TO: Break-it, and GitezGood
TO: Break-it, and GitezGood
FROM: Ben
Before I start, please make sure to check out the D0d0dex Stories website. You can search it up on a web browser and going to it will allow you to see Story tips faster than you would on the app. Make sure once you visit the website you refresh the page, change the filter to Newest, and filter creatures to whatever you desire. It will make communication easier.
Hello Break-it and GitezGood, I’m a representative of the Crossover Council (the thing that is responsible for creating The Omega Timeline / TOT). For some information, The Omega Timeline is a crossover collaborative story between seven authors.
Here they are in the order they joined the collab:
Ben (the founder of TOT, author of The Arks: Over Heaven),
SunnyFox57 (author of The Riddles of the Phoenixes series),
Wyvernian (author of Pandora Chronicles series),
PrimalApex (director of TOT, author of Ultimus and non-canon sequel to The Obelisk, Journey),
MrGhostGamer (author of Hope’s Cry),
Sylveevee (author of Queen of Aberration),
and Moon (founder of Achatina Community and author of The Obelisk).
The story is about characters from each of our stories entering a rift within the DDEX space time continuum called the titular Omega Timeline. As the characters meet and interact, shenanigans occur, and problems start brewing between them. At the moment, heroes and villains from all respective stories are in an all-out war. However, there are many story arcs that will occur that dive deeper into other stuff. Some of the things planned are a Zombie Apocalypse story arc, which is planned to happen after the Heroes VS Villains arc, and an Omega Rockwell story arc, which is planned to happen after the aforementioned Zombie Apocalypse arc.
Anyway that’s what it’s about, if you didn’t know. How the collaboration works is one person writes a chapter, then it goes onto the next person, and then the next and the next and it cycles back to the first person. The order of the writing goes based on who joined.
So that means I would write Chapter 1, then Sunny would write Chapter 2, Wyvernian Chapter 3, and so on and so forth.
OK, so we’ve seen your requests to join The Omega Timeline.
So here are the results:
Break-it, you have been granted access to join the Crossover Council and participate in writing The Omega Timeline. You have met all the requirements to join and we are happy to see your work on this project. It will be interesting seeing characters from SOR mingle with other franchise’s characters, especially Rockwell from Hope’s Cry. As the 8th member of the Crossover Council, you will write your chapters after Moon. Try to write your chapters in a fast manner. Your average writing pace is 500 words per chapter (really good by the way). I’m not sure if you use phone or a computer to type but that should equate to around half a week time to finish. Don’t stress out about it though. It takes around two weeks before it cycles back to you. Anyway, you’ll get to write your first chapter of TOT after the Heroes VS Villains arc and once the Zombie Apocalypse arc starts. We’ll give you more information and tell you when you’re good to go once we plan more of it out. Our discussions are on Fandom but we still give info to DDEX CC members. Welcome aboard! Before you leave go to the bottom of this message to check out a questionnaire we have for all joining CC members.
GitezGood, unfortunately, you cannot join the Crossover Council just yet. However this does not mean you are barred permanently. You do not meet the requirements to join just yet. Requirements will be down below this section. Once you reach the requirements you will be allowed to join (probably when the Zombie Apoc arc is).
Here are the requirements:
Your story needs to be at least 3,000 words.
Your characters must have depth or personality.
You must have a consistent writing schedule.
You need to have contributed to Achatina community. This can be feedback on others’ stories and talking. I specifically suggest the former because it proves that you are willing to get to know others and learn about others’ stories rather than just showcase and advertise your own story.
Crossover Council must approve of the person.
You meet condition 5 but you must reach the other conditions…
Your story “The Fleet of Fate” is at 1215 words at the moment. That means you are around 40.5% of the way to your goal. Each of your chapters are around 150 words long. That means youd have to write around 12 more chapters before reaching that goal of 3000. Obviously you can make your chapters longer to reach your goal quicker.
