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From Ben
PrimalApex, Chapter 10 was interesting. Who could this creature be? And why was he trying to get to Fjordur? What did he mean by the fact that he’s free now? Well I hope he doesn’t do to much damage in the Redwoods, that’s where the Terror Bird Empire is, right? Hey, maybe we’ll see the Terror Birds or Bramble again. Maybe we’ll see more perspective in Fjordur in the future.
Sylveevee, Chapter 17 was great! I’m glad my tip worked for you. What a plot twist, I did not expect that at all! But I’m so glad Cooper is alive, and he’s getting super strong too, he might be one of the most powerful people in QOA at the moment, if he still has two more powers to go… Overall, a really good chapter. Drake’s feelings were used very well in this chapter following Cooper’s “death”, and I really liked it. But man, I feel bad for Blue. Ten children!
Sunny, I really enjoyed Chapter 22 and 23! So Cole is going to hide it out and work for nobody. Honestly, I don’t blame him at all, that’s a smart move on his part. Also THATs what happened to River Bend… yeah, I dont think Jack can visit it any time soon. I hope Peter and the rest of Cole’s family survived the attack, but, probably not :( RIP. TBH that chapter I almost expected an Among Us reference LOL. “There’s a spy among us, we need to find him,” XD. And Cole what in the world are you doing with that picture… Creepster. Hopefully he stops doing that, sheesh. Youre just as bad as Michael (well, not as bad, at least you didnt kill people, but you might since youre just a DIRTY SPY).
And the Shadowy Figure is being crazy again as always. Hmm, Jack seems familiar to him. Yeah it’s probably Aaron. If it was Aragorn, he’d be way more familiar to him since it’s his own son. Yeah, he’s all corrupted and whatever and maybe if it’s Aragorn he’s gone so mad he can’t even recognize his own son, but, you know what this seems like the most viable option of it being AAaron.
Anyway, good job everyone. Seeya around!
OK, I don’t have a lot of minor villains in the ROTP series but here is three that I came up with for ToT:
Michael. Acts haughty and thinks he’s better than everyone else. Michael has dirt brown hair that is kneaded into very tight curly knots and has a horribly trimmed goatee. He likes to wear a tie suit. He will occasionally assume something that isn’t true.For example, in TTDOT, he accused Aragorn of keeping Emma away from him. Which is not true. Emma hates him. He’s desperately in love with Emma, who is revolted by him. He hates Aragorn and Aragorn hates him.
Willow. Has black hair usually up in a ponytail, green eyes, and tanned skin. Her implant gives her the ability to go through solid objects. She CANNOT go through people tho. She doesn’t like anyone who gets in her way. she is very mean when provoked.
Camille. (I don’t remember her exact appearance) She has long black hair and brown eyes, and has large black feathered wings sprouting from her back. She usually wears black clothes. Her implant someone malfunctioned and instead of being able to transform into a bird, wings sprouted from her back and are there permanently. Although she works for villains, she is very gentle. She is also very quiet and rarely speaks.
Also Ben, it wasn’t mentioned but the firey creature that saved Josephina and Jaquin was a phoenix. Josephina accidentally summoned it with her powers to protect them. I posted another chapter of TWOTP btw. Cya later!
-SunnyFox57
Hey guys just wanted to share something stupid I did on a server on ark.
So, I was playing PVP at the red obelisk, with a bunch of other players, several of which had fabricated stuff. I only had a wooden bat and an ascendant wooden bow I got from a pursuit. I was losing TERRIBLY. Most of the players were brawling on the platform, right in the middle. So, I decided to come up with plan that I thought would make me win. I quickly crafted a parachute, pulled out my ascendant bow, and jumped of the cliff, floating peacefully toward the red ob platform. Only got a quarter of the way toward the platform when a dude in tek armor jumped out from behind a rock and shot and killed me in midair. I’m such a noob.
A very ashamed MrDemonRealz
Wow, I am hungry now, and hungry for pizza now. Also I just realized that I had a typo in my last post, I didn’t mean don’t, I meant just. Anyway I have been busy writing my story and getting a good plot for it (I am just about at chapter 20. This is going to be a long story from what I can tell from now.). I also have been reading jointed mysteries, and I got to say. I really like it!!!!!! Keep up the awesome work SpecialRaptor!!! Also I have been looking around for the next chapter of the obelisk and HoP and PoP. Also I am still falling off the cliff from the last chapter of the obelisk. Okay, I just wanted to let everyone know I am not dead or gone and that I am going back to reading jointed mysteries!!
