Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
PrimalApex i think thats really funny, we could totally do that! Then they could be disappointed and get another villain (maybe one from Journey?)
Thinking of it now i do have an idea for an "Omega Titan". It would be like a King Titan with elements from every story, (a medallion from TROTP, super high tech stuff from Ultimus, tentacles of Rockwell from Hopes Cry, etc). What do you guys think? I dont think we should bring this guy in like a few chapters later, maybe some last villain ultimate showdown type thing. I also wouldnt think the Omega Titan is responsible for creating TOT or the obelisks or bringing any of the characters to TOT. It was created because.. the obelisks were tampered with way too much maybe, so it caused WAY too many characters and elements from stories to surge into TOT? Idk well figure it out i think its cool.
Mr.GhostGamer, you have my approval for joining!! I am doing chapter 6 currently, but you can do chapter seven!!!! I can’t wait to see what you do!!!
Oh and for everyone who has been waiting, here is my character list.
Andrew Lang: Born in the middle of the 24th century, Andrew Lang was the son of Hunter and Kim Lang. Two higher officials in Project Genesis. But because of their knowledge of what the Terran Federation was doing, they put their son and his pet dog in Cryostasis when he was 11 to save him from the dangers and pain of the Engrammic Matrix. They were going to awake just before the Genesis Ship left as their Engrammic Matrix’s doubles and place him in the simulation. However due to unknown circumstances, they never did. Andrew woke up in the very distant future (greater than or equal to 700 years later, but still unknown.). His age in TOT will be 23 years old, around the same age as he is in Prologue. His appearance is dirty blonde hair with green hazel eyes, tall with a light build.
Freya, Daughter of Jorgan the Peaceful (Survivor): Born in the 9th century. Freya was a Norse Viking. At the age of nineteen, she went on a trade ship to trade with ally villages. When she returned, she found her entire village was pillaged and destroyed. All who lived there were dead including her family by a warring tribe from the south. A day later, the entire tribe was killed by her hands. Giving her the name Freya the Vindictive. But despite her history and threatening nickname, she is quite the friendly person who is the first one to trust. Her appearance is Blonde hair and blue eyes, with an average height and build. She around the same age as Andrew between 22 and 24 years old.
Sylas Fennec (Survivor): Born in the late first quarter of the 21st century, Sylas Fennec was a computer programmer and an extreme movie buff. He became one of the youngest billionaires of his time after selling one of the most advanced computer program of its time at age 25. In the story he is around 28 years old. His appearance is red curly hair and bluish eyes. He is short with average build.
Erica Stevens (Survivor): Born in an unknown portion of the 24th century. Erica Stevens was a URE employee who worked on the Arks. However little else is known about her as she keeps most of her past a secret. Her appearance is Jet black air with brown eyes, above average height and light build. She seems to be around the same age as Andrew and Freya, around 22 to 24 years old.
LLTCCATOT!!!!
Also I released chapter 7 of Ultimus!!!
U.N.T!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
The Terrible Demise of Tortuga Character List - Story by SunnyFox57
Part 1/4
Summary + Lore:
Tortuga is a cruel city on a remote island with cruel laws and strict law enforcement that do not mind taking away the lives of other human beings. The Petersons are newcomers in this enigmatic town, with an enigmatic past of their own. Each Peterson (excluding the mother) carry their own unique medallion, which gives them a special ability to protect them from harm’s way. The story takes place after the events of ARK, and because of the little technology and elements left over, the world was thrown into an old-school environment with things such as telephones being common place. The island of Tortuga was formed by a volcano known as “El Elemento”, which formed on its own during the time of the ARKs and contained melted element rather than magma.
The “Petersons”:
Aragorn: The father of the Petersons. A fierce, yet protective man of the family, he is cold to strangers whom he does not trust. He is especially protective of his children. He also cares for his wife very much and loves her with all his heart. He wears black all the time. At Tortuga he worked at the docks. He is a good singer, just like his wife, and he started a band with his brother Tom, and a friend of theirs, Cole. His medallion power remained unknown, but he, somehow, did not have a shadow as Michael noted. He has overwhelming strength, as he managed to hold off many peacekeepers before being inevitably apprehended along his wife. He was hanged due to Michael’s decree.
Arianna: The mother of the Petersons. She is very caring and kind to her children. She is much more approving of Emma and Andrew’s romantic tensions, unlike Aragorn initially. She is quite the romantic with Aragorn. She is also an extremely talented singer, just like her husband. Unlike her husband and children, she does not possess a medallion because she married into the family. She was also hanged due to Michael’s decree.
Emma: The main character of TTDOT. The eldest child of the Petersons, she is 19 years of age and is the target of the new mayor of Tortuga’s infatuations, Michael, which leads to many conflicts in the TTDOT. Her medallion power allows her to see events in different times, and in different locations, whether it be through dreams or conscious. Her love interest is Andrew, whom she ends up marrying. She becomes blind at the end of the story, something which she blames on herself for unknown reasons. She is honest and does not hide things she may deem as potentially dangerous. During the British Bombings, she and many other Tortugans hid in Josh Swan’s secret bunker in the sewers.