Your writing schedule at the moment seems pretty inconsistent. This condition is put in place only to avoid writers taking forever for their TOT chapter… but if you become more active than youl will meet this condition.
Condition 4 just talk some more contribute more as said.
Finally, Condition 2 is probably the hardest to reach. I don’t want to hurt your feelings but your characters don’t seem to have much depth to them. They are only characterized by their roles / species in the Wyvern world but they only seem to be there to drive the plot. I understand you are new to this but that is why we are here to help you develop and improve your story. Your grammar is good and it’s easy to read however I believe your story could benefit from some character depth and personality (which is what define’s a story’s success). You could explore characters’ inner motivations, morals, ideals, and their beliefs and feelings of one another. Try creating some concepts for your characters and the aforementioned traits. It really helps and will give your characters a lot more spark. You can also explore their personalities with dialogue. I think your story would really benefit from dialogue between characters that don’t necessarily drive the plot. You could have a chapter dedicated to two wyverns talking about their feelings of everything going on.
Anyway that’s all I have. I hope to see you around soon! As you work toward reaching the requirements to join you can also read some of the stories involved in TOT to get a brief understanding of how each of the characters act and the basic plots.
Here are the stories you should read and where they are found:
The Riddles of the Phoenixes (Series) - the first story is called The Terrible Demise of Tortuga it is found in the All ABC filter and starts in Allosaurus. The rest of the stories following it just continue off of it. The rest of the series’ stories are (abbrieviated): Shadow Phoenixes, House of Madness, Dark Phoenixes, War of the Phoenixes, and The Lost World. This series is the second longest series/story to ever exist on the DDEX but pretty fun…
Pandora Chronicles (Series) - the first story is called Heroes of Pandora it is also found in the All ABC filter and starts in Allosaurus. The rest of the stories following it just continue off ot it. The rest of the series’ stories are (abbrievated): Protectors, and Legends. It’s the third longest series on the DDEX.
Ultimus - this story is found in the Aquatics filter ABC but backwards (so start in Tuso). The story length is medium and there aren’t many chapters but still very very good quality. This is an amazing first read.
Hope’s Cry - this story is found in the All ABC filter (excluding bosses) and is the shortest story out of all the CC stories. I highly consider this being one of your first reads as it is only around 25 chapters long.
Queen of Aberration - this story is found exclusively in Shinehorn, however the first chapter is in Basilisk. This is also a medium length story, around the same length as Ultimus. This could be your third read due to its complicated nature.
The Obelisk - This story is found in the Tamables ABC filter. You may have heard of this story before… it is very popular amongst DDEX readers. It’s a pretty long read. Fourth longest story on the DDEX.
Journey - This story is found in the All ABC filter but backwards. It is a non-canon sequel to The Obelisk and should be read after the mentioned story.
Pandora - This story is found in the Breedables ABC filter, and starts in Amargasaurus. It is a prequel to The Obelisk, and is still in the early beginning stages.
Clans - This story is found in the Ridables ABC filter. It is a connected story to The Obelisk and is it its very very early beginning stages.
The Arks: Over Heaven - Yeah pretty much the final boss of stories (i can say that right guys?). Longest story on the DDEX, perhaps of all ARK fanfic ever. I suggest reading this last out of all the other stories. It’s found in the Aerial filter ABC but backwards. Prologue and Chapter 1 are both in Wyvern.
Oh yeah, also, from what your message suggests, you read Chapter 1 of TOT but not the Prologue. Make sure to always check if there are Prologue’s for stories. They are basically Chapter 0’s.
That’s all. Seeya soon GitezGood!
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Ok this is for Break-it:
Which characters will join. Please have 3-5 only. No more than 5 plz
When will they join in their story. Which version is it, Chapter 3 or Chapter 9 etc
Please give brief character personality and facts on your cast thats joining so that those who arent caught up can know.
And while you wait for TOT to catch up to the Zombie Apoc arc you can get yourself caught up with others’ stories and work on your own. Well, seeya!













