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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
So uh, just wanted to let you all know, though I'll put this on the wiki as well. I'm going to be taking a break for a little bit, as I joined around three art contests and need to work hard on the submissions, as it's against some other really good artists. I'll still be writing FATF and TFTOA, but I need a bit of a break as I'm also a little low on motivation.
-SangToareGirl
MrGhostGamer, being slightly lethargic in my case. Also writing the next chapter of Ultimus and working a bit on Chapter 30 of TOT ahead of time.
Ben, I read chapter 66a!! It was great!! It’s sad that Skyler lost all her trust with her companions except for Rick. At least Gary now believes that she’s telling the truth, if only partially. I’m excited to see what happens with the group in this mini game to gain the artifact!!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next part of the chapter!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Angel if you feel quitting is right then go for it. Although if you want to find joy in writing again, write what you think is fun! You dont have to take it seriously in the beginning, nor do you have to be super ambitious at first. You can always start with short stories with only a chapter or two and do what you think is best for you. Thats just my tip tho
I definitely agree, Slyveevee I could never write like you when I was in middle school. I was TERRIBLE at writing. It’s a miracle that the ROTP series is here at all. 🤣.
Also Wyverian, yeah I’ve been trying to use the website. That’s what I’ve been using to see y’all’s messages on the fandom account. I refreshed the app and the website but it continues showing the error message every time I post something. I can’t wait to see the TOT map!
-SunnyFox57
Wyvernian, I read chapter 23 of TOT!!! It was really good!!! I really like how you explained how Sheeri split away from the main group!!!! Darkhide and Emerald getting chased by the feral drakes were really cool!!!! And Steve’s interactions with Darkhide were great!!!! I really enjoyed it!!!!
I also read chapter 53!!! It was really good!!! Uh oh, liquid element and creatures or humans don’t mix well. Salizar really did find a good way to make her suffer and allow her to destroy Caesar’s friends. Interesting that there’s a large temple in the mountain!!! Poor Ferox’s that we’re trying to get away from their element addiction ways. I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
I loved both chapters!!! And I’m glad you enjoyed my new chapter!!! I really appreciate it!! When I released it and read it over, I thought I did really bad with it.
Thank you everyone who’s been reading my stories!! I really appreciate it all and I’m blessed that you guys read it!! Thank you!!!
Sunnyfox, I read chapter 28!!!! It was really good!!!! Peggie’s power is finally revealed!!!! The fight between James and Tom was awesome!!! It was really good!!! But I wonder what the gunfire was? An assassination attempt? I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Sylveevee, YOUR JUST STARTING MIDDLE SCHOOL!! Like…
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*me crying in a corner
But for real, you write amazingly!!!! I could never write that good at middle school. English was kinda my worst subject and most hated subject, it still is to be honest.
Well, Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
PrimalApex, Chapter 10 was interesting. Who could this creature be? And why was he trying to get to Fjordur? What did he mean by the fact that he’s free now? Well I hope he doesn’t do to much damage in the Redwoods, that’s where the Terror Bird Empire is, right? Hey, maybe we’ll see the Terror Birds or Bramble again. Maybe we’ll see more perspective in Fjordur in the future.
Sylveevee, Chapter 17 was great! I’m glad my tip worked for you. What a plot twist, I did not expect that at all! But I’m so glad Cooper is alive, and he’s getting super strong too, he might be one of the most powerful people in QOA at the moment, if he still has two more powers to go… Overall, a really good chapter. Drake’s feelings were used very well in this chapter following Cooper’s “death”, and I really liked it. But man, I feel bad for Blue. Ten children!
Sunny, I really enjoyed Chapter 22 and 23! So Cole is going to hide it out and work for nobody. Honestly, I don’t blame him at all, that’s a smart move on his part. Also THATs what happened to River Bend… yeah, I dont think Jack can visit it any time soon. I hope Peter and the rest of Cole’s family survived the attack, but, probably not :( RIP. TBH that chapter I almost expected an Among Us reference LOL. “There’s a spy among us, we need to find him,” XD. And Cole what in the world are you doing with that picture… Creepster. Hopefully he stops doing that, sheesh. Youre just as bad as Michael (well, not as bad, at least you didnt kill people, but you might since youre just a DIRTY SPY).
