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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
Hey guys, so i decided to check out Silver Dye, and I realized that there are more than 100 pages worth of messages... personally i dont want to read that. Achatina was like 50 sprinkled with subpar stories, but this is a lot more. There seems to be a lot of active people, which is what im surprised by. Just a hidden hotspot in a somewhat dead platform. Im hesitant in joining because itll be a lot harder for me to respond to messages. Ive already explained my discontent of using Dye Sections. Ill probably join in the future if Dododex Creator puts the same features of Creature Stories into Dyes.
Later.
Ben, I do have a few questions about your story. First of all did u get the ideas for some of the names of the bad guys from people here on Dododex? There is D.T guy (dodo tales guy) and Lamprey(one of the other writers here). I was just wondering. If u did that is totally cool. Happy writing! P.S: I just posted two more chapters of TTDOT and another chapter of a hyena’s scars.
-SunnyFox57.
To SunnyFox57
From Ben
Woah, okay, a lot of stuff to say!
1st of all, SunnyFox57 tysm for reading my story’s recent chapters! And yeah, I can totally agree that there’s some tension between those two hooligans, Samuel, and Aurora 😏. I mean, they’re a decent match, both very smart in their own ways. You may or may not see it in later chapters. Before I close this section I wanna give a hint about names; some characters are deliberately named.
Anyway, I read your Chap 5 and 6 and so much more has unfolded! A few new characters, which is always great like Andrew (I see you blushing at Emma!), Emilia (who doesn’t really have anything going for her at the moment), and Rachelle. Now I’m very curious about Rachelle since she’s a daughter of a peacekeeper/police officer, how will that play out in future events?
And lastly, TOM. He already sounds like a conniving individual, I wonder what he did to Aragorn and Arianna that made them want to flee all the way to remote Tortuga? There seems to be two antagonistic forces here, this Tom fellow and Tortuga itself. Perhaps that is how Tortuga reaches its demise?
I’m glad Lynx is still around. I understand some people have become inactive due to their own personal circumstances, but it’s nice to see some old friends are still clinging on ✌️
Well seeya next time!
Announcement
From Ben
First of all, thanks for the words SunnyFox57, and I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter of TTDOT, and also a Hyaenodon's Scars.
Also, Chapter 12 of The Arks: Over Heaven is out in Quetzal, so go check out the awesome chapter if you want.
Finally, Im contemplating reposting the Prologue, Im aware it might be hard to find due to the nature of the message.
Thats all, happy writing and reading!
to Wyvernian
from Ben
Wyvernian, The Arks: Over Heaven is starts on Prologue, which is here in Achatina under one of my very first messages, the one where I start it off with "To you dedicated readers"
The rest of the chapters can be found in Aerial section in the reverse order (Wyvern first and so forth).
Personally, I do not care about the Oaisaur being behind a paywall, i just think its weird and besides, i struggle playing Ark because im pretty bad at the game. i never had the time to beat it. I wonder how it will work with people who bought the pack and those who didnt, like hows that gonna work?
To, MrGhostGamer
From, Ben
MrGhostGamer, I read Hope’s Cry Chapter 14, and I was like “Oh my ggoshhh here come the army!” But one thing I am wondering is, are the rogues really bad guys? Mara Kong seems pretty chill if you ask me. Maybe Buddy will question it later down the line, or Dawn or the other people who were tasked to take them down.
Cheers!
Guy, I just found out I have an imposter in Orc!!! I just checked it out for the first time today and saw someone say that they were doing a weekly search of Dododex and came across this. And read through the comment and saw who wrote this. And he went by apex, same style I usually do except for the ‘until next time’ I say at the end. I wrote back to him asking if went by the name or is an imposter. But just on the safe side, I’m warning everyone that there might still be an imposter running around using my name. I hoping not but it’s still good to warn just in case.
Until next time!!
