Hey the reader-

I like ur story but, one thing:

Idk who is talking in the story. Try using quotes for ppl to recognize who is talking in the story. Like this;

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“What are you doing today, Astro?” Raz asked.

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That’s one example. Here’s another;

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“Why are you following me? And why are you here?” She asked. But further away was a dog. “The cat must be scared..” she said again. The cat didn’t leave her side either way.

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Lol sorry, that was a paragraph. Anyways, I hope you get this. This will make your story a WHOLE lot better, and it will make it where you have more likes. Your welcome!

-SpecialRaptor (I hope no one thinks I’m gone from Dododex—I haven’t been writing very often)