Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
I wrote chapter 5 for Red, and it somehow closed, and now I’m a bit aggravated by that, so here’s a summary of what happened:
So Red met a group of sharks, six of them including the leader. Then the sharks joined her army, they split up to go find other creatures. Red found a basilo and he refused to join, but then a mosa ate the basilo and got two other mosasaurs to join. Three mosasaurs joined the army. Then Red found a whale and an alpha squid ate it, the ocean really is a unmerciful and brutal place. Anyways, the alpha squid’s name was Bruce and he joined the army. They all met up at the kelp cave (also known as “easy underwater cave”) and there were 15 sharks (including the leader) 3 basilosaurus, 3 mosasaurs, an alpha squid, and Red. That’s everything, now the army is making a plan and then they will try to destroy as much as they can, and kill as many creatures.
-Lamprey
The Red Pike-
Rockwell’s story-Chapter One by Swamp
“My name is Thomas Rockwell.” The man said. He held a sword and wore flak dyed navy.
“Can it, moron.” The guard said. “It’s thirty days in prison for you.”
“I swear, I didn’t do-well, whatever you said I did.”
“Ya burned down our redwood outpost, Tommy!” He yelled.
Rockwell rolled his eyes and knocked the guard out in one punch.
The other guard was astonished and frightened. She turned to run and tell somebody but Rockwell shot a tranq arrow into her neck. He took their pikes and wrenched himself out of his metal cell.
“Where am I?” He wondered. All he remembered was being near a big fire. Then being knocked out. Then he woke up in jail.
He saw a flag flying high above the massive base. He eyed the tapes, planning an escape. His eyes moved back to the flag. He recognized it.
The flag of the Red Legion.
I am currently having technical issues trying to post the next chapter of Ultimus. I will hopefully be releasing it here this week on here when I find the issue. But if I can’t, I will release it on SurviveTheArk.com’s Creative Chat Forum this Friday and it is currently in the discussions part of the Fandom right now to read if you would like. I do apologize for not being able to release it yet. But I will post haste!!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
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Who are you people /lh/silly
So many new writers and writers returning! This is so awesome and makes me so happy, very excited to read the new stories! Taking my own little breaks currently, though I try to check in. I thiiiink once Spring and Summer come around things will get much better and open for me. Writing, reading, I might sound crazy but it feels so much easier to do in the warmer seasons
—Moon
Hey PrimalApex, good to meet you and thanks for the feedback! I’m relatively new to story writing so anything helps😂. I haven’t had the time to check out the wiki or to start the next chapters yet, but I will try to get to both soon, but chapter IV will be in ammonite. I think the next step is to try to flesh out Marcel as a character, but I do have plans for future chapters.
Anyway thanks for taking the time to read my story, I hope you all enjoy it!
-Jerrald
Re-ascends!!!
Hi! I’m really like - unorganised rn. So if I take alootaa time to reply im just dying metaphorically. Hi Primal! Hi Sunny! I’m so happy y’all r still here <33, you guys are Awesome. And hello everyone new!
-PD
(ps…. new things may come on haze, or a new story may emerge on achatina…. :3 )
Greetings and Salutations Jerrald!!!! Welcome to Achatina!!! I’m PrimalApex, I’m the heavy Ark lore/alternate universe sequel writer here. I write Ultimus and Journey. But if you would like you can call me Apex or Primal!!! If you want to check out some of the other stories. Check out the fandom as RelatingHen said, you can most of the stories written by any of the other authors. But if you need some more information, I can help!!! Hope you enjoy being here in Achatina!!!
Also, looking at your writing to see what can be fixed. I would divide up your work into more paragraphs and when you add dialogue, it should immediately should be a new paragraph. I haven’t looked too deep into your story yet to see if there’s anything else. But it looks pretty good!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
PrimalApex, Chapter 10 was interesting. Who could this creature be? And why was he trying to get to Fjordur? What did he mean by the fact that he’s free now? Well I hope he doesn’t do to much damage in the Redwoods, that’s where the Terror Bird Empire is, right? Hey, maybe we’ll see the Terror Birds or Bramble again. Maybe we’ll see more perspective in Fjordur in the future.
Sylveevee, Chapter 17 was great! I’m glad my tip worked for you. What a plot twist, I did not expect that at all! But I’m so glad Cooper is alive, and he’s getting super strong too, he might be one of the most powerful people in QOA at the moment, if he still has two more powers to go… Overall, a really good chapter. Drake’s feelings were used very well in this chapter following Cooper’s “death”, and I really liked it. But man, I feel bad for Blue. Ten children!
Sunny, I really enjoyed Chapter 22 and 23! So Cole is going to hide it out and work for nobody. Honestly, I don’t blame him at all, that’s a smart move on his part. Also THATs what happened to River Bend… yeah, I dont think Jack can visit it any time soon. I hope Peter and the rest of Cole’s family survived the attack, but, probably not :( RIP. TBH that chapter I almost expected an Among Us reference LOL. “There’s a spy among us, we need to find him,” XD. And Cole what in the world are you doing with that picture… Creepster. Hopefully he stops doing that, sheesh. Youre just as bad as Michael (well, not as bad, at least you didnt kill people, but you might since youre just a DIRTY SPY).
