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“Empires fall.” Chap3
“Everyone sit.” Blood announces to his captains in a bunker below the fort. “Last night it has dawned on me that soon enough we will have to ether give up. Or escape base...” He says with regret. “Any of you have ideas?” Blood asks. “Sadly I do not... I don’t think any of us do” A captain replies. An uncomfortable silence follows. Blood buries his head in on of his hands and scratchs the back of his head with the other hand. “I have heard from some sources that a gurrelia group will be within 1 mile of here...” Blood says. “Would it be possible to get at least a third of our forces out by Friday?” He asks. “Yes general. I think so.” A captain answers. Blood gives a sigh and then gets up. “Meeting dismissed” he mumbled as he exists the bunker and back up into the base.
The tales of the empire of ark s1 ep1 Joey was half dead his phiomia was dead the phiomia he had had for two years had been killed by a raptor and Joey barely escaped. Then a voice brought Joey back to reality “this is the area he was said to live” the voice wasn’t far so he decided to find out what it was crawling under a bush close to them he saw the men they all had shields made of metal and metal spears. “ come out of the bush now we have you surrounded.
So uh, just wanted to let you all know, though I'll put this on the wiki as well. I'm going to be taking a break for a little bit, as I joined around three art contests and need to work hard on the submissions, as it's against some other really good artists. I'll still be writing FATF and TFTOA, but I need a bit of a break as I'm also a little low on motivation.
-SangToareGirl
Break-It, I loved the new chapter!!!! Honestly can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Ben, hope you enjoy it!!! Also forgot to mention that yeah, I released chapter 23 of Ultimus in Electrophorus!!
Spirit Dragon and Cheesecake, Greetings and Salutations!!! Welcome to Achatina!!!! I hope you enjoy your time!!
PastelGothPower, hope you liked them!! And if you got an idea for other creatures. Don’t mind taking suggestions!! Also if you want, check out the fandom page if you want to give further feedback or suggestions!! I think you already know about it, but I don’t know if you do.
To: Wyvernian, MrGhostGamer
From: Ben, & KM
Wyvernian, Chapter 16 of TOP OOS was good stuff! Yeah I already Fandom so I’ll leave it at that.
MGG, long time no see, glad you’re back in the writing game! Just hope that you’ll finish Hope’s Call and Life Before. Ark: Object of Extinction is really good so far and there’s a major improvement in writing between this and Hopes Cry. I’m curious to see why the URE is tatooing “Contestant” on their citizens for this ARK. Very fishy. Ethan seems fun so far. Anyway, I’ll see you around.
To: Break-it, DiploLover
From: Ben, & KM
Break-it, I returned back to TOT, so yeah, just putting that out there to clear up confusion.
DiploLover, Chapter 31 of CON was awesome! I presume now that KJ will team up with Adira, making her forces even stronger than before if she’s ordered the Yutys to go after the five wolves and now the humans with their aerial superiority. It’s going to be tough for the five wolves to defeat Adira with such powerful allies.
Mr.GhostGamer, you have my approval for joining!! I am doing chapter 6 currently, but you can do chapter seven!!!! I can’t wait to see what you do!!!
Oh and for everyone who has been waiting, here is my character list.
Andrew Lang: Born in the middle of the 24th century, Andrew Lang was the son of Hunter and Kim Lang. Two higher officials in Project Genesis. But because of their knowledge of what the Terran Federation was doing, they put their son and his pet dog in Cryostasis when he was 11 to save him from the dangers and pain of the Engrammic Matrix. They were going to awake just before the Genesis Ship left as their Engrammic Matrix’s doubles and place him in the simulation. However due to unknown circumstances, they never did. Andrew woke up in the very distant future (greater than or equal to 700 years later, but still unknown.). His age in TOT will be 23 years old, around the same age as he is in Prologue. His appearance is dirty blonde hair with green hazel eyes, tall with a light build.
Freya, Daughter of Jorgan the Peaceful (Survivor): Born in the 9th century. Freya was a Norse Viking. At the age of nineteen, she went on a trade ship to trade with ally villages. When she returned, she found her entire village was pillaged and destroyed. All who lived there were dead including her family by a warring tribe from the south. A day later, the entire tribe was killed by her hands. Giving her the name Freya the Vindictive. But despite her history and threatening nickname, she is quite the friendly person who is the first one to trust. Her appearance is Blonde hair and blue eyes, with an average height and build. She around the same age as Andrew between 22 and 24 years old.
Sylas Fennec (Survivor): Born in the late first quarter of the 21st century, Sylas Fennec was a computer programmer and an extreme movie buff. He became one of the youngest billionaires of his time after selling one of the most advanced computer program of its time at age 25. In the story he is around 28 years old. His appearance is red curly hair and bluish eyes. He is short with average build.
