Hey PrimalApex, good to meet you and thanks for the feedback! I’m relatively new to story writing so anything helps😂. I haven’t had the time to check out the wiki or to start the next chapters yet, but I will try to get to both soon, but chapter IV will be in ammonite. I think the next step is to try to flesh out Marcel as a character, but I do have plans for future chapters.

Anyway thanks for taking the time to read my story, I hope you all enjoy it!

-Jerrald