And the Shadowy Figure is being crazy again as always. Hmm, Jack seems familiar to him. Yeah it’s probably Aaron. If it was Aragorn, he’d be way more familiar to him since it’s his own son. Yeah, he’s all corrupted and whatever and maybe if it’s Aragorn he’s gone so mad he can’t even recognize his own son, but, you know what this seems like the most viable option of it being AAaron.
Anyway, good job everyone. Seeya around!
OK, I don’t have a lot of minor villains in the ROTP series but here is three that I came up with for ToT:
Michael. Acts haughty and thinks he’s better than everyone else. Michael has dirt brown hair that is kneaded into very tight curly knots and has a horribly trimmed goatee. He likes to wear a tie suit. He will occasionally assume something that isn’t true.For example, in TTDOT, he accused Aragorn of keeping Emma away from him. Which is not true. Emma hates him. He’s desperately in love with Emma, who is revolted by him. He hates Aragorn and Aragorn hates him.
Willow. Has black hair usually up in a ponytail, green eyes, and tanned skin. Her implant gives her the ability to go through solid objects. She CANNOT go through people tho. She doesn’t like anyone who gets in her way. she is very mean when provoked.
Camille. (I don’t remember her exact appearance) She has long black hair and brown eyes, and has large black feathered wings sprouting from her back. She usually wears black clothes. Her implant someone malfunctioned and instead of being able to transform into a bird, wings sprouted from her back and are there permanently. Although she works for villains, she is very gentle. She is also very quiet and rarely speaks.
Also Ben, it wasn’t mentioned but the firey creature that saved Josephina and Jaquin was a phoenix. Josephina accidentally summoned it with her powers to protect them. I posted another chapter of TWOTP btw. Cya later!
-SunnyFox57
Hey guys just wanted to share something stupid I did on a server on ark.
So, I was playing PVP at the red obelisk, with a bunch of other players, several of which had fabricated stuff. I only had a wooden bat and an ascendant wooden bow I got from a pursuit. I was losing TERRIBLY. Most of the players were brawling on the platform, right in the middle. So, I decided to come up with plan that I thought would make me win. I quickly crafted a parachute, pulled out my ascendant bow, and jumped of the cliff, floating peacefully toward the red ob platform. Only got a quarter of the way toward the platform when a dude in tek armor jumped out from behind a rock and shot and killed me in midair. I’m such a noob.
A very ashamed MrDemonRealz
From Ben
PrimalApex i think thats really funny, we could totally do that! Then they could be disappointed and get another villain (maybe one from Journey?)
Thinking of it now i do have an idea for an "Omega Titan". It would be like a King Titan with elements from every story, (a medallion from TROTP, super high tech stuff from Ultimus, tentacles of Rockwell from Hopes Cry, etc). What do you guys think? I dont think we should bring this guy in like a few chapters later, maybe some last villain ultimate showdown type thing. I also wouldnt think the Omega Titan is responsible for creating TOT or the obelisks or bringing any of the characters to TOT. It was created because.. the obelisks were tampered with way too much maybe, so it caused WAY too many characters and elements from stories to surge into TOT? Idk well figure it out i think its cool.
Mr.GhostGamer, you have my approval for joining!! I am doing chapter 6 currently, but you can do chapter seven!!!! I can’t wait to see what you do!!!
Oh and for everyone who has been waiting, here is my character list.
Andrew Lang: Born in the middle of the 24th century, Andrew Lang was the son of Hunter and Kim Lang. Two higher officials in Project Genesis. But because of their knowledge of what the Terran Federation was doing, they put their son and his pet dog in Cryostasis when he was 11 to save him from the dangers and pain of the Engrammic Matrix. They were going to awake just before the Genesis Ship left as their Engrammic Matrix’s doubles and place him in the simulation. However due to unknown circumstances, they never did. Andrew woke up in the very distant future (greater than or equal to 700 years later, but still unknown.). His age in TOT will be 23 years old, around the same age as he is in Prologue. His appearance is dirty blonde hair with green hazel eyes, tall with a light build.
Freya, Daughter of Jorgan the Peaceful (Survivor): Born in the 9th century. Freya was a Norse Viking. At the age of nineteen, she went on a trade ship to trade with ally villages. When she returned, she found her entire village was pillaged and destroyed. All who lived there were dead including her family by a warring tribe from the south. A day later, the entire tribe was killed by her hands. Giving her the name Freya the Vindictive. But despite her history and threatening nickname, she is quite the friendly person who is the first one to trust. Her appearance is Blonde hair and blue eyes, with an average height and build. She around the same age as Andrew between 22 and 24 years old.
Sylas Fennec (Survivor): Born in the late first quarter of the 21st century, Sylas Fennec was a computer programmer and an extreme movie buff. He became one of the youngest billionaires of his time after selling one of the most advanced computer program of its time at age 25. In the story he is around 28 years old. His appearance is red curly hair and bluish eyes. He is short with average build.
Erica Stevens (Survivor): Born in an unknown portion of the 24th century. Erica Stevens was a URE employee who worked on the Arks. However little else is known about her as she keeps most of her past a secret. Her appearance is Jet black air with brown eyes, above average height and light build. She seems to be around the same age as Andrew and Freya, around 22 to 24 years old.
LLTCCATOT!!!!
Also I released chapter 7 of Ultimus!!!
U.N.T!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
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