Erica Stevens (Survivor): Born in an unknown portion of the 24th century. Erica Stevens was a URE employee who worked on the Arks. However little else is known about her as she keeps most of her past a secret. Her appearance is Jet black air with brown eyes, above average height and light build. She seems to be around the same age as Andrew and Freya, around 22 to 24 years old.
LLTCCATOT!!!!
Also I released chapter 7 of Ultimus!!!
U.N.T!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
The Terrible Demise of Tortuga Character List - Story by SunnyFox57
Part 1/4
Summary + Lore:
Tortuga is a cruel city on a remote island with cruel laws and strict law enforcement that do not mind taking away the lives of other human beings. The Petersons are newcomers in this enigmatic town, with an enigmatic past of their own. Each Peterson (excluding the mother) carry their own unique medallion, which gives them a special ability to protect them from harm’s way. The story takes place after the events of ARK, and because of the little technology and elements left over, the world was thrown into an old-school environment with things such as telephones being common place. The island of Tortuga was formed by a volcano known as “El Elemento”, which formed on its own during the time of the ARKs and contained melted element rather than magma.
The “Petersons”:
Aragorn: The father of the Petersons. A fierce, yet protective man of the family, he is cold to strangers whom he does not trust. He is especially protective of his children. He also cares for his wife very much and loves her with all his heart. He wears black all the time. At Tortuga he worked at the docks. He is a good singer, just like his wife, and he started a band with his brother Tom, and a friend of theirs, Cole. His medallion power remained unknown, but he, somehow, did not have a shadow as Michael noted. He has overwhelming strength, as he managed to hold off many peacekeepers before being inevitably apprehended along his wife. He was hanged due to Michael’s decree.
Arianna: The mother of the Petersons. She is very caring and kind to her children. She is much more approving of Emma and Andrew’s romantic tensions, unlike Aragorn initially. She is quite the romantic with Aragorn. She is also an extremely talented singer, just like her husband. Unlike her husband and children, she does not possess a medallion because she married into the family. She was also hanged due to Michael’s decree.
Emma: The main character of TTDOT. The eldest child of the Petersons, she is 19 years of age and is the target of the new mayor of Tortuga’s infatuations, Michael, which leads to many conflicts in the TTDOT. Her medallion power allows her to see events in different times, and in different locations, whether it be through dreams or conscious. Her love interest is Andrew, whom she ends up marrying. She becomes blind at the end of the story, something which she blames on herself for unknown reasons. She is honest and does not hide things she may deem as potentially dangerous. During the British Bombings, she and many other Tortugans hid in Josh Swan’s secret bunker in the sewers.
Jay: Twin of Jack Peterson, 13 years of age. He always wins in chess games against his brother Jack, which means he may be a bit more strategic and cunning than him. Jay is also more favored by the younger children in the Peterson family compared to Jack. He is protective of his older sister Emma, despite his youth. His medallion power allows him to create portals out of thin air to other locations. During the British Bombings, Jay’s power activated, and he escaped Tortuga via his portals.
Jack: Twin of Jay Peterson, 13 years of age. He may not be as smart as his twin but he’s still a good person who cares about his family a lot. He gets embarrassed easily. His medallion power allows him to have high regenerative capabilities, allowing wounds to heal very fast. During the British Bombings, he had been found by British soldiers, who shot at him, mistaking him for a pirate. Luckily, with his medallion power, he managed to stay alive.
Jaquin: The younger brother of the Petersons. Six years old. His medallion power remained unknown. He was presumed dead by Jack during the British Bombings, but an unknown fiery creature had jumped in the way of a bomb that was set to kill him and his sister, Josephina. He and Josephina were taken in by Tom after the demise of Tortuga.
Josephina: The younger sister of the Petersons. Six years old. Her medallion power remained unknown. She was also presumed dead by Jack during the British Bombings, but an unknown fiery creature had jumped in the way of a bomb that was set to kill her and her brother, Jaquin. She and Jaquin were taken in by Tom after the demise of Tortuga, more specifically because she looked exactly like HER (whoever that is).
Apex, the prologue was really good I like how you brought back the pego, didn’t he say he had a blue and a red rune as well? Maybe having all three could do something special.
Sunny, correct me if I’m wrong but isn’t Rust a deinonychus? I understand why you would imagine him as a pego because the obelisk often makes him seem small, i sometimes imagine him as a pego sized deinonychus. But I’m pretty sure he was a deinonychus. I could be wrong..
-Wyvernain
Okay… so I just looked at the crunch. The Center date officially announced with the Shastasaurus releasing along with it!!! And besides that and the awesome Ark Addition Anomalocaris that Garuga made. Not much else in the crunch that is fact.
