From Ben
From Ben
Hello everyone! Chapter 95 is out in Parasaur! There are now five chapters of TAOH left! I dont know why its almost 6000 words long but oh well. Writing is fun what can I say?
Angel, Chapter 1 of Dinosaur Heroes was awesome, if youre reading this! We’ll be waiting here if you decide to come back to Achatina. Anyway seeya around!
Welcome GitezGood to Achatina section! I hope you enjoy your stay! Theres a lot of cool people here itd be cool to add another. Your story The Fleet of Fate is also pretty neat and I enjoy reading. I think it’d be nice to make chapters longer though even if it takes longer to write. It can also benefit from some dialogue scenes between characters, since it will help show character personalities and their feelings toward one another or about a situation at hand. As for the story Sunny is writing, The Lost Soul, you might want to read its prequels if you havent already. Her series is called Riddles of the Phoenixes and goes in ABC order in All Filter.
Break-it, the last 3 chapters of TSOR were awesome! The Broodmother fight was amazing and Larry’s death was pretty sad I suppose. Props to you for actually not being afraid to kill off characters. Keep doing it! Although you might want to make it as unexpected as possible. Anyway it was great although it didnt have too much impact for me because we barely met him sooo yeah. Im not to sure id care if anyone else died. Not even Bruce. Also the detail of Bruce reacting to the element was nice since hes the Son of Rockwel. Well i cant wait to see what happens next!
Sunny, Chapter 3 of TLS was great! Still trying to figure out who that figure in the shadows is. The boy Lucas is a cool character so far hope he doesnt die lol. I wonder what happens next with Tom’s story… Ok seeya













