Lava, Prior Extinction is really good!!! Good Extinction stories are hard to come by so it’ll be interesting to see how this one is!! I really enjoyed it!!! And from the few Extinction stories I’ve read so far, it’s unique to me!! The first person PoV was great and the protagonist’s backstory was very good and sad!! I like that the Titans weren’t already corrupted and first came to be guardians to protect the city!!! And I really excited to see more of this story!!!

-PrimalApex:)

Chapter thirty five is out!!! I hope I portrayed the characters correctly.

-SunnyFox57

Has anyone read chapter 2 of TPL in andrew…

-a confused and maybe sad sylveevee

Oh sorry specialraptor I will definitely work on that. It will be very helpful.

The reader

Hey the reader-

I like ur story but, one thing:

Idk who is talking in the story. Try using quotes for ppl to recognize who is talking in the story. Like this;

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“What are you doing today, Astro?” Raz asked.

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That’s one example. Here’s another;

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“Why are you following me? And why are you here?” She asked. But further away was a dog. “The cat must be scared..” she said again. The cat didn’t leave her side either way.

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Lol sorry, that was a paragraph. Anyways, I hope you get this. This will make your story a WHOLE lot better, and it will make it where you have more likes. Your welcome!

-SpecialRaptor (I hope no one thinks I’m gone from Dododex—I haven’t been writing very often)

Moon, I used to play Ark Mobile until I got my Xbox, now I'm thinking of reinstalling it to join your server! I might see you there one day, I don't know for sure yet.

PastelGothPower

Sorry specialraptor

King of the wyverns is in andrewsarchus. Sorry about the last tip.

The reader

Officially Chapter 57 has been released!!! I hope you enjoy!!! MGG, you’re up for the next chapter!!!

-PrimalApex:)

PastelGothPower, I’ve learned to accept it. I’m glad we have tour first Megaraptor in Ark!! But I wasn’t exactly interested in this design for this map. But I am glad to have it!!!

PD, Leviathan’s Lullaby first chapter is awesome!!! I am so excited for more of this story!! I CANNOT WAIT!!!

-PrimalApex:)

Yeah, it has been rather unnaturally quiet around here.

PrimalApex, I read chapter fourteen of Ultimus……NO NO NO! This can’t be happening!!! Pls don’t die, Reuben, pls don’t die. 🥺. He’s just a puppy..I can’t—

I know Reuben is going to die eventually but still!! 😡. Mean old raptors. I wonder why that raptors eyes were glowing magneta tho.

Hmm, interesting….

Cya later!

-Detective SunnyFox57 is on the case

MrGhostGamer, being slightly lethargic in my case. Also writing the next chapter of Ultimus and working a bit on Chapter 30 of TOT ahead of time.

Ben, I read chapter 66a!! It was great!! It’s sad that Skyler lost all her trust with her companions except for Rick. At least Gary now believes that she’s telling the truth, if only partially. I’m excited to see what happens with the group in this mini game to gain the artifact!!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next part of the chapter!!!

-PrimalApex:)

BEN your up i did my chapter enjoy

-sylveevee

From Ben

Angel if you feel quitting is right then go for it. Although if you want to find joy in writing again, write what you think is fun! You dont have to take it seriously in the beginning, nor do you have to be super ambitious at first. You can always start with short stories with only a chapter or two and do what you think is best for you. Thats just my tip tho

I definitely agree, Slyveevee I could never write like you when I was in middle school. I was TERRIBLE at writing. It’s a miracle that the ROTP series is here at all. 🤣.

Also Wyverian, yeah I’ve been trying to use the website. That’s what I’ve been using to see y’all’s messages on the fandom account. I refreshed the app and the website but it continues showing the error message every time I post something. I can’t wait to see the TOT map!

-SunnyFox57

Wyvernian, I read chapter 23 of TOT!!! It was really good!!! I really like how you explained how Sheeri split away from the main group!!!! Darkhide and Emerald getting chased by the feral drakes were really cool!!!! And Steve’s interactions with Darkhide were great!!!! I really enjoyed it!!!!

I also read chapter 53!!! It was really good!!! Uh oh, liquid element and creatures or humans don’t mix well. Salizar really did find a good way to make her suffer and allow her to destroy Caesar’s friends. Interesting that there’s a large temple in the mountain!!! Poor Ferox’s that we’re trying to get away from their element addiction ways. I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!

I loved both chapters!!! And I’m glad you enjoyed my new chapter!!! I really appreciate it!! When I released it and read it over, I thought I did really bad with it.

Thank you everyone who’s been reading my stories!! I really appreciate it all and I’m blessed that you guys read it!! Thank you!!!

