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Now someone is spouting out random nonsense sentences about food.. really… we got hecklers, downvoters, impersonators and now this.. cmon people seriously 🤦🏻♂️ I wonder if it’s just the same person or if it’s just a bunch of random people being rude and or annoying.?
-Wyvernian
Okay, now that we’ve spotted the imposter impersonating Moon again (And SpecialRaptor, sorry that happened). I like chapter 78, it’s another cliffhanger and I go flying off the cliff every time there’s a cliffhanger but it gets me pumped for the next chapter, especially because it’s the dream state chapter for Spark!!! This feels a bit weird, but is it just me or does the name Swiper fit just a bit for the imposter, it just feels like when moon spots the impersonator, everyone else kinda does the Swiper, No Swiping quote from Dora. I don’t think this should stick because it’ll just encourage him more to impersonate people and I don’t want to do that. But I thought it was a bit of a funny thing to make out an annoying situation. Anyway I don’t wanted to say. Moon, did a good job on this one as a cliffhanger, can’t wait for the next one!!!! Also I laughed pretty hard reading your note for the Imposter!!! Anyways on to read the next story for me!!!!!
-Apex
Wow, I really like the end of Hero’s of Pandora!!!! I am excited for Protectors of Pandora or PoP!!! I am now gonna start reading I think jointed mysteries or king of the wyverns. Best parts of the HoP, “SILENCE DODO I’m monologging”, every single facepalm by Caesar, and Ping’s silly, brainless moments he had, especially the story of the carno!!! But your story was really great Wyvernian and I can’t wait for the next book of of the Pandora Chronicles!! Also still waiting patiently for Chapter 78 of the Obelisk. :)
-Apex
The Red Pike
Nerva’s Story Part Fifteen
By Red Dragon
Nerva had done it. He had ended the Li bloodline. He finally had killed- “Gah!” He was just disarmed, then stabbed in the shoulder by Tyrana with his pike. He unsheathed his sword and slashed Tyrana’s right arm. They were now both on the deck, with Christopher trying desperately to get Siyu to wake up again. He was the only one still standing up. “You’ll pay for this”, he said. He left both Tyrana and Nerva there, and swam back to shore with Siyu’s body. Nerva was barely still alive. He rolled his head over to the left to see Tyrana, on the deck of the boat, just like him. He rolled his head over to the right. He saw a replica of Goliath that Tyrana had put in the water, probably to lure another big creature over, but she didn’t need that now that the real thing was crushing Nerva’s troops. Suddenly tentacles came out of the water, along with countless other aquatic creatures. The same red tentacles that Nerva remembered from so long ago. It grabbed both Nerva and Tyrana and dragged them both underwater...
The Red Pike
Siyu's Story
Chapter 8
A loud thump on the surface of the motorboat caught everyone's attention. They turned around to see Nerva hop from argent. "Finally," he said, pulling his pike from back. "I've waited a long time for this." He lunged at Siyu, but was interrupted when Xiaochou leapt from his shoulder and landed on Nerva's face. Nerva furiously pulled the monkey from his face, threw him to the ground, and stabbed his pike through Xiaochou's diaphragm, killing him instantly.
"How could you?! Monster!" Siyu screamed, drawing his sword and running at Nerva. Tyrana and Christopher ran to help him, but were intercepted by Nerva's argentavis. Nerva kicked Siyu in the stomach and swung his pike down towards his head. Siyu dodged out of the way and swung his sword at Nerva. His sword caught the neck of Nerva's pike, leaving them in a struggle. Remembering whe he was here, Siyu pushed Nerva back. "My mother," he shouted over the waves, "Where is she?!"
The boat hit a wave and jerked, causing everyone to lose their balance. Nerva took the opprotunity and tackled Siyu. Siyu leapt to his feet and tried to swing his sword again, but Nerva's pike intercepted the blow, causing the sword to fly from Siyu's hand. Nerva lifted his pike, about to attack again when a loud roar sounded from the shore. Siyu looked up as a large, monsterish creature walked down the beach, crushing as many of Nerva's soldiers as it could find. The sight left Nerva distracted, allowing Siyu to pull a metal arrow from his quiver and stab it into his Nerva's shoulder.
