From Ben (Part 2 Message)

I’ll start with PoP Chap 23 first. Wyvernian, you did a great job on this chapter as you usually do. I can definitely see that Ron is becoming more of a leader, I guess he’s becoming a captain of his own, eh? Also I like how Ping is becoming more smart, even though he may be a little naive or not so bright at times, gathering the Kairuku and persuading them to join their side by telling them the fish is gone because of the Ice Queen… LOL. Well I guess that’s all for now… Hopefully the heroes of Pandora manage to complete their journey safely. Although it makes me wonder what’s next after this season/series 🤔. Im sure you know the answer to that.

Next up, Tortuga Chap 22 and 23! Wow there’s a lot to dissect for 22… Okay, so apparently pirates are set to head to Tortuga because of Josh Swan, who is apparently a traitor within their pirate group. And their leader is Captain Piranha… I am wondering what Mr. Swan did to ‘betray’ these pirates. I’m guessing from their last names, Captain Piranha is a vicious, aggressive man who will tear apart at his enemies with no mercy, while Mr. Swan is a gracious, perhaps peaceful man. Perhaps Mr. Swan didn’t agree with the ways of the pirates, so he set off on his own and maybe did some damage to the pirates as a result. Perhaps that is how Captain Piranha here got his scar. Mr. Swan cut it in his desertion. Also ewwww, Captain Piranha does NOT brush his teeth. But this explains a lot about Mr. Swan, and how he knows how to fight with swords, he used to be a pirate!

And finally for Chap 22, it seems the British are here… I guess after Extinction happened and the Arks landed and the Earth was purged of element, some nations were reestablished, and Britain is one of them? I wonder how powerful these new nations are, if they even can be called nations, perhaps they are no more than towns. Also oh no… Captain Shortstacks- I mean Hugo thinks that Tortuga is a pirate haven, I surely hope that the town of Tortuga isn’t terribly demised (it’s definitely getting destroyed now that I said it).

Chapter 23 is next on my inspection list, hmm let’s see here, Eric probably has a crush on Elizabeth, and woo hoo Andrew asks Emma out on a date!!! Things are going great for the two, I even almost forgot about the curfew laws! And here we go Mr. Creepazoid showed up with his fam to ruin things, as per usual. He seems to be getting more demanding and bold with his moves, first of all, not cool dude, second of all, disgusting, dude. Also I guess his brothers support his creepy moves, which means there’s now THREE of them to deal with. Mike the… idk and Mickie the rat. I still haven’t come up with nicknames for those two yet. I wonder who’s like the leader of the three, or if they all just do whatever cuz they’re too dumb to actually run the town. How do they even run the town??? Weirdos. Anyway, yeah thats about it, although I do have some suggestions for the three M brothers (creepy #1, 2, and 3). Perhaps you could show how the three interact to run the town. It would be pretty cool to see their personalities (okay maybe not cool to see how creepy they are but you get the point), like who’s the smart one? The strong one? The logical one? (Although I doubt any of them are logical).

Also one more suggestions, perhaps we could see more scenes with the Buckleshoot family? I miss seeing Aaron, and I’m wondering how his tamed creatures are doing. I’d be cool to see the family chill together, see how they interact. I especially want to know what Elizabeth thinks of Eric…

Well that’s about it, you did great the two of you! Your stories almost made me forget Obelisk is on hiatus because of Moon’s broken computers… Welp, see you on the next run!

PS: Valentine’s Day is coming up… Perhaps it’d be a good idea to make a Valentine’s Special? I know I’m definitely making one.