-Apex :)
To: Many
From: Ben
GhostGamer, I took the time to read your story Hope's Cry and I liked it. It felt like a fever dream and a comedy show at time. It reminds me of stories I used to write when I was little, with my friend. I like it, although there are a few things that would work. I dont think Dawn's species was ever elaborated, remember that. Also I like the characters, they all seem fun but Im sure you especially have big plans for Jake/Buddy. The 30 year coma seems weird, but works somewhat. And the fact that the main character is a Purlovia is pretty cool too. Keep it up, Ill remember to like your stories too (i mostly read stories on PC where you cant like). Idk who Shadow is, you might have to ask Moon. Never heard of them.
Reader, i didnt know you even had a network of stories in Electrophorus, ill be sure to check it out,
And guys, remember there are plenty of other fanfictioners out there actively posting (Reader, ME) who have plenty cool stories 😁 remember to check them out
Cheers.
Ben, if you want too read my story it’s in The Island filter abc order. It’s called Hope’s Cry. I hope you like it! And I might change my name too ChromiumGaming? Maybe 🤔. But uh… goodnight for now. Toodles!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
P.S. Is Shadow still writing in Dododex? I love her/his stories and I would love too talk too her/him! Pls respond!
To, All
From, Ben
Chapter 8 of my story is officially out (has two parts, please read them in order if you read it). Oh yeah I guess I should mention the name of the story, LOL, it's called The Arks: Over Heaven.
Moon, SunnyFox57, thank you for the advice, I've always struggled with adding romance because I never know if its good love or not. The first time I added romance to a story it was more a 'love at first sight but they both denied it' type thing, and I wasnt pleased with the end result. Loves a powerful thing, it should be handled with care in stories. You'll see it blossom in my Ark Fanfic, its up to you though to decide who its between 😉
Cheers. And have fun reading and writing.
Ben, here are a few romance tips. I tend to write a lot of romance unintentionally so I have a LOT (at least I think) of experience.
There are several paths you could take in introducing the “love birds” to each other. (You have to introduce the characters before they fall in love and build relationship)
The characters meet and hate each other even though they are working together.
The characters meet each other and the main character loves the other character but she doesn’t love him back…yet.
The characters meet and instantly fall in love. (Personally i wouldn’t go with choice three because you need to build RELATIONSHIP. But you can if you want to.)
A good way to build relationships between them is to go on a journey together or go through trials together. Also another way to win a woman’s heart in a story is too save her life. Eventually the characters will have this this feeling that they can’t explain, they will be drawn to each other. After a while they will realize they love each other and will do anything for each other, no matter how dangerous.
Hope this is helpful to you. Sorry if it sounds strange, I’m much better at writing a romance story then explaining one.
I hope all of you are doing well. I’ll be praying for you guys. #FF4L. ✌️
-SunnyFox57.
P.S: I can’t wait for 96 Moon!
Moon, what I meant was that people like and respect you. A lot. Whereas the only thing I’ll be remembered for in Dododex is ‘the first person too fight with Moon.’ And do you know if there’s another person in Dododex named Ghost other than my friend? If so I can rename myself. Thank you for you guys support! And please continue with your story Moon! Ben I haven’t had the pleasure too find and read ur story so can you please tell me where that is? And Moon if your a real writer (which I know u actually are.) then I have suggestion! You know how The Obelisk has really good grammar and stuff like that? Well maybe you could like copy and paste it onto like a writing app (I personally would suggest Pages! It’s a really good writing app! I don’t know if it’s on computer tho.🤔 ) and you could like edit it and like make it like the characters are humans. (Bc I think you have too get permission from the Developer of Ark too use it’s Characters🤔. And unless you know the dev you can’t get in contact with him. He doesn’t respond too the reviews anymore.) And u could turn The Obelisk into an actual book. Then everyone can read it. Although you would have too finish writing first. If you like this idea (or if u don’t) pls respond! I hope this didn’t waste any of ur day while reading this. I hope u respond soon!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
To the person who can’t find the next Chapters of The Obelisk—
The next chapters are all in order. Sometimes it just takes time for someone to write the next chapter. Starting in Snails extinguish, it goes down through all tamables in alphabetical order. If you are stuck on Gallimimus just check next section.