Nerva let out a cry as Siyu forced him to his knees. "My mother," he repeated, twisting the arrow. Nerva said nothing, but in one smooth motion knocked Siyu's feet out from under him bringing him to his knees. Immediatley, a sharp pain shot through his chest, but Siyu couldn't scream. He looked down. Nerva's pike was impaling one of his lungs. Blood rose in Siyu's throat, and as it filled his lung he found it harder to breathe.
Nerva loosed his pike and Siyu collapsed, coughing out blood. As he gasped for air that wouldn't come, Nerva loomed over him. "You wanted to see your mother," he said with a grin. He lifted his pike in the air again, aiming at Siyu's head. "I'll take you to her."
The Red Pike
Red’s Story, Part 10
Red had felt something while they were at the arctic waters a long time ago, I feeling that wanted her to go to the red floating shape in the sky. Red explained to the others she had to go find something, decently far away and she would be alone. I got there, waited a bit, and then I heard something, something unforgettable.
(Sorry for the short chapter, I’m running out of ideas but hopefully next chapter will be long.)
Red pike
Tyranas story part 5
Tyrana snuck out of where they set up base and grabbed a spyglass. She looked through it and knew that she saw Goliath. She made a dummy Goliath and threw it into the ocean. Then she thought “maybe I could get him to fight a big underwater creature. THEN NO ONE WILL BE IN MY WAY!!! she kept on pondering how she would get him into the water and she had a plan. A ghidorasaurus plan...
The Red Pike
Goliaths story
Chapter 8
Goliath was hunting down Ghidorasaurus. He’d been following its scent for a while now but still hadn’t been able to find it. But soon, he found footprints and the strong smell of dead meat. Goliath followed the scent until he found Ghidorasaurus crouched over a dead brontosaurus. Goliath roared a challenge at Ghidorasaurus, who turned towards him. The two faced each other for a minute, He could see fear in Ghidorasaurus’ eyes and he knew the armour would work. Then, Ghidora charged.
The battle lasted a day, by the end of it, the ground was stained with blood, both of the giants were covered in each others blood, Ghidora was badly wounded, but so was Goliath, he had a massive gash on his right arm where the armour had been torn off. The wounded Ghidora charged at Goliath, who knocked him aside using his axe. The massive dinosaur tried again, and again, but each time Goliath knocked him aside. Then Ghidora pointed his head at the sky and roared, it was a roar so loud that everyone on the island could here it. Then a pack of Allos appeared from the trees, followed by more allos and some rexes, and soon a few gigas. Goliath was surrounded by dinosaurs. He readied his axe as a massive fight began, he tore through the allos with his axe, easily dispatching them. The rexes were more challenging, but he still managed to kill a few. Then a giga rammed into him from behind, knocking him over, it stood above him, looking down at him. Goliath tried to reach for his axe but the giga stood on his hand and prepared to bite. The giga opened its mouth wide and Goliath took the opportunity to shove his hand into the gigas mouth and choke it, soon the giga went limp and Goliath got up. He picked up the axe and turned to the army of dinosaurs, this would take a long time.
Soon they were all dead, and only Ghidora remained. The dinosaur was clearly scared, so it ran. Goliath followed it and grabbed it by the head with one hand, he pulled on the top jaw, opening its mouth, and then, using his axe, Goliath sliced off Ghidora’s bottom jaw, causing a cascade of blood to splash onto the floor. Goliath dropped the half dead Ghidora to the ground and using the blade of his axe, sliced Ghidora open from its neck down to its tail, a huge tide of dark blood poured out onto the ground, filling the battlefield with blood. Goliath walked away from the dead body, covered from head to toe in blood, he had killed his nemesis. But as he walked away, he smelt something else among the scent of blood and death, the smell of humans. He detected some of Nervas soldiers, as well as a human he recognised as Christopher Walker, who was with two others he didn’t know. Goliath slowly walked towards the scents, wondering what he would find...
