Reader, you’re doing good on your story and I have a tip for you to help make your story even better. Whenever a character is speaking you can put quotation marks so that the people who are reading will be able to tell when someone is speaking. For example:

“How are you?” He asked. “Good .” She replied. Another example: “Why are you doing this?” The creature asked.

Just a tip to make your story better! Keep up the good work!

-SunnyFox57.

P.S: check out my story “a hyaendon’s scars” in hyaendon. And I have another story “the terrible demise of Tortuga” , it’s in abc order in the all filter.