much downed paragraphs, except for one thing which you don’t have to do but is used for most common novels.

When someone is talking, you need to make a new paragraph.

“For instance, if I started talking now, it would be a paragraph.” And then I’d keep talking, and you wouldn’t have to make another. But if someone else decided to talk?

“It would be another paragraph. Just to tell the readers a different person is talking.”

“And then another if someone else talks or if the first person replies.”

That’s literally it, hope it helps for when there’s a conversation with lots of characters in yur books.

Also, hope you read my fanfic if you ever get the chance! It’s pretty good and you miiiiiight like it.

—Moon

I was playing when a power outage happened I logged back on and my raptors cloned

The Shift

A fanfiction by SilverWings

Chapter 14-

"Hello?" Tealfeather asked croakily.

"Oh, you're awake!" said a voice from outside

Teal barely had time to help in surprise before an enthusiastic looking raptor stooped below some of the lower-hanging branches and stepped into the veiw of Teal.

"You're probably... a little confused." said the new raptor, tipping his head to the side.

*You bet I am,* thought Teal, but the power of speech seemed to have left her.

"I'm Ace, healer-in-training for my clan," the raptor began proudly. His skin was a dark tan, and his feathers were the same colour as his eyes: a deep shade of green that reminded Teal of ferns . "You... fell off a cliff and into some rough waters over there. If you don't remember, part of your leg was crushed by a rock. If you don't recognise me, it's not your fault, there's nothing wrong with your head. I'm... not one of you." He trailed off, looking down.

"Anyway," he started, back to his cheerful attitude, "I have to go back to my nest for the night, but I'll see how you're doing in the morning."

It *did* seem to be night. No light

He ducked under the branches at the entrance.

"Oh, and by the way," Ace added, poking his head around the corner, "if you see a grouchy old raptor around here, that's Rain. He's the tribe's healer. Try and be nice to him. It's not easy though," he added in a playful whisper. And with that, he left Teal to be alone with her thoughts. *Who* is * Ace? What did he mean when he said he wasn't one of me? And he seemed to hesitate when he told me I'd fallen. Is there-* Teal swallowed *- Is there something he's not telling me?*

A night of dreamless and deep sleep was succeeded by morning. Well, Teal felt that it ought to be morning, but there was still no light being cast through the branches that made a roof over her. She was just about to settle down for some more sleep, despite being well-rested, when a raptor she didn't know - but who looked vaguely familiar - stepped through the entrance. He looked grumpy - partly because he had dull navy feathers and blue-gray skin that gave him a gloomy look. "The name's Rain." he said gruffly, addressing Teal. "Ace'll be in in a minute."

And with that, he left.

*Not a very lively fellow,* Teal thought. She giggled as she remembered what Ace had told her last night. *I'll* try *to be nice to him,* her mind reasoned, *I just doubt I'll get very far.*

"Hello?" called a familiar voice from outside the door.

"Come in!" Teal called to Ace.

"Ah! She speaks at last!" he said happily, ducking below the branches at the entrance. "How are you going?"

"Good enough, a bit stiff though." replied Teal.

"That's good. Do you-" he hesitated "- Do you remember what happened?"

Teal began to shake her head, but all of a sudden, the memories hit her with the force of the blow to her leg.

"I do." she replied shakily, he eyes wide.

Ace began to say something, but Teal's mind was spinning and she didn't even hear him speak.

"I have to get back." she interrupted. "I need to get back to my clan. I need to find my brot-" *half brother* "-my brother."

Teal attempted to stand up, but her leg could barely support her weight and collapsed under her. She let out a small whimper of pain.

"Well, you're not going anywhere with that leg." Ace said evenly, as if he was used to this. He could be, Teal reasoned. "Did you mention a 'clan'?" he asked, sounding genuinely intrigued, although Teal guessed he was just trying to distract her.

"My clan. They need me. We have a healer, I'll be fine with her. My older brother is there and he must be terrified."

"Your clan sounds an awful lot like my tribe. We thought all the other raptors were dangerous rouges. You're... in reality, you're just like us."

He stopped, and sounded deep in thought.

"I have an idea" said Ace abruptly.

Special!! Oh no, I heard about the hurricanes. Be safe, I’ll pray for you!

—Moon

From Ben

Also hope ur doing okay, I heard the hurricanes really bad. I wish you luck. See you around SpecialRaptor.

One time me my parasaur (Travis) my raptor and my 3 dilo’s were out trying to find the legendary “herbivore island” by going on the shoreline. We were dominating anything that came our way, but then out of nowhere 6 small raptor things (forgot what they are called) knocked me off Trevor and knocked me out, I thought I was a goner but my raptor and dilos jumped in to save me! They killed every last one and minutes later I was back on my feet. Later unsuspectedly 3 high leveled raptors appeared (one of them tech) and they killed 2 of my dilos after knocking me off Trevor. We put up a good fight but I died and then they finished off Trevor and the rest of the gang. Rip for Trevor and the gang.

The Shift

A fanfiction by SilverWings

Chapter 4-

The sun beat down on Tealfeather's skin. Slowly she pried open her eyes. A barren, sandy landscape stretched out as far as her keen eyes could see. A group of slow, lumbering creatures shuffled across her field of vision. Whatever plants there were were small and tough-looking. A small patch of spiky, tall, green plants stood a little away. Driven by a fierce hunger that had developed while she was unconscious, she took off toward the slow dinosaurs and pounced on the smallest of the group. It bellowed in pain, much like a parasaur, and tried to shake her off. Tealfeather hung on and bit another creature who was charging at her. It whimpered and fled, and Teal dug her claws deeper into the one she had injured initially. It collapsed, not quite dead. The others, seeing there was nothing they could do for the injured creature, fled at a particularly slow pace. Tealfeather could be caught them if she wanted to. She quickly finished off the prey and tore off a large chunk of meat. Liquid trickled from the creature. *Water!* Teal gratefully drank, realising just now how thirsty she was. The water was stored in the creature's hump. It was a good survival strategy. She ate most of the prey, but kept a leg for the rest of the clan. *The rest of the clan...* Teal realised she had no idea where the rest of the clan was. *poor Bronzefeather,* she thought, *he must be FREAKING out.* Tealfeather put the leg down and looked at her surroundings. A minute's walk away was a grove of trees. Maybe the rest of the clan were there. She picked up her prey and started walking in the direction of the trees. There was a bloodcurdling scream from somewhere behind her.