Sunnyfox, I read chapter 28!!!! It was really good!!!! Peggie’s power is finally revealed!!!! The fight between James and Tom was awesome!!! It was really good!!! But I wonder what the gunfire was? An assassination attempt? I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

Sylveevee, YOUR JUST STARTING MIDDLE SCHOOL!! Like…

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*me crying in a corner

But for real, you write amazingly!!!! I could never write that good at middle school. English was kinda my worst subject and most hated subject, it still is to be honest.

Well, Until Next Time!!!

-PrimalApex:)

From Ben

PrimalApex, Chapter 10 was interesting. Who could this creature be? And why was he trying to get to Fjordur? What did he mean by the fact that he’s free now? Well I hope he doesn’t do to much damage in the Redwoods, that’s where the Terror Bird Empire is, right? Hey, maybe we’ll see the Terror Birds or Bramble again. Maybe we’ll see more perspective in Fjordur in the future.

Sylveevee, Chapter 17 was great! I’m glad my tip worked for you. What a plot twist, I did not expect that at all! But I’m so glad Cooper is alive, and he’s getting super strong too, he might be one of the most powerful people in QOA at the moment, if he still has two more powers to go… Overall, a really good chapter. Drake’s feelings were used very well in this chapter following Cooper’s “death”, and I really liked it. But man, I feel bad for Blue. Ten children!

Sunny, I really enjoyed Chapter 22 and 23! So Cole is going to hide it out and work for nobody. Honestly, I don’t blame him at all, that’s a smart move on his part. Also THATs what happened to River Bend… yeah, I dont think Jack can visit it any time soon. I hope Peter and the rest of Cole’s family survived the attack, but, probably not :( RIP. TBH that chapter I almost expected an Among Us reference LOL. “There’s a spy among us, we need to find him,” XD. And Cole what in the world are you doing with that picture… Creepster. Hopefully he stops doing that, sheesh. Youre just as bad as Michael (well, not as bad, at least you didnt kill people, but you might since youre just a DIRTY SPY).

And the Shadowy Figure is being crazy again as always. Hmm, Jack seems familiar to him. Yeah it’s probably Aaron. If it was Aragorn, he’d be way more familiar to him since it’s his own son. Yeah, he’s all corrupted and whatever and maybe if it’s Aragorn he’s gone so mad he can’t even recognize his own son, but, you know what this seems like the most viable option of it being AAaron.

Anyway, good job everyone. Seeya around!

I posted chapter twenty two of TWOTP. I’m still working on chapter twenty two of TOT tho. LOL. Anyways…cya!

-SunnyFox57

Moon-

I gotta say, chapter 74 reminded me of warrior cats. Because of moonbeam telling them about their frost part of the training. It felt like they were the aprendences and moonbeam is their mentor. Just saying. I liked it very much. Hello and goodbye.

-SpecialRaptor

Wow, I am hungry now, and hungry for pizza now. Also I just realized that I had a typo in my last post, I didn’t mean don’t, I meant just. Anyway I have been busy writing my story and getting a good plot for it (I am just about at chapter 20. This is going to be a long story from what I can tell from now.). I also have been reading jointed mysteries, and I got to say. I really like it!!!!!! Keep up the awesome work SpecialRaptor!!! Also I have been looking around for the next chapter of the obelisk and HoP and PoP. Also I am still falling off the cliff from the last chapter of the obelisk. Okay, I just wanted to let everyone know I am not dead or gone and that I am going back to reading jointed mysteries!!

-Apex

The Red Pike

Walkers story part Seven

By Jedi

Walker sat on the porch of Siyu's house, once again. He carved his bow, once again. And once again, he was bored. He finished carving his bow, and then set out to hunt something. He killed a couple dodos, has a close encounter with a carno, and destroyed a titanromya swarm. That's when it came. A creature peaked him through the undergrowth. It watched as he harvested the body of a dodo. It walked over and looked up at him. Walker looked back at it. He recognized it as a pego. He shoowed it away, and continued to harvest the meat. It leapt at him and grabbed his bow, then took of running. He had worked on that bow for weeks. He wasn't letting it get stolen. He ran after it, getting slapped on the face by many twigs and bushes. The pego kept running until it slammed face first into a rock. It leapt at him again but he barely managed to shoot it in the leg with his crossbow. It fell to the ground and whimpered. He felt bad. He couldn't leave it to die. And to be honest, well, it looked kind of cute. So he fed it some berries and tamed it. He put it around his shoulder, and began the journey home. I'll make you, Bandito."

*Bandito is Spanish for bandit. I thought it would work for a thief. I only know this because of Google translate.