Time for the speculations. Now in the written teaser for the Center, they say ‘double the size’. Is this hinting at the map literally being double the size of the original Center or is just a cheeky placed statement that is stating the previously known fact that the Center is double the size of The Island? Also if the Shastasaurus is going back to the original plan to The Center. Does that mean the Gigantoraptor is going back to Ragnarok or is it now no longer a temporary mod and is a permanent mod? Will that mean we are getting the runner up to Ragnarok?(Okay I doubt this one will happen but you never know🤷♂️)
Well, Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
OoOOOoOOooOooohh scorched looks amazing! No map expansion unfortunately 😔 but still good, at least there’s new caves and they upgraded the old ones, I love the reddish sand it helps with the Wild West theme of the frontier adventure pack and it looks nice also the Wild West themed stuff is AMAZING my base will most definitely be an old western town, with a train just for fun if not anything else 😂 the fasola and oasisaur look great and I like how they are making all the newer creatures have different taming techniques it makes them way more interesting. So the oasisaur is tamed by reviving a tame in the resurrection pool and guarding it from waves of vultures, first off, wasn’t expecting that but it’s cool 😆 second do you have to guard the souls of every tame you try to revive or just the one you use to tame the oasisaur? Because on one hand I think it would be more balanced if there was a challenge you had to do to get your tame back and if you lose it’s permanently dead but on the other hand… imagine the stress of only having one chance to get your beloved tame back.. but if you fail you just lost it again… 😖 that sounds really stressful…
-future Sheriff/Mayor Wyvernain of whatever I name my town.
Wyvernian, I’m going to say that they won’t say anything about Scorched until the exact time it releases and that it will probably release around 4-8 PM EST. If I remember correctly, that’s when they normally release new maps. And I definitely think that it’s good that we don’t have any word yet. If we did, it would either be really good(being released on all platforms) or just bad(that they are dealing with some issues that will take time to finish).
Sunnyfox, I read chapter 7!!!! I enjoyed it!!! I just realized how many twins there are in your series!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter l!!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Everything has an ending. And, there is no such thing as immortality. All stories do. And the inspiration and life they bring to other creators will eventually come to an end as well.
But that wont stop us from trying anyway. The present matters more than the future. Thats what I always thought. If you destroy your present in hopes of a better future.. would it really be worth it? Will that future even come true?
I just wanted to say thank you again Moon. Your story is the reason this community even continued to live on, this community is the reason why my story even exists, and the very idea of it. Youve brought a lot of people together. I give you props for that. I think its safe to say youre a legend here, Moon. Some readers and writers may have faded away over the months, but that didnt stop you. Im sure they would be proud if they saw you finished this story. Maybe, maybe another version of us is celebrating with them.
The air feels heavier. Ive not been here as long as others such as Wyvernian or PrimalApex, but it sure as hell feels like it, looking back at all those lost souls.
Well we aren't meant to live forever.
Thanks for the story. Thanks for the ride. It was a fun one 😌
- Benjamin / OBJ
Hah! I figured it out I just gotta repeatedly refresh until the new tips pop up
Moon, that did kinda seem like the end but it definitely needs a sequel and if not an epilogue, to explain what happens to the five, I’m hoping for a sequel so I can keep reading tho..
Apex, 100% agree with everything you said, and I never thought of that but that would be amazing if they reverse April foolsed us and released the center with scorched but I doubt it because of how recently they said they delayed it because they’re “partners” were too slow. But we’ll see.
Ben, Caldren was the dinopithicus kings son not to be confused with the dinopithicus king boss the actual lost island boss is what they call the “high king” that’s why the king says the artifacts are a “gift” from the high king. Caldren is a hybrid his mother was the gigantopithicus princes, and his father was the king of the dinopithicus (again not to be confused with the boss) in hindsight, probably should’ve called him the emperor dinopithicus or something so it wouldn’t confuse with the real boss but.. too late now…😖 glad your liking the series so far.
-Wyvernain
Most journeys start of safe, and fun. Mine, not so much. With dinosaurs and other extinct creatures, I fought for my life. But here’s my story- a story of gore, heartbreak and survival. If you are sensitive to gore, not my problem. But here it is!
Ark, survival stories
Book 1, chapter 1
Running through the forests, he avoided the sharp tales of stegosaurus, the nasty bites of the many insects and the hell spawns, microraptors.
“Get away you hellish being!” He screams, running. He trips and falls down into a tree bare small canyon with trodons wandering around.
“Ohh shi-“
Bites after bites, the poison flew through his blood, as the trodons slashed and scratched at his back.
“Aaaa-“ he was about to scream, as blood came out of his mouth, poring down on the ground. As he closed his eyes. He stopped breathing.
He started opening his eyes, and in front of him stood in front of him, as he once again closed his eyes.
-Nightmare
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