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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion

Greetings and Salutations Jerrald!!!! Welcome to Achatina!!! I’m PrimalApex, I’m the heavy Ark lore/alternate universe sequel writer here. I write Ultimus and Journey. But if you would like you can call me Apex or Primal!!! If you want to check out some of the other stories. Check out the fandom as RelatingHen said, you can most of the stories written by any of the other authors. But if you need some more information, I can help!!! Hope you enjoy being here in Achatina!!!

Also, looking at your writing to see what can be fixed. I would divide up your work into more paragraphs and when you add dialogue, it should immediately should be a new paragraph. I haven’t looked too deep into your story yet to see if there’s anything else. But it looks pretty good!!!

Until Next Time!!!

-PrimalApex:)