-Apex
The Red Pike
Walkers story part Seven
By Jedi
Walker sat on the porch of Siyu's house, once again. He carved his bow, once again. And once again, he was bored. He finished carving his bow, and then set out to hunt something. He killed a couple dodos, has a close encounter with a carno, and destroyed a titanromya swarm. That's when it came. A creature peaked him through the undergrowth. It watched as he harvested the body of a dodo. It walked over and looked up at him. Walker looked back at it. He recognized it as a pego. He shoowed it away, and continued to harvest the meat. It leapt at him and grabbed his bow, then took of running. He had worked on that bow for weeks. He wasn't letting it get stolen. He ran after it, getting slapped on the face by many twigs and bushes. The pego kept running until it slammed face first into a rock. It leapt at him again but he barely managed to shoot it in the leg with his crossbow. It fell to the ground and whimpered. He felt bad. He couldn't leave it to die. And to be honest, well, it looked kind of cute. So he fed it some berries and tamed it. He put it around his shoulder, and began the journey home. I'll make you, Bandito."
*Bandito is Spanish for bandit. I thought it would work for a thief. I only know this because of Google translate.
Break-It, I loved the new chapter!!!! Honestly can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Ben, hope you enjoy it!!! Also forgot to mention that yeah, I released chapter 23 of Ultimus in Electrophorus!!
Spirit Dragon and Cheesecake, Greetings and Salutations!!! Welcome to Achatina!!!! I hope you enjoy your time!!
PastelGothPower, hope you liked them!! And if you got an idea for other creatures. Don’t mind taking suggestions!! Also if you want, check out the fandom page if you want to give further feedback or suggestions!! I think you already know about it, but I don’t know if you do.
To: Wyvernian, MrGhostGamer
From: Ben, & KM
Wyvernian, Chapter 16 of TOP OOS was good stuff! Yeah I already Fandom so I’ll leave it at that.
MGG, long time no see, glad you’re back in the writing game! Just hope that you’ll finish Hope’s Call and Life Before. Ark: Object of Extinction is really good so far and there’s a major improvement in writing between this and Hopes Cry. I’m curious to see why the URE is tatooing “Contestant” on their citizens for this ARK. Very fishy. Ethan seems fun so far. Anyway, I’ll see you around.
To: Break-it, DiploLover
From: Ben, & KM
Break-it, I returned back to TOT, so yeah, just putting that out there to clear up confusion.
DiploLover, Chapter 31 of CON was awesome! I presume now that KJ will team up with Adira, making her forces even stronger than before if she’s ordered the Yutys to go after the five wolves and now the humans with their aerial superiority. It’s going to be tough for the five wolves to defeat Adira with such powerful allies.
From Ben
PrimalApex i think thats really funny, we could totally do that! Then they could be disappointed and get another villain (maybe one from Journey?)
Thinking of it now i do have an idea for an "Omega Titan". It would be like a King Titan with elements from every story, (a medallion from TROTP, super high tech stuff from Ultimus, tentacles of Rockwell from Hopes Cry, etc). What do you guys think? I dont think we should bring this guy in like a few chapters later, maybe some last villain ultimate showdown type thing. I also wouldnt think the Omega Titan is responsible for creating TOT or the obelisks or bringing any of the characters to TOT. It was created because.. the obelisks were tampered with way too much maybe, so it caused WAY too many characters and elements from stories to surge into TOT? Idk well figure it out i think its cool.
Mr.GhostGamer, you have my approval for joining!! I am doing chapter 6 currently, but you can do chapter seven!!!! I can’t wait to see what you do!!!
Oh and for everyone who has been waiting, here is my character list.
Andrew Lang: Born in the middle of the 24th century, Andrew Lang was the son of Hunter and Kim Lang. Two higher officials in Project Genesis. But because of their knowledge of what the Terran Federation was doing, they put their son and his pet dog in Cryostasis when he was 11 to save him from the dangers and pain of the Engrammic Matrix. They were going to awake just before the Genesis Ship left as their Engrammic Matrix’s doubles and place him in the simulation. However due to unknown circumstances, they never did. Andrew woke up in the very distant future (greater than or equal to 700 years later, but still unknown.). His age in TOT will be 23 years old, around the same age as he is in Prologue. His appearance is dirty blonde hair with green hazel eyes, tall with a light build.
Freya, Daughter of Jorgan the Peaceful (Survivor): Born in the 9th century. Freya was a Norse Viking. At the age of nineteen, she went on a trade ship to trade with ally villages. When she returned, she found her entire village was pillaged and destroyed. All who lived there were dead including her family by a warring tribe from the south. A day later, the entire tribe was killed by her hands. Giving her the name Freya the Vindictive. But despite her history and threatening nickname, she is quite the friendly person who is the first one to trust. Her appearance is Blonde hair and blue eyes, with an average height and build. She around the same age as Andrew between 22 and 24 years old.