Tealfeather stopped in her tracks. She knew that voice. "Bronze!" she screamed, dropping the prey and running in the direction of the screaming. Bronzefeather was on the ground, being attacked by a flock of Terror Birds. Without thinking, Teal ran headfirst into the battle, knocking two of the birds aside. She chased the last, biting at it until it ran for its life. Bronze had picked himself back up, and was desperately trying to fight off the remaining two terror birds. Tealfeather pounced on one, snapping its neck in a single, smooth movement. She leapt off the corpse of the first bird and ran to help Bronze with the last. As she watched, he knocked it to the ground and bit down on its neck in a killing blow.

The pair stood panting for a while, recovering from the battle. Teal had sustained a few minor wounds, but Bronzefeather was in much worse shape. He was covered in small cuts and blood was flowing freely from a deep gash on his shoulder. "What... was that... about?" Asked Tealfeather.

"I came to find you," he said, as though That was a perfectly rational though to act upon.

Tealfeather sighed and sat down.

"Did you just abandon the rest of the camp?" She asked, appalled.

"Maaaaybe. But I know where they are! Just over there." he replied, pointing to the vast expanse of desert opposite the grove of trees.

As much a Teal was mad at him, she couldn't help thinking that information was quite useful. While they had been talking, Bronze had helped himself to the leg of the odd creature Tealfeather had killed earlier. She grabbed one of the terror birds by its broken neck and motioned for Bronze to do the same. "Show us the way." Teal mumbled around a mouthful of feather.

I used to have a pack of raptors. I lost them all to a spino. Rip blue, rip.

I had a Raptor named Speedway. As I found a cave a Rex came from behind me in shock I told my tribe mate to attack the Rex but then a different tribe picked up Speedway and dropped him to the ground killing him I was super sad and cried. Then I got a feel of anger and rage I grabbed our OP dodo and went to there base as the exited it there argy (the one who dropped speedway) was attacking me I dropped the dodo in one hit the dodo killed the argy and the tribe. After that I made a grave for respect for my raptor Speedyway. Every like = 1 new flower to Speedywas grave.

Literally, you can just punch it unconscious and if you have a bola, it’s even easier buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut it’s even possible to punch these guys unconscious without a bola if you have the health for it if you have the bravery for it if you’re even stupid enough for it, I punched out A level 145 yeah, right I was so low health after that and I have like 1K Health after I punched the 145 unconscious, I tamed it cooooool right???

Guess what? I EVEN PUNCHED A FREAKING LEVEL 150 RAPTOR AWSOME and it tamed at LEVEL 225? PERFECT TAAAAAAME super rare!

Moon here.

SpecialRaptor, I haven’t read all of your stories, but by the ones I have read, I can tell that you are an amazing Fanfictionist! I respect all writers on Dododex who really use their imagination, whether or not the writing is proper. Jointed Mysteries is really good so far! I’m glad you enjoy my stories; I work really hard on them.

While yes, writing can be hard, I have a few tips on making yur story even more loved just by the type of writing style.

1: Paragraphs. This is a major need for stories so nothing gets confused.

Like this!

You just add a few spaces at the beginning of a new subject and/or scene or quote.

2: “Speech.” I’ve noticed you don’t quite do them perfectly, but that is fine!

“This is one example. And—“ if I’m interrupted, make sure the quotation mark is there to show it. “Ta-da!”

3: Detail. When bad things happen,

You

Can

Do

This

If it’s really emotional, to make the readers fell worse. Also Capitals help for the names of creatures, even if it’s just Dodo or Tyrannosaurus rex.

Second example:

But

That

Did not

HAPPEN.

Yeah, anyways, that’s all I wanted to say!

I love yur stories characters btw!

There’s a level 100 and a level 140 in a pack right around the corner from my house 😅

True story: Me and my brother were riding through a rocky jungle place, and one of us said something nerdy like “perfect terrain for raptors” seconds after that a raptor, fell from the sky! Well it actually fell from a cliff chasing a dodo, but it was pretty hilarious.

These guys are AMAZING tho a bit of a pain when encountered unexpectedly. Tamed one lvl 113 and named it Delta. My boi Delta is quite the DPS killed 6 Sarcos while exploring and protected me from wild Raptors. I’m planning to have at least 20 more of these guys. Wish me luck!

These bastards are good first tames for beginners. They are easy to tame, fast, good mounts, and they have this new skin! I had tones of raptors, but when I leveled up more, I was able to tame better creatures, so I killed them all. But now I want one to use the 50 skins I have. Wish me luck even though I don’t need it! (I’m level 100!)

I just tranqed a tek stego and as soon as he went down a level 140 alpha came out and killed me. This has been the 5th alpha raptor I’ve seen on this solo ark and I only had just started as well and now it’s camping outside my base.

1 up=1 piece of hope to get him away from my house and pets

(Aberration) I had a raptor lvl 57 and we went on adventures with my brother but once when we were on a adventure I was with a ravenger instead, and since I didn't give my raptor meat when we were going home some text popped up saying: 💀 Minty lvl 57 died! ;( I was so sad bruh. R.I.P minty TvT