And the Shadowy Figure is being crazy again as always. Hmm, Jack seems familiar to him. Yeah it’s probably Aaron. If it was Aragorn, he’d be way more familiar to him since it’s his own son. Yeah, he’s all corrupted and whatever and maybe if it’s Aragorn he’s gone so mad he can’t even recognize his own son, but, you know what this seems like the most viable option of it being AAaron.
Anyway, good job everyone. Seeya around!
Wow, I am hungry now, and hungry for pizza now. Also I just realized that I had a typo in my last post, I didn’t mean don’t, I meant just. Anyway I have been busy writing my story and getting a good plot for it (I am just about at chapter 20. This is going to be a long story from what I can tell from now.). I also have been reading jointed mysteries, and I got to say. I really like it!!!!!! Keep up the awesome work SpecialRaptor!!! Also I have been looking around for the next chapter of the obelisk and HoP and PoP. Also I am still falling off the cliff from the last chapter of the obelisk. Okay, I just wanted to let everyone know I am not dead or gone and that I am going back to reading jointed mysteries!!
-Apex
Break-It, I loved the new chapter!!!! Honestly can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Ben, hope you enjoy it!!! Also forgot to mention that yeah, I released chapter 23 of Ultimus in Electrophorus!!
Spirit Dragon and Cheesecake, Greetings and Salutations!!! Welcome to Achatina!!!! I hope you enjoy your time!!
PastelGothPower, hope you liked them!! And if you got an idea for other creatures. Don’t mind taking suggestions!! Also if you want, check out the fandom page if you want to give further feedback or suggestions!! I think you already know about it, but I don’t know if you do.
To: Wyvernian, MrGhostGamer
From: Ben, & KM
Wyvernian, Chapter 16 of TOP OOS was good stuff! Yeah I already Fandom so I’ll leave it at that.
MGG, long time no see, glad you’re back in the writing game! Just hope that you’ll finish Hope’s Call and Life Before. Ark: Object of Extinction is really good so far and there’s a major improvement in writing between this and Hopes Cry. I’m curious to see why the URE is tatooing “Contestant” on their citizens for this ARK. Very fishy. Ethan seems fun so far. Anyway, I’ll see you around.
To: Break-it, DiploLover
From: Ben, & KM
Break-it, I returned back to TOT, so yeah, just putting that out there to clear up confusion.
DiploLover, Chapter 31 of CON was awesome! I presume now that KJ will team up with Adira, making her forces even stronger than before if she’s ordered the Yutys to go after the five wolves and now the humans with their aerial superiority. It’s going to be tough for the five wolves to defeat Adira with such powerful allies.
OK, I don’t have a lot of minor villains in the ROTP series but here is three that I came up with for ToT:
Michael. Acts haughty and thinks he’s better than everyone else. Michael has dirt brown hair that is kneaded into very tight curly knots and has a horribly trimmed goatee. He likes to wear a tie suit. He will occasionally assume something that isn’t true.For example, in TTDOT, he accused Aragorn of keeping Emma away from him. Which is not true. Emma hates him. He’s desperately in love with Emma, who is revolted by him. He hates Aragorn and Aragorn hates him.
Willow. Has black hair usually up in a ponytail, green eyes, and tanned skin. Her implant gives her the ability to go through solid objects. She CANNOT go through people tho. She doesn’t like anyone who gets in her way. she is very mean when provoked.
Camille. (I don’t remember her exact appearance) She has long black hair and brown eyes, and has large black feathered wings sprouting from her back. She usually wears black clothes. Her implant someone malfunctioned and instead of being able to transform into a bird, wings sprouted from her back and are there permanently. Although she works for villains, she is very gentle. She is also very quiet and rarely speaks.
Also Ben, it wasn’t mentioned but the firey creature that saved Josephina and Jaquin was a phoenix. Josephina accidentally summoned it with her powers to protect them. I posted another chapter of TWOTP btw. Cya later!
-SunnyFox57