The Red Pike
Nerva’s Story Part Twelve
By Red Dragon
Nerva was in his quarters, thinking about the past inhabitants of the island. How Mei-Yin Li killed Nerva’s father. Nerva tried to unite the island, and stop its inhabitants from fighting like savage dogs for scraps. He nearly conquered the island, but got too power hungry. He thought the obelisks would give him infinite power. Then in the tek cave he died, along with the rest of the men and women he commanded. A commander walked into his room. “Sir we have found them. They are trying to escape to the east beach.” “Good. Give me twenty soldiers plus Rockwell, we ride now.”
MGG, Rockwell was just writing an explorer note about how his serum isn’t working and he’s going to try and use Dr. Bubbas serum to upgrade it. Eventually he’ll complete the serum and become the omega Rockwell and try to take over TOT, but that arc will be after the next one I think, the omega infection will distract him for a bit so he won’t be working on it much, maybe he’ll find Bubbas leftover vial during the zombie arc if they ever explore the Shadowkeep? Basically it was just filler and a little lore building for the third arc. Also idk if anyone has told you but we are planning on finishing this rotation (Apex you Syl Moon) and then doing the finale of this arc, we are all gonna pitch in to write it, so idk how that will work for you and Syl since neither of you have Fandom.. maybe Sunny and Ben can converse for you two.
Oh and I still need explanation for the map you gave me, idk what the colors represent, like biome/water/lava wise
-Wyvernian
Wyvernian, Chapter 49 was awesome!!! I love that Drain is morphing into something else!!!! I honestly can’t wait to see what happens next with him!!! And I loved that the villains retreat now before their final assault!! I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Wyvernian, chapter forty nine of TOT was spectacular!!!! Drain’s transformation was epic!!! And Nova trying to name Fjordur’s dragon…😂. Poor guy. Doesn’t even have a name—
So it seems that Drain has turned into some kind of wyvernish creature. Hmmm…
I can’t wait for the next chapter PrimalApex!!
-SunnyFox57
I’m sorry. What conversation did I just walk into? Something about someone is trying to date sly? If that’s the case then just don’t go to that server and block them from anyway they can get in. That type of behavior is unacceptable and is possible a person trying to prey on you. By the way I’ve finished QOA moving on to I don’t know. I’ll have to figure that out lol.
Break-it The Final Witness
From Ben
Hello everyone! Chapter 95 is out in Parasaur! There are now five chapters of TAOH left! I dont know why its almost 6000 words long but oh well. Writing is fun what can I say?
Angel, Chapter 1 of Dinosaur Heroes was awesome, if youre reading this! We’ll be waiting here if you decide to come back to Achatina. Anyway seeya around!
Welcome GitezGood to Achatina section! I hope you enjoy your stay! Theres a lot of cool people here itd be cool to add another. Your story The Fleet of Fate is also pretty neat and I enjoy reading. I think it’d be nice to make chapters longer though even if it takes longer to write. It can also benefit from some dialogue scenes between characters, since it will help show character personalities and their feelings toward one another or about a situation at hand. As for the story Sunny is writing, The Lost Soul, you might want to read its prequels if you havent already. Her series is called Riddles of the Phoenixes and goes in ABC order in All Filter.
Break-it, the last 3 chapters of TSOR were awesome! The Broodmother fight was amazing and Larry’s death was pretty sad I suppose. Props to you for actually not being afraid to kill off characters. Keep doing it! Although you might want to make it as unexpected as possible. Anyway it was great although it didnt have too much impact for me because we barely met him sooo yeah. Im not to sure id care if anyone else died. Not even Bruce. Also the detail of Bruce reacting to the element was nice since hes the Son of Rockwel. Well i cant wait to see what happens next!
Sunny, Chapter 3 of TLS was great! Still trying to figure out who that figure in the shadows is. The boy Lucas is a cool character so far hope he doesnt die lol. I wonder what happens next with Tom’s story… Ok seeya
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