Jay: Twin of Jack Peterson, 13 years of age. He always wins in chess games against his brother Jack, which means he may be a bit more strategic and cunning than him. Jay is also more favored by the younger children in the Peterson family compared to Jack. He is protective of his older sister Emma, despite his youth. His medallion power allows him to create portals out of thin air to other locations. During the British Bombings, Jay’s power activated, and he escaped Tortuga via his portals.
Jack: Twin of Jay Peterson, 13 years of age. He may not be as smart as his twin but he’s still a good person who cares about his family a lot. He gets embarrassed easily. His medallion power allows him to have high regenerative capabilities, allowing wounds to heal very fast. During the British Bombings, he had been found by British soldiers, who shot at him, mistaking him for a pirate. Luckily, with his medallion power, he managed to stay alive.
Jaquin: The younger brother of the Petersons. Six years old. His medallion power remained unknown. He was presumed dead by Jack during the British Bombings, but an unknown fiery creature had jumped in the way of a bomb that was set to kill him and his sister, Josephina. He and Josephina were taken in by Tom after the demise of Tortuga.
Josephina: The younger sister of the Petersons. Six years old. Her medallion power remained unknown. She was also presumed dead by Jack during the British Bombings, but an unknown fiery creature had jumped in the way of a bomb that was set to kill her and her brother, Jaquin. She and Jaquin were taken in by Tom after the demise of Tortuga, more specifically because she looked exactly like HER (whoever that is).
“Empires fall.” Chap3
“Everyone sit.” Blood announces to his captains in a bunker below the fort. “Last night it has dawned on me that soon enough we will have to ether give up. Or escape base...” He says with regret. “Any of you have ideas?” Blood asks. “Sadly I do not... I don’t think any of us do” A captain replies. An uncomfortable silence follows. Blood buries his head in on of his hands and scratchs the back of his head with the other hand. “I have heard from some sources that a gurrelia group will be within 1 mile of here...” Blood says. “Would it be possible to get at least a third of our forces out by Friday?” He asks. “Yes general. I think so.” A captain answers. Blood gives a sigh and then gets up. “Meeting dismissed” he mumbled as he exists the bunker and back up into the base.
The tales of the empire of ark s1 ep1 Joey was half dead his phiomia was dead the phiomia he had had for two years had been killed by a raptor and Joey barely escaped. Then a voice brought Joey back to reality “this is the area he was said to live” the voice wasn’t far so he decided to find out what it was crawling under a bush close to them he saw the men they all had shields made of metal and metal spears. “ come out of the bush now we have you surrounded.
Sang, if your still on here, before apex’s reply I did some digging around achatina, and found out you have a thing for lore, if you want I could tell you the WHOLE story of ARK: survival evolved/ascended, it goes a LOT deeper then you’d probably think… ( I ALMOST GOT TO 2024!!!)
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Break-It, I loved the new chapter!!!! Honestly can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Ben, hope you enjoy it!!! Also forgot to mention that yeah, I released chapter 23 of Ultimus in Electrophorus!!
Spirit Dragon and Cheesecake, Greetings and Salutations!!! Welcome to Achatina!!!! I hope you enjoy your time!!
PastelGothPower, hope you liked them!! And if you got an idea for other creatures. Don’t mind taking suggestions!! Also if you want, check out the fandom page if you want to give further feedback or suggestions!! I think you already know about it, but I don’t know if you do.
To: Wyvernian, MrGhostGamer
From: Ben, & KM
Wyvernian, Chapter 16 of TOP OOS was good stuff! Yeah I already Fandom so I’ll leave it at that.
MGG, long time no see, glad you’re back in the writing game! Just hope that you’ll finish Hope’s Call and Life Before. Ark: Object of Extinction is really good so far and there’s a major improvement in writing between this and Hopes Cry. I’m curious to see why the URE is tatooing “Contestant” on their citizens for this ARK. Very fishy. Ethan seems fun so far. Anyway, I’ll see you around.
To: Break-it, DiploLover
From: Ben, & KM
Break-it, I returned back to TOT, so yeah, just putting that out there to clear up confusion.
DiploLover, Chapter 31 of CON was awesome! I presume now that KJ will team up with Adira, making her forces even stronger than before if she’s ordered the Yutys to go after the five wolves and now the humans with their aerial superiority. It’s going to be tough for the five wolves to defeat Adira with such powerful allies.
Nvm my last tip I saw the wiki page. I might read some of the stories used in ToT.
Also, Chapter 24 is out now!! That means we’re on the horizon of the end of Section I!! I promise you, Chapter 25 will pull you in and you won’t take your eyes off until it’s done.
I will make the complete Chapter 25 then release it in its parts and in its creatures once all is done.
-RelatingHen8906
PS, Chapter 27 of CON was pretty cool!
Apex, the prologue was really good I like how you brought back the pego, didn’t he say he had a blue and a red rune as well? Maybe having all three could do something special.
Sunny, correct me if I’m wrong but isn’t Rust a deinonychus? I understand why you would imagine him as a pego because the obelisk often makes him seem small, i sometimes imagine him as a pego sized deinonychus. But I’m pretty sure he was a deinonychus. I could be wrong..
-Wyvernain
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