Sylas Fennec (Survivor): Born in the late first quarter of the 21st century, Sylas Fennec was a computer programmer and an extreme movie buff. He became one of the youngest billionaires of his time after selling one of the most advanced computer program of its time at age 25. In the story he is around 28 years old. His appearance is red curly hair and bluish eyes. He is short with average build.
Erica Stevens (Survivor): Born in an unknown portion of the 24th century. Erica Stevens was a URE employee who worked on the Arks. However little else is known about her as she keeps most of her past a secret. Her appearance is Jet black air with brown eyes, above average height and light build. She seems to be around the same age as Andrew and Freya, around 22 to 24 years old.
LLTCCATOT!!!!
Also I released chapter 7 of Ultimus!!!
U.N.T!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
The Terrible Demise of Tortuga Character List - Story by SunnyFox57
Part 1/4
Summary + Lore:
Tortuga is a cruel city on a remote island with cruel laws and strict law enforcement that do not mind taking away the lives of other human beings. The Petersons are newcomers in this enigmatic town, with an enigmatic past of their own. Each Peterson (excluding the mother) carry their own unique medallion, which gives them a special ability to protect them from harm’s way. The story takes place after the events of ARK, and because of the little technology and elements left over, the world was thrown into an old-school environment with things such as telephones being common place. The island of Tortuga was formed by a volcano known as “El Elemento”, which formed on its own during the time of the ARKs and contained melted element rather than magma.
The “Petersons”:
Aragorn: The father of the Petersons. A fierce, yet protective man of the family, he is cold to strangers whom he does not trust. He is especially protective of his children. He also cares for his wife very much and loves her with all his heart. He wears black all the time. At Tortuga he worked at the docks. He is a good singer, just like his wife, and he started a band with his brother Tom, and a friend of theirs, Cole. His medallion power remained unknown, but he, somehow, did not have a shadow as Michael noted. He has overwhelming strength, as he managed to hold off many peacekeepers before being inevitably apprehended along his wife. He was hanged due to Michael’s decree.
Arianna: The mother of the Petersons. She is very caring and kind to her children. She is much more approving of Emma and Andrew’s romantic tensions, unlike Aragorn initially. She is quite the romantic with Aragorn. She is also an extremely talented singer, just like her husband. Unlike her husband and children, she does not possess a medallion because she married into the family. She was also hanged due to Michael’s decree.
Emma: The main character of TTDOT. The eldest child of the Petersons, she is 19 years of age and is the target of the new mayor of Tortuga’s infatuations, Michael, which leads to many conflicts in the TTDOT. Her medallion power allows her to see events in different times, and in different locations, whether it be through dreams or conscious. Her love interest is Andrew, whom she ends up marrying. She becomes blind at the end of the story, something which she blames on herself for unknown reasons. She is honest and does not hide things she may deem as potentially dangerous. During the British Bombings, she and many other Tortugans hid in Josh Swan’s secret bunker in the sewers.
Jay: Twin of Jack Peterson, 13 years of age. He always wins in chess games against his brother Jack, which means he may be a bit more strategic and cunning than him. Jay is also more favored by the younger children in the Peterson family compared to Jack. He is protective of his older sister Emma, despite his youth. His medallion power allows him to create portals out of thin air to other locations. During the British Bombings, Jay’s power activated, and he escaped Tortuga via his portals.
Jack: Twin of Jay Peterson, 13 years of age. He may not be as smart as his twin but he’s still a good person who cares about his family a lot. He gets embarrassed easily. His medallion power allows him to have high regenerative capabilities, allowing wounds to heal very fast. During the British Bombings, he had been found by British soldiers, who shot at him, mistaking him for a pirate. Luckily, with his medallion power, he managed to stay alive.
Jaquin: The younger brother of the Petersons. Six years old. His medallion power remained unknown. He was presumed dead by Jack during the British Bombings, but an unknown fiery creature had jumped in the way of a bomb that was set to kill him and his sister, Josephina. He and Josephina were taken in by Tom after the demise of Tortuga.
Josephina: The younger sister of the Petersons. Six years old. Her medallion power remained unknown. She was also presumed dead by Jack during the British Bombings, but an unknown fiery creature had jumped in the way of a bomb that was set to kill her and her brother, Jaquin. She and Jaquin were taken in by Tom after the demise of Tortuga, more specifically because she looked exactly like HER (whoever that is).